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九、写作(15 分)
《守株待兔》的故事家喻户晓，请你根据下面的提示词，用英语写出这个故事。
提示词：hare 野兔；hole 洞；knock against 撞上；no longer 不再。
要求：1. 表达正确，逻辑清晰。
2. 词数不少于60。
《守株待兔》的故事家喻户晓，请你根据下面的提示词，用英语写出这个故事。
提示词：hare 野兔；hole 洞；knock against 撞上；no longer 不再。
要求：1. 表达正确，逻辑清晰。
2. 词数不少于60。
答案
One possible version:
Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot and it was very cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran quickly. It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. From that day, he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.
Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot and it was very cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran quickly. It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. From that day, he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.
解析
【分析】
要完成这篇英语故事写作，需遵循以下思路：1. 紧扣《守株待兔》的核心情节，明确故事脉络；2. 必须全部用到给定提示词（hare、hole、knock against、no longer）；3. 采用一般过去时叙述故事，保证时态正确；4. 确保词数不少于60，逻辑连贯。具体步骤为：先交代故事开端（从前有农夫在田里劳作），再引入野兔的出现（从洞里跑出，受惊后奔跑），接着写野兔撞上树死亡，农夫捡到兔子，最后点明农夫后续的错误行为（不再劳作，守株待兔），将提示词自然融入各环节。
【解析】
写作时，首先用“Once upon a time”开启故事，交代主角（a farmer）和初始场景（working in his field）；然后引入野兔：“A hare ran out of a hole”，对应提示词hole；接着写野兔受惊奔跑的情节，用“It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree”体现提示词knock against；之后描述农夫的反应：“He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner”；最后点出核心情节，用“he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again”对应提示词no longer；全程使用一般过去时，保证语言准确、逻辑清晰，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot and it was very cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran quickly. It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. From that day, he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.
【知识点】
英语故事写作，一般过去时，词汇运用
【点评】
本题要求结合提示词完成经典寓言故事的英语叙述，既考查学生对核心词汇的运用能力，又考查故事叙述的逻辑性和时态的正确使用，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，参考答案准确覆盖所有提示词，情节完整，语言规范，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
要完成这篇英语故事写作，需遵循以下思路：1. 紧扣《守株待兔》的核心情节，明确故事脉络；2. 必须全部用到给定提示词（hare、hole、knock against、no longer）；3. 采用一般过去时叙述故事，保证时态正确；4. 确保词数不少于60，逻辑连贯。具体步骤为：先交代故事开端（从前有农夫在田里劳作），再引入野兔的出现（从洞里跑出，受惊后奔跑），接着写野兔撞上树死亡，农夫捡到兔子，最后点明农夫后续的错误行为（不再劳作，守株待兔），将提示词自然融入各环节。
【解析】
写作时，首先用“Once upon a time”开启故事，交代主角（a farmer）和初始场景（working in his field）；然后引入野兔：“A hare ran out of a hole”，对应提示词hole；接着写野兔受惊奔跑的情节，用“It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree”体现提示词knock against；之后描述农夫的反应：“He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner”；最后点出核心情节，用“he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again”对应提示词no longer；全程使用一般过去时，保证语言准确、逻辑清晰，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot and it was very cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran quickly. It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. From that day, he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.
【知识点】
英语故事写作，一般过去时，词汇运用
【点评】
本题要求结合提示词完成经典寓言故事的英语叙述，既考查学生对核心词汇的运用能力，又考查故事叙述的逻辑性和时态的正确使用，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，参考答案准确覆盖所有提示词，情节完整，语言规范，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
