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学校英语社团将举办“名人故事分享会”。请你写一篇演讲稿，分享一位你最敬佩的名人，讲一个他/她的真实故事，并说说这个故事对你的学习或生活产生了什么影响。字数不少于80。
答案
Great power I learn from Ada Lovelace
Dear teachers and friends,
Today, I'm glad to share my thoughts on my role model at our Great Mind Sharing Meeting.
The person who gives me great power is Ada Lovelace, the world's first computer programmer.
In her time, most people thought calculating machines were only for simple maths. However, Ada had a creative mind. She studied Babbage's Analytical Engine carefully, translated related papers and added detailed notes. She even created the earliest computer algorithm, which changed people's ideas about calculating machines.
From her, I learn the power of creativity and independent thinking. She never followed conventional ideas and dared to explore new possibilities.
She inspires me a lot. I try to think independently and critically, and explore new study methods. I will carry forward this spirit and keep improving myself.
Thank you for listening!
Dear teachers and friends,
Today, I'm glad to share my thoughts on my role model at our Great Mind Sharing Meeting.
The person who gives me great power is Ada Lovelace, the world's first computer programmer.
In her time, most people thought calculating machines were only for simple maths. However, Ada had a creative mind. She studied Babbage's Analytical Engine carefully, translated related papers and added detailed notes. She even created the earliest computer algorithm, which changed people's ideas about calculating machines.
From her, I learn the power of creativity and independent thinking. She never followed conventional ideas and dared to explore new possibilities.
She inspires me a lot. I try to think independently and critically, and explore new study methods. I will carry forward this spirit and keep improving myself.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：为学校英语社团的“名人故事分享会”写一篇英语演讲稿，需包含三部分核心内容：1. 介绍自己敬佩的真实名人；2. 讲述该名人的真实故事；3. 说明故事对自己学习或生活的影响，同时要符合演讲稿格式（称呼、问候、正文、致谢），字数不少于80词。思考时先选取事迹清晰、适合分享的名人（如世界首位计算机程序员Ada Lovelace），再梳理其核心事迹（研究分析机、创作最早计算机算法），最后结合自身学习谈启发，确保内容贴合要求。
【解析】按照演讲稿的规范结构，依次完成：开头以“Dear teachers and friends”问候并点明分享主题；介绍Ada Lovelace的身份（世界首位计算机程序员）；讲述其突破常规认知，研究巴贝奇分析机、翻译论文并创作最早计算机算法的真实故事；阐述该故事让自己学会独立思考、敢于创新，进而改进学习方法的影响；结尾致谢，内容完整，符合字数要求。
【答案】Great power I learn from Ada Lovelace
Dear teachers and friends,
Today, I'm glad to share my thoughts on my role model at our Great Mind Sharing Meeting.
The person who gives me great power is Ada Lovelace, the world's first computer programmer.
In her time, most people thought calculating machines were only for simple maths. However, Ada had a creative mind. She studied Babbage's Analytical Engine carefully, translated related papers and added detailed notes. She even created the earliest computer algorithm, which changed people's ideas about calculating machines.
From her, I learn the power of creativity and independent thinking. She never followed conventional ideas and dared to explore new possibilities.
She inspires me a lot. I try to think independently and critically, and explore new study methods. I will carry forward this spirit and keep improving myself.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、名人素材运用
【点评】该演讲稿严格遵循任务要求，格式规范，选取真实名人故事，清晰阐述了故事对自身的积极影响，语言流畅自然，符合分享会的语境，是一篇合格的演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照演讲稿的规范结构，依次完成：开头以“Dear teachers and friends”问候并点明分享主题；介绍Ada Lovelace的身份（世界首位计算机程序员）；讲述其突破常规认知，研究巴贝奇分析机、翻译论文并创作最早计算机算法的真实故事；阐述该故事让自己学会独立思考、敢于创新，进而改进学习方法的影响；结尾致谢，内容完整，符合字数要求。
【答案】Great power I learn from Ada Lovelace
Dear teachers and friends,
Today, I'm glad to share my thoughts on my role model at our Great Mind Sharing Meeting.
The person who gives me great power is Ada Lovelace, the world's first computer programmer.
In her time, most people thought calculating machines were only for simple maths. However, Ada had a creative mind. She studied Babbage's Analytical Engine carefully, translated related papers and added detailed notes. She even created the earliest computer algorithm, which changed people's ideas about calculating machines.
From her, I learn the power of creativity and independent thinking. She never followed conventional ideas and dared to explore new possibilities.
She inspires me a lot. I try to think independently and critically, and explore new study methods. I will carry forward this spirit and keep improving myself.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、名人素材运用
【点评】该演讲稿严格遵循任务要求，格式规范，选取真实名人故事，清晰阐述了故事对自身的积极影响，语言流畅自然，符合分享会的语境，是一篇合格的演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
