实战演练
假设你叫刘明,你的笔友Tony想看动
画片《哪吒传奇》,他特别想了解哪吒,想让
你给他介绍一下。请根据下列信息写一封
电子邮件。
要点:
1.哪吒:中国神话人物(mythological
figure)之一;
2.父亲:李靖,掌管陈塘关(command
the garrison at Chentang Pass);
3.故事发生在商朝(the Shang Dynasty),
主要人物是纣王(King Zhou)、姬发、姜子
牙等。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,
不计入总词数)。
Dear Tony,
I'm very happy to introduce Nezha to
you. He is one of the Chinese mythological
figures.
Yours,
Liu Ming

【高分范文】
Dear Tony,
I'm very happy to introduce Nezha to you. He is
one of the Chinese mythological figures. He was a
brave child. Nezha was the third son of Li Jing, an
officer who commanded the garrison at Chentang
Pass. The story happened in the Shang Dynasty. In
the cartoon, you can see King Zhou, Ji Fa, Jiang Ziya
and so on. Nezha and his father joined the war to fight
against King Zhou. Finally, they won the war. They
were regarded as heroes. By the way, you can also see
Nezha in Journey to the West. It is interesting too.
I believe you'll enjoy it.
Yours,
Liu Ming

【分析】
解题思路：首先承接开头已有的内容，按题目给出的三个核心要点依次展开：1. 补充哪吒的父亲李靖的身份（掌管陈塘关）；2. 说明故事发生的时代背景（商朝）；3. 列出故事中的其他主要人物（纣王、姬发、姜子牙）；再适当添加合理情节（如哪吒的勇敢、对抗纣王、成为英雄），最后表达对Tony的推荐，确保所有要点覆盖，词数符合要求，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 衔接开头，介绍哪吒的父亲Li Jing，说明其掌管陈塘关的身份；2. 点明故事发生在商朝，列举其他主要人物；3. 适当补充情节（如哪吒与父亲对抗纣王，成为英雄）；4. 结尾表达对Tony的期待，确保词数80左右，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
I'm very happy to introduce Nezha to you. He is one of the Chinese mythological figures. He was a brave child. Nezha was the third son of Li Jing, an officer who commanded the garrison at Chentang Pass. The story happened in the Shang Dynasty. In the cartoon, you can see King Zhou, Ji Fa, Jiang Ziya and so on. Nezha and his father joined the war to fight against King Zhou. Finally, they won the war. They were regarded as heroes. By the way, you can also see Nezha in Journey to the West. It is interesting too.
I believe you'll enjoy it.
Yours,
Liu Ming
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、神话人物介绍、历史背景英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，适当添加了合理情节丰富内容，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，结构清晰，是一篇优秀的参考范文，适合学生学习这类介绍性邮件的写作方法。
【难度系数】
0.6