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A(2026·无锡滨湖区期中)
丰富多彩的校园生活,藏在课堂思维碰撞出的火花中,融在社团活动各展所长的热忱里,暖在同窗情谊彼此支撑的陪伴里。假设你是阳光中学的李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解你的校园生活。请你根据流程图用英语写一封邮件,描绘你独特的校园生活。
注意事项:1. 邮件内容须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2. 文本框中的提示为限定性内容,省略号部分需自行发挥;3. 词数不少于 90,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;4. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to share my colourful life in Sunshine Middle School with you.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
A(2026·无锡滨湖区期中)
丰富多彩的校园生活,藏在课堂思维碰撞出的火花中,融在社团活动各展所长的热忱里,暖在同窗情谊彼此支撑的陪伴里。假设你是阳光中学的李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解你的校园生活。请你根据流程图用英语写一封邮件,描绘你独特的校园生活。
注意事项:1. 邮件内容须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2. 文本框中的提示为限定性内容,省略号部分需自行发挥;3. 词数不少于 90,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;4. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to share my colourful life in Sunshine Middle School with you.
My best friend is Lin Tao. He has short black hair and big eyes, and he's always kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me.
My favourite lesson is English. We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun.
I'm also in the DIY Club. We make all kinds of things, like paper-cuts and wooden models.
Last month, I made a small bookshelf for my desk, and it was really satisfying.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏流程图中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出校园生活主题;第二步,从好友特征、课程学习、社团活动三个层面展开具体描述;第三步,书写结语,期待对方回复。
[词句积累]
①hesitate to do sth 犹豫做某事 ②act out dialogues 表演对话 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 ④paper-cut 剪纸
⑤Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. (whenever 引导时间状语从句)
⑥We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. (which 引导非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to share my colourful life in Sunshine Middle School with you.
My best friend is Lin Tao. He has short black hair and big eyes, and he's always kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. My favourite lesson is English. We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. I'm also in the DIY Club. We make all kinds of things, like paper-cuts and wooden models. Last month, I made a small bookshelf for my desk, and it was really satisfying.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏流程图中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出校园生活主题;第二步,从好友特征、课程学习、社团活动三个层面展开具体描述;第三步,书写结语,期待对方回复。
[词句积累]
①hesitate to do sth 犹豫做某事 ②act out dialogues 表演对话 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 ④paper-cut 剪纸
⑤Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. (whenever 引导时间状语从句)
⑥We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. (which 引导非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to share my colourful life in Sunshine Middle School with you.
My best friend is Lin Tao. He has short black hair and big eyes, and he's always kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. My favourite lesson is English. We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. I'm also in the DIY Club. We make all kinds of things, like paper-cuts and wooden models. Last month, I made a small bookshelf for my desk, and it was really satisfying.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先明确核心要求：你作为李华要给笔友Mike介绍自己的校园生活，必须完整覆盖流程图给出的三个限定要点，不能缺漏。首先梳理叙事逻辑，按照“身边好友→日常课堂→课后社团”的顺序展开，完全贴合校园生活的叙事逻辑，行文会更自然流畅。第一个模块写最好的朋友：先设定合适的好友姓名，描述对应的外貌特征，点明他的优秀品质，补充一个小的具体事例让人物更鲜活；第二个模块写最喜欢的课程：先点明课程名称，再具体描述课堂上的学习方式，体现这门课的吸引力；第三个模块写最喜欢的社团：按照提示选择DIY Club，补充社团的具体活动，再加一个自己的参与经历，让内容更真实饱满。最后整体以一般现在时为主，保证语句通顺，满足字数要求，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
这道书面表达的规范写作步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：体裁为应用文电子邮件，人称以第一人称为主，核心时态为一般现在时，需要完整覆盖3个指定写作要点，不得遗漏。
2. 要点逐一填充：
① 介绍最好的朋友：设定好友名为林涛，描述他黑短发、大眼睛的外貌特征，点明他善良热心的品质，补充“我学习遇到困难时他总会主动帮忙”的细节，让人物形象更立体。
② 介绍最喜欢的课程：点明最喜欢的课是英语，描述课堂上通过读趣味故事、小组讨论、表演对话的方式学习，用非限制性定语从句说明这类学习模式让课堂生动有趣。
③ 介绍最喜欢的社团：点明加入的是DIY俱乐部，说明社团里会制作各类手工作品比如剪纸、木质模型，补充上个月自己为书桌制作小书架的经历，体现参与活动的成就感。
3. 衔接润色：用自然的逻辑连接词串联三个模块，保证行文连贯，内容总词数符合不少于90词的要求，顺利衔接题目给出的结尾部分。
【答案】
My best friend is Lin Tao. He has short black hair and big eyes, and he's always kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. My favourite lesson is English. We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. I'm also in the DIY Club. We make all kinds of things, like paper-cuts and wooden models. Last month, I made a small bookshelf for my desk, and it was really satisfying.
【知识点】
电子邮件写作，提纲类书面表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于校园生活主题的应用文写作，给定的提示要点清晰明确，框架引导性很强，学生只需要按照指定的三个维度补充合理细节即可完成写作，既考察了学生对日常场景的英语表达能力，也给学生留出了自主发挥的空间，不容易出现严重跑题的情况，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.65
拿到这道写作题首先明确核心要求：你作为李华要给笔友Mike介绍自己的校园生活，必须完整覆盖流程图给出的三个限定要点，不能缺漏。首先梳理叙事逻辑，按照“身边好友→日常课堂→课后社团”的顺序展开，完全贴合校园生活的叙事逻辑，行文会更自然流畅。第一个模块写最好的朋友：先设定合适的好友姓名，描述对应的外貌特征，点明他的优秀品质，补充一个小的具体事例让人物更鲜活；第二个模块写最喜欢的课程：先点明课程名称，再具体描述课堂上的学习方式，体现这门课的吸引力；第三个模块写最喜欢的社团：按照提示选择DIY Club，补充社团的具体活动，再加一个自己的参与经历，让内容更真实饱满。最后整体以一般现在时为主，保证语句通顺，满足字数要求，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
这道书面表达的规范写作步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：体裁为应用文电子邮件，人称以第一人称为主，核心时态为一般现在时，需要完整覆盖3个指定写作要点，不得遗漏。
2. 要点逐一填充：
① 介绍最好的朋友：设定好友名为林涛，描述他黑短发、大眼睛的外貌特征，点明他善良热心的品质，补充“我学习遇到困难时他总会主动帮忙”的细节，让人物形象更立体。
② 介绍最喜欢的课程：点明最喜欢的课是英语，描述课堂上通过读趣味故事、小组讨论、表演对话的方式学习，用非限制性定语从句说明这类学习模式让课堂生动有趣。
③ 介绍最喜欢的社团：点明加入的是DIY俱乐部，说明社团里会制作各类手工作品比如剪纸、木质模型，补充上个月自己为书桌制作小书架的经历，体现参与活动的成就感。
3. 衔接润色：用自然的逻辑连接词串联三个模块，保证行文连贯，内容总词数符合不少于90词的要求，顺利衔接题目给出的结尾部分。
【答案】
My best friend is Lin Tao. He has short black hair and big eyes, and he's always kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my studies, he never hesitates to help me. My favourite lesson is English. We learn it by reading interesting stories, having group discussions and even acting out dialogues in class, which makes the lesson lively and fun. I'm also in the DIY Club. We make all kinds of things, like paper-cuts and wooden models. Last month, I made a small bookshelf for my desk, and it was really satisfying.
【知识点】
电子邮件写作，提纲类书面表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于校园生活主题的应用文写作，给定的提示要点清晰明确，框架引导性很强，学生只需要按照指定的三个维度补充合理细节即可完成写作，既考察了学生对日常场景的英语表达能力，也给学生留出了自主发挥的空间，不容易出现严重跑题的情况，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.65
B(2026·宿迁期末)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 Alex 想了解你的家乡。请根据下列内容提示用英语给他写一封邮件,介绍你的家乡。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数;2. 内容须包括表格中的要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 Alex 想了解你的家乡。请根据下列内容提示用英语给他写一封邮件,介绍你的家乡。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数;2. 内容须包括表格中的要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My hometown is in the north of Jiangsu. It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. There are many beautiful parks and they are home to a lot of different kinds of birds.
The most beautiful season here is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. People can enjoy walking in the golden parks.
People in my hometown are very kind and helpful. They also love nature very much.
They often plant trees and take good care of the parks.
I love my hometown deeply. I am very proud to live in such a wonderful and friendly place. I hope more people can come and enjoy its beauty.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为一封邮件。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家乡的地理位置和整体环境;第二步,描述家乡最美的季节并介绍人们常进行的活动,以及家乡人的特点;第三步,表达个人感受。
[词句积累]
①comfortable 舒适的 ②take good care of 好好照顾
③proud 自豪的
④It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. (with 复合结构作后置定语)
One possible version:
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My hometown is in the north of Jiangsu. It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. There are many beautiful parks and they are home to a lot of different kinds of birds. The most beautiful season here is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. People can enjoy walking in the golden parks.
People in my hometown are very kind and helpful. They also love nature very much. They often plant trees and take good care of the parks.
I love my hometown deeply. I am very proud to live in such a wonderful and friendly place. I hope more people can come and enjoy its beauty.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为一封邮件。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家乡的地理位置和整体环境;第二步,描述家乡最美的季节并介绍人们常进行的活动,以及家乡人的特点;第三步,表达个人感受。
[词句积累]
①comfortable 舒适的 ②take good care of 好好照顾
③proud 自豪的
④It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. (with 复合结构作后置定语)
One possible version:
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My hometown is in the north of Jiangsu. It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. There are many beautiful parks and they are home to a lot of different kinds of birds. The most beautiful season here is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. People can enjoy walking in the golden parks.
People in my hometown are very kind and helpful. They also love nature very much. They often plant trees and take good care of the parks.
I love my hometown deeply. I am very proud to live in such a wonderful and friendly place. I hope more people can come and enjoy its beauty.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英文邮件写作题，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，确定体裁是写给笔友的介绍类邮件，主体时态统一使用一般现在时；第二，逐一梳理表格给出的所有必填要点，避免遗漏：①地理位置：江苏北部；②家乡环境：绿树环绕、分布大量漂亮公园、是鸟类的家园，最美季节为秋天、天气凉爽，此处可补充符合场景的日常活动，比如人们可以在公园散步、秋游赏景等；③家乡的人：乐于助人、热爱自然，可补充合理细节比如主动植树、爱护公共环境等；④个人感受：热爱家乡，可补充比如为家乡自豪、欢迎友人来游玩等内容。之后按照“区位环境→季节特色→居民特点→个人感受”的逻辑排布内容，适当添加衔接表达让行文流畅，控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现真实人名、校名即可。
【解析】
我们可以按照三步完成写作：
步骤1：承接题干给出的开篇内容，先介绍家乡的地理位置和整体生态风貌，把绿树环绕、公园众多、是鸟类栖息地的要点自然融合，可使用with复合结构丰富句式。
步骤2：接着介绍家乡的特色季节：点明秋季是当地最美的季节，天气凉爽舒适，补充人们可以在秋日的公园漫步、欣赏金色秋景的活动；之后介绍家乡居民的特点：点明当地人乐于助人、热爱自然，补充他们主动植树、悉心维护公园环境的细节。
步骤3：最后抒发个人感受，表达对家乡的深厚热爱，补充自己为居住在这里感到自豪、欢迎更多人来游玩的内容，衔接题干给出的结尾即可。
参考行文：
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My hometown is in the north of Jiangsu. It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. There are many beautiful parks and they are home to a lot of different kinds of birds. The most beautiful season here is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. People can enjoy walking in the golden parks.
People in my hometown are very kind and helpful. They also love nature very much. They often plant trees and take good care of the parks.
I love my hometown deeply. I am very proud to live in such a wonderful and friendly place. I hope more people can come and enjoy its beauty.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，提纲类作文，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的介绍类应用文写作题型，所有核心写作要点都已明确给出，仅需要学生结合生活常识补充少量符合逻辑的细节，整体难度不高，主要考察学生的信息整合能力和基础英文表达能力，写作时注意做到要点全覆盖、语句衔接自然，避开真实个人信息即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提纲类英文邮件写作题，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，确定体裁是写给笔友的介绍类邮件，主体时态统一使用一般现在时；第二，逐一梳理表格给出的所有必填要点，避免遗漏：①地理位置：江苏北部；②家乡环境：绿树环绕、分布大量漂亮公园、是鸟类的家园，最美季节为秋天、天气凉爽，此处可补充符合场景的日常活动，比如人们可以在公园散步、秋游赏景等；③家乡的人：乐于助人、热爱自然，可补充合理细节比如主动植树、爱护公共环境等；④个人感受：热爱家乡，可补充比如为家乡自豪、欢迎友人来游玩等内容。之后按照“区位环境→季节特色→居民特点→个人感受”的逻辑排布内容，适当添加衔接表达让行文流畅，控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现真实人名、校名即可。
【解析】
我们可以按照三步完成写作：
步骤1：承接题干给出的开篇内容，先介绍家乡的地理位置和整体生态风貌，把绿树环绕、公园众多、是鸟类栖息地的要点自然融合，可使用with复合结构丰富句式。
步骤2：接着介绍家乡的特色季节：点明秋季是当地最美的季节，天气凉爽舒适，补充人们可以在秋日的公园漫步、欣赏金色秋景的活动；之后介绍家乡居民的特点：点明当地人乐于助人、热爱自然，补充他们主动植树、悉心维护公园环境的细节。
步骤3：最后抒发个人感受，表达对家乡的深厚热爱，补充自己为居住在这里感到自豪、欢迎更多人来游玩的内容，衔接题干给出的结尾即可。
参考行文：
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I know you want to learn about my hometown. I'm glad to introduce it to you.
My hometown is in the north of Jiangsu. It is a beautiful place with green trees all around. There are many beautiful parks and they are home to a lot of different kinds of birds. The most beautiful season here is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. People can enjoy walking in the golden parks.
People in my hometown are very kind and helpful. They also love nature very much. They often plant trees and take good care of the parks.
I love my hometown deeply. I am very proud to live in such a wonderful and friendly place. I hope more people can come and enjoy its beauty.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，提纲类作文，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的介绍类应用文写作题型，所有核心写作要点都已明确给出，仅需要学生结合生活常识补充少量符合逻辑的细节，整体难度不高，主要考察学生的信息整合能力和基础英文表达能力，写作时注意做到要点全覆盖、语句衔接自然，避开真实个人信息即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
