翅(cola chicken wings),他们觉得很美味。请根据下面的要点提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇日记,介绍一下可乐鸡翅制作过程及你的感受。
要点提示:

写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名、学校名称等信息;
3. 词数80左右(日记格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Saturday, 14th November
要点提示:
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名、学校名称等信息;
3. 词数80左右(日记格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Saturday, 14th November
答案
Today I made cola chicken wings for my parents. Let me tell you how to make the dish.
First, I washed eight chicken wings with salt. Then, I put some oil into the pan. When the oil was hot, I put the chicken wings in it. Next, I poured a bottle of cola into the pan and let it cover the chicken wings. Finally, I added a little salt and soy sauce and stewed the dish for about twenty minutes.
After the dish was done, my parents had a taste first. They said it was delicious. I was glad that both of them loved it.
First, I washed eight chicken wings with salt. Then, I put some oil into the pan. When the oil was hot, I put the chicken wings in it. Next, I poured a bottle of cola into the pan and let it cover the chicken wings. Finally, I added a little salt and soy sauce and stewed the dish for about twenty minutes.
After the dish was done, my parents had a taste first. They said it was delicious. I was glad that both of them loved it.
解析
【分析】本题要求以英语日记的形式介绍可乐鸡翅的制作过程及感受,需整合给定的原料、步骤信息,遵循日记格式,使用合适的连接词梳理制作流程,同时表达制作后的心情,确保涵盖所有要点,词数符合要求。
【解析】首先,日记开头点明制作可乐鸡翅的对象(父母);接着按步骤描述制作:第一步清洗鸡翅,第二步热锅放油煎鸡翅,第三步加可乐没过鸡翅,第四步加盐和酱油炖约20分钟;最后写父母品尝后的评价,表达自己的开心。使用First、Then、Next、Finally等连接词使逻辑清晰,语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】Today I made cola chicken wings for my parents. Let me tell you how to make the dish.
First, I washed eight chicken wings with salt. Then, I put some oil into the pan. When the oil was hot, I put the chicken wings in it. Next, I poured a bottle of cola into the pan and let it cover the chicken wings. Finally, I added a little salt and soy sauce and stewed the dish for about twenty minutes.
After the dish was done, my parents had a taste first. They said it was delicious. I was glad that both of them loved it.
【知识点】英语日记写作、过程性说明文写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际考查英语书面表达能力,要求整合给定信息完成实用文体写作,注重语言的条理性和准确性,难度适中,能有效考查学生的信息整合与语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先,日记开头点明制作可乐鸡翅的对象(父母);接着按步骤描述制作:第一步清洗鸡翅,第二步热锅放油煎鸡翅,第三步加可乐没过鸡翅,第四步加盐和酱油炖约20分钟;最后写父母品尝后的评价,表达自己的开心。使用First、Then、Next、Finally等连接词使逻辑清晰,语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】Today I made cola chicken wings for my parents. Let me tell you how to make the dish.
First, I washed eight chicken wings with salt. Then, I put some oil into the pan. When the oil was hot, I put the chicken wings in it. Next, I poured a bottle of cola into the pan and let it cover the chicken wings. Finally, I added a little salt and soy sauce and stewed the dish for about twenty minutes.
After the dish was done, my parents had a taste first. They said it was delicious. I was glad that both of them loved it.
【知识点】英语日记写作、过程性说明文写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际考查英语书面表达能力,要求整合给定信息完成实用文体写作,注重语言的条理性和准确性,难度适中,能有效考查学生的信息整合与语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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