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你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“Friends Need to Understand Each Other”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向广播站投稿。
| Experience | 1. Asked her to play basketball 2. She didn't show up |
| Feelings | 1. Understand each other 2.... |
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
|
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，引出下文经历 → (1) Getting along well with our friends... (2) Here is one of my experiences.
2. 描述“我们”之间的一次争执 → (1)
e, I asked her to... she didn't show up. (2)... explained to me...
3. 结尾表达“我”的感悟 → Friends should understand...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句: 1. Everyone should get along well with others. 每个人都应该和他人融洽相处。
2. There are always so many people around me, so... 总有很多人在我身边，所以……
中间句: 1. It is common that sometimes we have social problems with other people. 有时我们和他人有些社交矛盾是很正常的。2. The most important thing is how to solve these problems. 最重要的是怎样解决这些问题。
结尾句: 1. You can learn a lot from a good relationship. 从一段良好的关系中你能学到很多。2. It is easy to see how kindness encourages kindness. 很容易能看出善意是如何促进善意的。
谚语积累:1. A near neighbour is better than a distant cousin. 远亲不如近邻。
【美文欣赏】
As we all know, a true friend can reach out to us and touch our hearts. Getting along well with our friends can help us grow better. However, sometimes we may argue over something with them. Here is one of my experiences.
My best friend is Tina. We often play basketball on Saturdays. Once, I asked her to play basketball and she said yes, but she didn't show up. I was so angry that I argued with her on the phone. I couldn't understand why she didn't want to come and didn't tell me. The next day, she came to my home and explained to me that she was sick. I really regretted what I did. Finally, I said sorry to her and we were good again.
Friends should understand each other. Only in this way can our friendship last long. With friends around us, we are sure to enjoy a happier life.
小试牛刀
假如你是李华，你校外语专栏邀请你以“A Story Between My Neighbour and Me”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。请你根据下表内容描述一次你与邻居之间的经历。
| What happened between you and your neighbour? | 1. I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys 2. My neighbour invited me to her house... |
| How did you feel? | 1. Thankful 2.... |
| What do you learn from it? | 1. Try our best to help them 2.... |
【要求】(1) 须包含上表所有要点，可适当发挥；(2) 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名；(3) 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“Friends Need to Understand Each Other”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向广播站投稿。
| Experience | 1. Asked her to play basketball 2. She didn't show up |
| Feelings | 1. Understand each other 2.... |
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
|
人际交往
| 第一人称和第三人称
| 一般过去时
|【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，引出下文经历 → (1) Getting along well with our friends... (2) Here is one of my experiences.
2. 描述“我们”之间的一次争执 → (1)
e, I asked her to... she didn't show up. (2)... explained to me...3. 结尾表达“我”的感悟 → Friends should understand...
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句: 1. Everyone should get along well with others. 每个人都应该和他人融洽相处。
2. There are always so many people around me, so... 总有很多人在我身边，所以……
中间句: 1. It is common that sometimes we have social problems with other people. 有时我们和他人有些社交矛盾是很正常的。2. The most important thing is how to solve these problems. 最重要的是怎样解决这些问题。
结尾句: 1. You can learn a lot from a good relationship. 从一段良好的关系中你能学到很多。2. It is easy to see how kindness encourages kindness. 很容易能看出善意是如何促进善意的。
谚语积累:1. A near neighbour is better than a distant cousin. 远亲不如近邻。
【美文欣赏】
As we all know, a true friend can reach out to us and touch our hearts. Getting along well with our friends can help us grow better. However, sometimes we may argue over something with them. Here is one of my experiences.
My best friend is Tina. We often play basketball on Saturdays. Once, I asked her to play basketball and she said yes, but she didn't show up. I was so angry that I argued with her on the phone. I couldn't understand why she didn't want to come and didn't tell me. The next day, she came to my home and explained to me that she was sick. I really regretted what I did. Finally, I said sorry to her and we were good again.
Friends should understand each other. Only in this way can our friendship last long. With friends around us, we are sure to enjoy a happier life.
小试牛刀
假如你是李华，你校外语专栏邀请你以“A Story Between My Neighbour and Me”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。请你根据下表内容描述一次你与邻居之间的经历。
| What happened between you and your neighbour? | 1. I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys 2. My neighbour invited me to her house... |
| How did you feel? | 1. Thankful 2.... |
| What do you learn from it? | 1. Try our best to help them 2.... |
【要求】(1) 须包含上表所有要点，可适当发挥；(2) 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名；(3) 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
Last Friday, when I reached home, I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys. What was worse, my mother wasn't in. At that time, my neighbour, Aunt Li, passed by and asked me what happened. Then she invited me to her house to wait and offered me a delicious meal. I felt so thankful that I made her some cookies later. Since then, my family and I have had a good relationship with her.
As far as I am concerned, kindness can encourage more kindness. Whenever our neighbours are in need, we should try our best to help them. All in all, we should get on well with everyone.(共 112 词)
答案
【审题要领】
人际交往;第一人称和第三人称;一般过去时
【小试牛刀】
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
Last Friday, when I reached home, I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys. What was worse, my mother wasn't in. At that time, my neighbour, Aunt Li, passed by and asked me what happened. Then she invited me to her house to wait and offered me a delicious meal. I felt so thankful that I made her some cookies later. Since then, my family and I have had a good relationship with her.
As far as I am concerned, kindness can encourage more kindness. Whenever our neighbours are in need, we should try our best to help them. All in all, we should get on well with everyone.(共 112 词)
人际交往;第一人称和第三人称;一般过去时
【小试牛刀】
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
Last Friday, when I reached home, I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys. What was worse, my mother wasn't in. At that time, my neighbour, Aunt Li, passed by and asked me what happened. Then she invited me to her house to wait and offered me a delicious meal. I felt so thankful that I made her some cookies later. Since then, my family and I have had a good relationship with her.
As far as I am concerned, kindness can encourage more kindness. Whenever our neighbours are in need, we should try our best to help them. All in all, we should get on well with everyone.(共 112 词)
解析
【分析】
首先审题确定写作主题为“我与邻居的故事”，人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；接着梳理题目要求的所有要点：我丢钥匙无法进门、妈妈不在家，邻居邀请我去她家，我的感激之情，以及学到的要帮助邻居、传递善意的道理；最后按“开头引入→叙述经历→表达感受与感悟”的逻辑组织语言，确保包含所有要点且语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确主题为邻里间的记叙文，人称第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，符合题目要求。
2. 整合要点：将表格内容转化为具体语句：①上周五我丢了钥匙进不了家，妈妈不在；②邻居李阿姨邀请我去她家并提供食物；③我很感激，后来做了饼干回报；④感悟要帮助有需要的邻居，善意能传递。
3. 连句成篇：结合已给开头，按逻辑串联内容，控制词数，确保语法正确、要点齐全。
【答案】
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
Last Friday, when I reached home, I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys. What was worse, my mother wasn't in. At that time, my neighbour, Aunt Li, passed by and asked me what happened. Then she invited me to her house to wait and offered me a delicious meal. I felt so thankful that I made her some cookies later. Since then, my family and I have had a good relationship with her.
As far as I am concerned, kindness can encourage more kindness. Whenever our neighbours are in need, we should try our best to help them. All in all, we should get on well with everyone.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，要点整合，时态运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作题，考查学生的审题、要点整合及书面表达能力，要求围绕给定的邻里经历展开写作，需准确运用时态，涵盖所有要求要点，适当补充细节使内容完整，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题确定写作主题为“我与邻居的故事”，人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；接着梳理题目要求的所有要点：我丢钥匙无法进门、妈妈不在家，邻居邀请我去她家，我的感激之情，以及学到的要帮助邻居、传递善意的道理；最后按“开头引入→叙述经历→表达感受与感悟”的逻辑组织语言，确保包含所有要点且语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确主题为邻里间的记叙文，人称第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，符合题目要求。
2. 整合要点：将表格内容转化为具体语句：①上周五我丢了钥匙进不了家，妈妈不在；②邻居李阿姨邀请我去她家并提供食物；③我很感激，后来做了饼干回报；④感悟要帮助有需要的邻居，善意能传递。
3. 连句成篇：结合已给开头，按逻辑串联内容，控制词数，确保语法正确、要点齐全。
【答案】
A Story Between My Neighbour and Me
Having a good relationship with others is very important.
Last Friday, when I reached home, I couldn't get into my house because I lost my keys. What was worse, my mother wasn't in. At that time, my neighbour, Aunt Li, passed by and asked me what happened. Then she invited me to her house to wait and offered me a delicious meal. I felt so thankful that I made her some cookies later. Since then, my family and I have had a good relationship with her.
As far as I am concerned, kindness can encourage more kindness. Whenever our neighbours are in need, we should try our best to help them. All in all, we should get on well with everyone.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，要点整合，时态运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作题，考查学生的审题、要点整合及书面表达能力，要求围绕给定的邻里经历展开写作，需准确运用时态，涵盖所有要求要点，适当补充细节使内容完整，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
