2026年课时提优计划作业本八年级英语上册译林版连云港专版第38页答案
九、书面表达
假设你的学校正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的英语作文比赛,请你根据下表内容写一篇短文参赛。

注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My School Life
My school life is wonderful.
There are lots of after-school activities. I can play basketball with my classmates. We have lots of fun.
My favourite teacher is Miss Wang. She is humorous and often tells jokes. She is patient enough to help us with problems. Tom is my best friend. He is crazy about DIY and likes making model planes. Travelling is one of his hobbies. He often shows his photos on the internet. We all enjoy them very much.
I feel very happy to study in a school like this. I love my colourful school life.

I hope my school will be better and better in the future.

答案

One possible version:
My School Life
My school life is wonderful. There are lots of after-school activities. I can play basketball with my classmates. We have lots of fun.
My favourite teacher is Miss Wang. She is humorous and often tells jokes. She is patient enough to help us with problems. Tom is my best friend. He is crazy about DIY and likes making model planes. Travelling is one of his hobbies. He often shows his photos on the internet. We all enjoy them very much.
I feel very happy to study in a school like this. I love my colourful school life.
I hope my school will be better and better in the future.

解析

【分析】本题要求以“My School Life”为主题写英语短文参赛,需围绕给定的四个核心要点(学校的课外活动、最喜欢的老师、最好的朋友、自身感受)展开,结合已给的开头和结尾,适当补充细节使内容连贯,控制词数在80左右,同时避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息。写作时应先介绍学校的课后活动情况,再描述最喜欢的老师的特点,接着介绍最好的朋友的爱好,最后表达自己的感受,确保逻辑清晰、语句通顺。
【解析】1. 承接开头,介绍学校的课外活动,如“有很多课后活动,我常和同学打篮球,很开心”;2. 描述最喜欢的老师,体现其幽默、有耐心的特点,比如“王老师很幽默,常讲笑话,耐心帮我们解决问题”;3. 介绍最好的朋友,提及他对DIY的热爱和旅行爱好,如“Tom痴迷DIY,喜欢做模型飞机,还喜欢旅行分享照片”;4. 表达自身感受,呼应主题,最后连接已给的结尾,使文章完整连贯。
【答案】My School Life
My school life is wonderful. There are lots of after-school activities. I can play basketball with my classmates. We have lots of fun.
My favourite teacher is Miss Wang. She is humorous and often tells jokes. She is patient enough to help us with problems. Tom is my best friend. He is crazy about DIY and likes making model planes. Travelling is one of his hobbies. He often shows his photos on the internet. We all enjoy them very much.
I feel very happy to study in a school like this. I love my colourful school life.
I hope my school will be better and better in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题,全面覆盖了题目要求的所有要点,内容连贯自然,语言通顺流畅,适当补充细节让文章更生动,符合参赛作文的要求。
【难度系数】0.5