Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是李明,请你根据下面记录的一日活动手账图写一篇英语日记。

注意:1. 日记中必须包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展;
2. 日记中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80左右。
假如你是李明,请你根据下面记录的一日活动手账图写一篇英语日记。
注意:1. 日记中必须包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展;
2. 日记中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80左右。
答案
One possible version:
Saturday,6 June
Today was a great Saturday. I got up at 7:00 in the morning. Then I did my homework. It was a little difficult but I finished it well. At noon,I ate lunch with my family. The food was yummy.
In the afternoon,I visited a farm. There were lots of lovely animals there. I even milked the cow. After that,I played basketball with my classmates. We played happily and I made a lot of shots.
In the evening,I read a funny storybook. I felt so happy today. What a nice Saturday!
Saturday,6 June
Today was a great Saturday. I got up at 7:00 in the morning. Then I did my homework. It was a little difficult but I finished it well. At noon,I ate lunch with my family. The food was yummy.
In the afternoon,I visited a farm. There were lots of lovely animals there. I even milked the cow. After that,I played basketball with my classmates. We played happily and I made a lot of shots.
In the evening,I read a funny storybook. I felt so happy today. What a nice Saturday!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求根据手账图写日记,需包含图中所有信息(早上7点起床、做作业、吃午饭;下午参观农场、打篮球;晚上合理拓展),采用日记格式,使用一般过去时,词数80左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:先确定日记开头(日期、星期、天气),再按早、中、晚时间顺序,将图中信息组织成通顺语句,适当添加细节(如农场动物、食物美味等),确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 日记开头:明确日期、星期和天气(Saturday, 6 June, Sunny);
2. 按时间顺序组织内容:早上7点起床→做作业→吃午饭;下午参观农场(可补充农场有可爱动物等细节)→打篮球;晚上合理拓展活动(如读故事书);
3. 全程使用一般过去时,语句通顺,包含所有图中信息,适当拓展,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday,6 June
Today was a great Saturday. I got up at 7:00 in the morning. Then I did my homework. It was a little difficult but I finished it well. At noon,I ate lunch with my family. The food was yummy.
In the afternoon,I visited a farm. There were lots of lovely animals there. I even milked the cow. After that,I played basketball with my classmates. We played happily and I made a lot of shots.
In the evening,I read a funny storybook. I felt so happy today. What a nice Saturday!
【知识点】
英语日记写作;一般过去时;词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求结合图片信息完成日记,需掌握日记格式、一般过去时用法,适当拓展内容,难度适中,能有效考查学生语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,要求根据手账图写日记,需包含图中所有信息(早上7点起床、做作业、吃午饭;下午参观农场、打篮球;晚上合理拓展),采用日记格式,使用一般过去时,词数80左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:先确定日记开头(日期、星期、天气),再按早、中、晚时间顺序,将图中信息组织成通顺语句,适当添加细节(如农场动物、食物美味等),确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 日记开头:明确日期、星期和天气(Saturday, 6 June, Sunny);
2. 按时间顺序组织内容:早上7点起床→做作业→吃午饭;下午参观农场(可补充农场有可爱动物等细节)→打篮球;晚上合理拓展活动(如读故事书);
3. 全程使用一般过去时,语句通顺,包含所有图中信息,适当拓展,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday,6 June
Today was a great Saturday. I got up at 7:00 in the morning. Then I did my homework. It was a little difficult but I finished it well. At noon,I ate lunch with my family. The food was yummy.
In the afternoon,I visited a farm. There were lots of lovely animals there. I even milked the cow. After that,I played basketball with my classmates. We played happily and I made a lot of shots.
In the evening,I read a funny storybook. I felt so happy today. What a nice Saturday!
【知识点】
英语日记写作;一般过去时;词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求结合图片信息完成日记,需掌握日记格式、一般过去时用法,适当拓展内容,难度适中,能有效考查学生语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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