51. 现在,人们越来越亲近大自然了,假设上周六你去参观一家农场,请你发挥合理想象,介绍一下你的农场之旅。
内容提示:
(1)When did you go?
(2)Why did you go there?
(3)Who did you go with?
(4)How was the weather there?
(5)What did you do there?
要求:
(1)作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。
内容提示:
(1)When did you go?
(2)Why did you go there?
(3)Who did you go with?
(4)How was the weather there?
(5)What did you do there?
要求:
(1)作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。
答案
51. 参考范文:
Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature. The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends. The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean. The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples. We had a good time there.
Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature. The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends. The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean. The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples. We had a good time there.
解析
【分析】
写这篇作文时,需紧扣题目给出的5个提示点梳理内容:首先确定时态为一般过去时(描述上周六的活动),依次对应时间(Last Saturday)、去的原因(亲近自然)、同行人(朋友)、天气情况、农场活动,再将这些内容串联成连贯短文,控制词数在70左右,避免出现真实信息即可。
【解析】
1. 开头点明时间与目的:Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature.
2. 说明同行人与交通:The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends.
3. 描述天气:The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean.
4. 介绍农场活动:The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples.
5. 结尾总结感受:We had a good time there.
【答案】
参考范文:
Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature. The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends. The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean. The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples. We had a good time there.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时、常用动词短语
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有提示点,时态正确(一般过去时),语句连贯自然,内容具体贴合“亲近自然”的主题,词数符合要求,是一篇规范的参考作文,适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.6
写这篇作文时,需紧扣题目给出的5个提示点梳理内容:首先确定时态为一般过去时(描述上周六的活动),依次对应时间(Last Saturday)、去的原因(亲近自然)、同行人(朋友)、天气情况、农场活动,再将这些内容串联成连贯短文,控制词数在70左右,避免出现真实信息即可。
【解析】
1. 开头点明时间与目的:Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature.
2. 说明同行人与交通:The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends.
3. 描述天气:The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean.
4. 介绍农场活动:The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples.
5. 结尾总结感受:We had a good time there.
【答案】
参考范文:
Last Saturday I went to a farm in the countryside to get close to the nature. The farm was a little far, so I took a bus there with my friends. The weather was very hot, but the air was very clean. The farmer showed us around the farm. We saw some cows and chickens there. There were a lot of apple trees on the farm. We also helped pick apples. We had a good time there.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时、常用动词短语
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有提示点,时态正确(一般过去时),语句连贯自然,内容具体贴合“亲近自然”的主题,词数符合要求,是一篇规范的参考作文,适合学生模仿学习。
【难度系数】
0.6
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