典例观摩
你听说过"掩耳盗铃"的故事吗?这是
中国古代一个经典的故事。请按照以下提
示写一篇英语作文。
内容提示:
1.很久以前,村子里有一个小偷。
2.有一天,他发现邻居家的门上有一
个漂亮的铃铛。他非常想要它,所以他决
定偷那个铃铛。但当他碰到铃铛时,铃铛
响了。小偷想了几天,终于想出了一个好
主意。
3.那天晚上,他用手捂住耳朵,试图偷
走铃铛。他太高兴了,再也听不见铃铛响
了。但附近的人都清楚地听到了铃铛的
响声。
4.他们跑向小偷,最后抓住了他。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,
不计入总词数)。
Once upon a time, there was a thief
(贼) in a village.
From the story we should know that
one person should always do something
good.
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Once upon a time, there was a thief in
a village. One day, he found that there was
a beautiful bell on the door of his neighbour's
house. He wanted to get it, so he decided
to steal the bell. At first, when he touched
it, it rang. The thief thought about it for a
few days and finally thought of a wise idea.
That night, he covered his ears with his
hands and tried to steal the bell. He was
happy because he couldn't hear the bell any
more. But people nearby heard the bell
clearly. They ran to the thief and caught
him in the end.
From the story we should know that
one person should always do something
good.

One day, he found that there was a beautiful bell on the door of his neighbour's house. He wanted to get it, so he decided to steal the bell. At first, when he touched it, it rang. The thief thought about it for a few days and finally thought of a wise idea. That night, he covered his ears with his hands and tried to steal the bell. He was happy because he couldn't hear the bell any more. But people nearby heard the bell clearly. They ran to the thief and caught him in the end.

【分析】
本题要求根据“掩耳盗铃”的故事写英语作文，需承接给定开头，覆盖所有内容提示，运用单元所学词汇，采用一般过去时，确保要点完整、语句通顺，最后衔接给定结尾。解题思路为：先承接开头交代的“很久以前村里有个小偷”，依次叙述发现铃铛、想偷铃铛时碰响、想出捂耳朵的办法、实施偷铃铛的行为、被附近人抓住的过程，最后衔接结尾点明道理。
【解析】
需按照一般过去时的时态，结合给定内容提示，运用单元所学词汇完成写作：
1. 承接开头后，先写小偷发现邻居门上的漂亮铃铛，想要并决定偷它；
2. 接着写小偷碰铃铛时铃铛响了，思考几天后想出办法；
3. 再写小偷捂耳朵偷铃铛，自以为听不到铃铛响，却被附近人听到；
4. 最后写人们抓住小偷，衔接给定结尾。
具体内容如下：
One day, he found that there was a beautiful bell on the door of his neighbour's house. He wanted to get it, so he decided to steal the bell. At first, when he touched it, it rang. The thief thought about it for a few days and finally thought of a wise idea. That night, he covered his ears with his hands and tried to steal the bell. He was happy because he couldn't hear the bell any more. But people nearby heard the bell clearly. They ran to the thief and caught him in the end.
【答案】
One day, he found that there was a beautiful bell on the door of his neighbour's house. He wanted to get it, so he decided to steal the bell. At first, when he touched it, it rang. The thief thought about it for a few days and finally thought of a wise idea. That night, he covered his ears with his hands and tried to steal the bell. He was happy because he couldn't hear the bell any more. But people nearby heard the bell clearly. They ran to the thief and caught him in the end.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般过去时；词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整叙述了“掩耳盗铃”的故事，覆盖所有内容提示，运用了单元所学的decided、at first等词汇，时态正确，语句通顺，符合词数要求，体现了扎实的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6