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森林是地球的重要生态系统，但是近年来滥砍滥伐、森林火灾等问题日益严重。现在某英语杂志社发起以“Protect Our Forests”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
Protect Our Forests
森林是地球的重要生态系统，但是近年来滥砍滥伐、森林火灾等问题日益严重。现在某英语杂志社发起以“Protect Our Forests”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
Protect Our Forests
答案
Protect Our Forests
Forests are the "lungs" of the earth and play an important role in our planet. They help protect the climate by taking in carbon dioxide and producing oxygen. Besides, they are home to millions of wildlife.
However, human activities are damaging the forests. Cutting down trees leads to serious problems like floods. And people sometimes leave rubbish in the forests and it may cause pollution. All these will harm plants and kill animals.
We must take action before it gets worse. First, the government should make laws to prevent people cutting down trees carelessly. Second, people shouldn't leave rubbish in the forests. Each of us can take some small steps to save the forests. Let's work together!
Forests are the "lungs" of the earth and play an important role in our planet. They help protect the climate by taking in carbon dioxide and producing oxygen. Besides, they are home to millions of wildlife.
However, human activities are damaging the forests. Cutting down trees leads to serious problems like floods. And people sometimes leave rubbish in the forests and it may cause pollution. All these will harm plants and kill animals.
We must take action before it gets worse. First, the government should make laws to prevent people cutting down trees carelessly. Second, people shouldn't leave rubbish in the forests. Each of us can take some small steps to save the forests. Let's work together!
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，主题为“Protect Our Forests”，需结合给定插图的三个核心模块（森林的重要性、面临的问题、应对行动）完成写作。解题思路为：1. 搭建清晰的文章结构，分为三部分：开篇点题→阐述森林的重要性（对应插图中climate、wildlife等要点）→说明森林面临的问题（对应cutting down trees、pollution等）→提出具体行动；2. 控制词数在100词左右，使用准确通顺的英语表达，覆盖所有要求要点，确保逻辑连贯。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明森林的重要性，将其比作地球的“lungs”，说明其调节气候（吸收二氧化碳、产生氧气）和作为野生动物栖息地的作用；2. 转折引出森林面临的问题：滥砍滥伐引发洪水等灾害，人类遗留垃圾造成污染；3. 提出可行行动：政府制定法律禁止乱砍滥伐，个人不随意丢弃垃圾，呼吁共同保护；4. 调整语句使内容连贯，词数符合要求，完成短文。
【答案】Protect Our Forests
Forests are the "lungs" of the earth and play an important role in our planet. They help protect the climate by taking in carbon dioxide and producing oxygen. Besides, they are home to millions of wildlife.
However, human activities are damaging the forests. Cutting down trees leads to serious problems like floods. And people sometimes leave rubbish in the forests and it may cause pollution. All these will harm plants and kill animals.
We must take action before it gets worse. First, the government should make laws to prevent people cutting down trees carelessly. Second, people shouldn't leave rubbish in the forests. Each of us can take some small steps to save the forests. Let's work together!
【知识点】英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】本题围绕森林保护这一环保主题，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求结合给定要点完成短文，结构清晰，贴近学生生活，能有效检测学生的语言输出与话题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明森林的重要性，将其比作地球的“lungs”，说明其调节气候（吸收二氧化碳、产生氧气）和作为野生动物栖息地的作用；2. 转折引出森林面临的问题：滥砍滥伐引发洪水等灾害，人类遗留垃圾造成污染；3. 提出可行行动：政府制定法律禁止乱砍滥伐，个人不随意丢弃垃圾，呼吁共同保护；4. 调整语句使内容连贯，词数符合要求，完成短文。
【答案】Protect Our Forests
Forests are the "lungs" of the earth and play an important role in our planet. They help protect the climate by taking in carbon dioxide and producing oxygen. Besides, they are home to millions of wildlife.
However, human activities are damaging the forests. Cutting down trees leads to serious problems like floods. And people sometimes leave rubbish in the forests and it may cause pollution. All these will harm plants and kill animals.
We must take action before it gets worse. First, the government should make laws to prevent people cutting down trees carelessly. Second, people shouldn't leave rubbish in the forests. Each of us can take some small steps to save the forests. Let's work together!
【知识点】英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】本题围绕森林保护这一环保主题，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求结合给定要点完成短文，结构清晰，贴近学生生活，能有效检测学生的语言输出与话题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
