二、书面表达
学校校报英文专栏正在举行“新时代中国好少年(Chinese Youth of the New Era)”的征文活动,请你写一封80词左右的推荐信,介绍你的好友
Mark,内容要点如下:
1. 他热爱运动,成绩优异;
2. 他乐于助人,在儿童之家做义工;
3. 上个月你在足球比赛中严重受伤,不得不卧床两周;
4. 他告诉你课堂内容,在学习中给你帮助;
5. 可适当补充一两点;
6. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:take exercise 做运动;the children's home 儿童之家;be hurt 受伤
Mark is my good friend. I suggest him for Chinese Youth of the New Era.
学校校报英文专栏正在举行“新时代中国好少年(Chinese Youth of the New Era)”的征文活动,请你写一封80词左右的推荐信,介绍你的好友
Mark,内容要点如下:
1. 他热爱运动,成绩优异;
2. 他乐于助人,在儿童之家做义工;
3. 上个月你在足球比赛中严重受伤,不得不卧床两周;
4. 他告诉你课堂内容,在学习中给你帮助;
5. 可适当补充一两点;
6. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:take exercise 做运动;the children's home 儿童之家;be hurt 受伤
Mark is my good friend. I suggest him for Chinese Youth of the New Era.
答案
He loves taking exercise and gets excellent grades at school. He is very helpful and works as a volunteer at the children's home in his spare time. Last month, I was badly hurt in a football match and had to lie in bed for two weeks. He came to my home every day to tell me the class content and helped me with my study. With his help, I kept up with my classmates soon. I think Mark is well worth this honor.
解析
【分析】
本题为要点式英语推荐信写作,需围绕“新时代中国好少年”主题,结合给定5个要点及已给出的开头完成写作。首先承接开头介绍Mark的运动与成绩优势,再说明其乐于助人的义工经历,接着叙述自己受伤的经历引出Mark的帮助,最后描述Mark的具体帮助并总结推荐,确保内容连贯、覆盖所有要点,词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接开头句,介绍Mark的运动与成绩:He loves taking exercise and gets excellent grades at school.
2. 说明Mark的义工经历体现其乐于助人:He is very helpful and works as a volunteer at the children's home in his spare time.
3. 叙述自己受伤的情况:Last month, I was badly hurt in a football match and had to lie in bed for two weeks.
4. 描述Mark对自己的学习帮助:He came to my home every day to tell me the class content and helped me with my study. With his help, I kept up with my classmates soon.
5. 结尾总结推荐:I think Mark is well worth this honor.
【答案】
He loves taking exercise and gets excellent grades at school. He is very helpful and works as a volunteer at the children's home in his spare time. Last month, I was badly hurt in a football match and had to lie in bed for two weeks. He came to my home every day to tell me the class content and helped me with my study. With his help, I kept up with my classmates soon. I think Mark is well worth this honor.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题为贴近学生生活的实用书信写作题,既考查语言整合与运用能力,又引导学生发现身边的优秀品质,要求覆盖所有给定要点,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为要点式英语推荐信写作,需围绕“新时代中国好少年”主题,结合给定5个要点及已给出的开头完成写作。首先承接开头介绍Mark的运动与成绩优势,再说明其乐于助人的义工经历,接着叙述自己受伤的经历引出Mark的帮助,最后描述Mark的具体帮助并总结推荐,确保内容连贯、覆盖所有要点,词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接开头句,介绍Mark的运动与成绩:He loves taking exercise and gets excellent grades at school.
2. 说明Mark的义工经历体现其乐于助人:He is very helpful and works as a volunteer at the children's home in his spare time.
3. 叙述自己受伤的情况:Last month, I was badly hurt in a football match and had to lie in bed for two weeks.
4. 描述Mark对自己的学习帮助:He came to my home every day to tell me the class content and helped me with my study. With his help, I kept up with my classmates soon.
5. 结尾总结推荐:I think Mark is well worth this honor.
【答案】
He loves taking exercise and gets excellent grades at school. He is very helpful and works as a volunteer at the children's home in his spare time. Last month, I was badly hurt in a football match and had to lie in bed for two weeks. He came to my home every day to tell me the class content and helped me with my study. With his help, I kept up with my classmates soon. I think Mark is well worth this honor.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题为贴近学生生活的实用书信写作题,既考查语言整合与运用能力,又引导学生发现身边的优秀品质,要求覆盖所有给定要点,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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