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俗话说：“饮食贵有节，运动贵有恒。”作为一名青少年，你是如何通过饮食和运动来保持健康的呢？请根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. What foods and sports do you like?
2. How often do you exercise to keep fit?
3. What do you think of foods and sports?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Everyone wants to keep fit.
俗话说：“饮食贵有节，运动贵有恒。”作为一名青少年，你是如何通过饮食和运动来保持健康的呢？请根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. What foods and sports do you like?
2. How often do you exercise to keep fit?
3. What do you think of foods and sports?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Everyone wants to keep fit.
答案
One possible version:
I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.
I eat different kinds of foods every day. But I like rice with different meat and vegetables best. I think healthy foods can make me strong and study well. I hardly ever eat fast food. Besides, I do a lot of exercise, such as jogging, swimming and playing basketball. My favourite sport is basketball. I play it twice a week with my friends.
I believe that eating well and exercising often play an important part in keeping fit. So I hope that everyone can eat well and do enough exercise to keep fit.
I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.
I eat different kinds of foods every day. But I like rice with different meat and vegetables best. I think healthy foods can make me strong and study well. I hardly ever eat fast food. Besides, I do a lot of exercise, such as jogging, swimming and playing basketball. My favourite sport is basketball. I play it twice a week with my friends.
I believe that eating well and exercising often play an important part in keeping fit. So I hope that everyone can eat well and do enough exercise to keep fit.
解析
【分析】
本题要求围绕“通过饮食和运动保持健康”写英语短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：①喜欢的食物与运动；②运动频率；③对食物和运动的看法，且开头已给出，词数70左右。解题思路为：先承接开头点明健康方式（饮食+运动），再分别对应三个要点展开，最后总结呼吁，确保符合要求，语言贴合青少年身份，无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：用“I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.”点明核心健康方式；
2. 饮食部分：说明日常饮食情况，点明喜欢的食物（米饭配肉和蔬菜），说明不吃快餐，表达对健康食物的看法（让自己强壮、学习好）；
3. 运动部分：列举喜欢的运动（篮球等），说明运动频率（每周两次）；
4. 总结：强调饮食和运动对健康的重要性，呼吁大家践行，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.
I eat different kinds of foods every day. But I like rice with different meat and vegetables best. I think healthy foods can make me strong and study well. I hardly ever eat fast food. Besides, I do a lot of exercise, such as jogging, swimming and playing basketball. My favourite sport is basketball. I play it twice a week with my friends.
I believe that eating well and exercising often play an important part in keeping fit. So I hope that everyone can eat well and do enough exercise to keep fit.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰（总-分-总），语言简洁流畅，符合初中生表达水平，传递了健康生活理念，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求围绕“通过饮食和运动保持健康”写英语短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：①喜欢的食物与运动；②运动频率；③对食物和运动的看法，且开头已给出，词数70左右。解题思路为：先承接开头点明健康方式（饮食+运动），再分别对应三个要点展开，最后总结呼吁，确保符合要求，语言贴合青少年身份，无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：用“I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.”点明核心健康方式；
2. 饮食部分：说明日常饮食情况，点明喜欢的食物（米饭配肉和蔬菜），说明不吃快餐，表达对健康食物的看法（让自己强壮、学习好）；
3. 运动部分：列举喜欢的运动（篮球等），说明运动频率（每周两次）；
4. 总结：强调饮食和运动对健康的重要性，呼吁大家践行，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I keep fit by having good eating habits and doing exercise.
I eat different kinds of foods every day. But I like rice with different meat and vegetables best. I think healthy foods can make me strong and study well. I hardly ever eat fast food. Besides, I do a lot of exercise, such as jogging, swimming and playing basketball. My favourite sport is basketball. I play it twice a week with my friends.
I believe that eating well and exercising often play an important part in keeping fit. So I hope that everyone can eat well and do enough exercise to keep fit.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰（总-分-总），语言简洁流畅，符合初中生表达水平，传递了健康生活理念，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
