二、书面表达

假如你是张华,你的学校有多个学生社团,其中你最想加入 “湿地保护小分队 (Wetland Protection Squad )” ,请你给这个学生社团写一封申请信,不少于80词。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1. 我是阳光中学八年级的学生,热爱地理和生物学科;
2. 我对自然感兴趣,也了解湿地的重要性和它目前面临的问题 ( 各自拟至少两点 );
3. 我想成为小分队的一员,因为我可以……
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
假如你是张华,你的学校有多个学生社团,其中你最想加入 “湿地保护小分队 (Wetland Protection Squad )” ,请你给这个学生社团写一封申请信,不少于80词。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:1. 我是阳光中学八年级的学生,热爱地理和生物学科;
2. 我对自然感兴趣,也了解湿地的重要性和它目前面临的问题 ( 各自拟至少两点 );
3. 我想成为小分队的一员,因为我可以……
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad.
I’m a Grade 8 student. I love Geography and Biology.
I’m interested in nature and I know the importance of wetlands. They are home to many plants and animals.
They can also help protect the environment. But now wetlands are in trouble.
Some are badly polluted. The ecosystem of some wetlands is broken because of overfishing.
I want to join your club because I can help protect wetlands by telling more people about their importance.
I can also help clean up wetlands.
I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案
Sample writing:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad. I’m a Grade 8 student. I love Geography and Biology.
I’m interested in nature and I know the importance of wetlands. They are home to many plants and animals. They can also help protect the environment. But now wetlands are in trouble. Some are badly polluted. The ecosystem of some wetlands is broken because of overfishing. I want to join your club because I can help protect wetlands by telling more people about their importance. I can also help clean up wetlands. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad. I’m a Grade 8 student. I love Geography and Biology.
I’m interested in nature and I know the importance of wetlands. They are home to many plants and animals. They can also help protect the environment. But now wetlands are in trouble. Some are badly polluted. The ecosystem of some wetlands is broken because of overfishing. I want to join your club because I can help protect wetlands by telling more people about their importance. I can also help clean up wetlands. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
解析
【分析】
首先明确申请信的写作框架,开头已给出,需补充正文内容:第一步,介绍自身身份(阳光中学八年级学生)及爱好(热爱地理、生物),对应要点1;第二步,说明对自然的兴趣,阐述湿地的2个重要性(动植物家园、保护环境),以及湿地面临的2个问题(严重污染、过度捕捞破坏生态),对应要点2;第三步,说明加入小分队的原因(宣传湿地重要性、清理湿地),对应要点3;最后确保内容连贯、符合字数要求,语气正式礼貌。
【解析】
按照申请信的正式格式,结合给定要点组织语言:先介绍自身基本情况,再说明对湿地的认知(重要性与现存问题),最后表达加入意愿及可贡献的行动,形成完整的申请内容,满足不少于80词的要求。
【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad. I’m a Grade 8 student. I love Geography and Biology.
I’m interested in nature and I know the importance of wetlands. They are home to many plants and animals. They can also help protect the environment. But now wetlands are in trouble. Some are badly polluted. The ecosystem of some wetlands is broken because of overfishing. I want to join your club because I can help protect wetlands by telling more people about their importance. I can also help clean up wetlands. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖所有题目要点,逻辑清晰,语言通顺,符合申请信的正式语气,准确传达了申请人的意愿与能力,是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确申请信的写作框架,开头已给出,需补充正文内容:第一步,介绍自身身份(阳光中学八年级学生)及爱好(热爱地理、生物),对应要点1;第二步,说明对自然的兴趣,阐述湿地的2个重要性(动植物家园、保护环境),以及湿地面临的2个问题(严重污染、过度捕捞破坏生态),对应要点2;第三步,说明加入小分队的原因(宣传湿地重要性、清理湿地),对应要点3;最后确保内容连贯、符合字数要求,语气正式礼貌。
【解析】
按照申请信的正式格式,结合给定要点组织语言:先介绍自身基本情况,再说明对湿地的认知(重要性与现存问题),最后表达加入意愿及可贡献的行动,形成完整的申请内容,满足不少于80词的要求。
【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to become a member of the Wetland Protection Squad. I’m a Grade 8 student. I love Geography and Biology.
I’m interested in nature and I know the importance of wetlands. They are home to many plants and animals. They can also help protect the environment. But now wetlands are in trouble. Some are badly polluted. The ecosystem of some wetlands is broken because of overfishing. I want to join your club because I can help protect wetlands by telling more people about their importance. I can also help clean up wetlands. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖所有题目要点,逻辑清晰,语言通顺,符合申请信的正式语气,准确传达了申请人的意愿与能力,是符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
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