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请你根据下表内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍杨振宁先生。
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 钦佩
2. ……的先驱
3. 在早年……岁时
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to one of the most inspiring heroes, most people will think of Huang Xuhua. 当提及最为激励人心的英雄之一时，许多人会想起黄旭华。
中间句：Despite facing countless failures and difficulties, he never gave up on his research. 尽管面对了无数失败与困难，他仍不放弃研究。
结尾句：It is really admirable that those well-respected scientists always find ways to do more for a better future. 那些备受尊敬的科学家们总是能够想出办法为更美好的未来做出更多贡献，这一点实在令人钦佩。
【美文欣赏】
A Great Scientist — Chen Ning Yang
Let me introduce a great scientist — Chen Ning Yang.
Chen Ning Yang was a great scientist who lived from 1922 to 2025. He was born in Anhui, China. When he was young, he showed a deep love and curiosity for maths and science. He once worked and taught in the US for many years. During that time, the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1957 was one of his major achievements. In 2003, he decided to return to China to settle down. He taught at Tsinghua University, training many young people there. It is very brilliant of him to come back and devote himself to China.
Till today, his spirit of exploration still lives on in his students and many young people. Though he has passed away, he is a great inspiration to me. As students, we should make an effort to make our country stronger like he hoped.
【小试牛刀】
今天让我们用英语来讲述少年英雄王二小的故事吧！
【参考词汇】the Eighth Route Army 八路军 ambush 埋伏
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story.
请你根据下表内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍杨振宁先生。
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 钦佩
2. ……的先驱
3. 在早年……岁时
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to one of the most inspiring heroes, most people will think of Huang Xuhua. 当提及最为激励人心的英雄之一时，许多人会想起黄旭华。
中间句：Despite facing countless failures and difficulties, he never gave up on his research. 尽管面对了无数失败与困难，他仍不放弃研究。
结尾句：It is really admirable that those well-respected scientists always find ways to do more for a better future. 那些备受尊敬的科学家们总是能够想出办法为更美好的未来做出更多贡献，这一点实在令人钦佩。
【美文欣赏】
A Great Scientist — Chen Ning Yang
Let me introduce a great scientist — Chen Ning Yang.
Chen Ning Yang was a great scientist who lived from 1922 to 2025. He was born in Anhui, China. When he was young, he showed a deep love and curiosity for maths and science. He once worked and taught in the US for many years. During that time, the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1957 was one of his major achievements. In 2003, he decided to return to China to settle down. He taught at Tsinghua University, training many young people there. It is very brilliant of him to come back and devote himself to China.
Till today, his spirit of exploration still lives on in his students and many young people. Though he has passed away, he is a great inspiration to me. As students, we should make an effort to make our country stronger like he hoped.
【小试牛刀】
今天让我们用英语来讲述少年英雄王二小的故事吧！
【参考词汇】the Eighth Route Army 八路军 ambush 埋伏
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story.
答案
【审题要领】
人物生平;第三人称;一般过去时
【素材积累】
1.look up to 2.the pioneer of...
3.at the early age of...
【小试牛刀】
Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger.
From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!(共128词)
人物生平;第三人称;一般过去时
【素材积累】
1.look up to 2.the pioneer of...
3.at the early age of...
【小试牛刀】
Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger.
From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!(共128词)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语人物故事类写作题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：确定人称用第三人称、时态用一般过去时，需包含王二小的生平、英雄事迹及感悟，使用给定参考词汇（the Eighth Route Army、ambush），字数不少于90词，开头已给出；2. 结构搭建：承接开头后，先介绍王二小的基本背景（出生时间、地点、早年经历），再叙述核心英雄事迹（加入儿童团、帮助八路军、诱敌牺牲），最后升华主题，表达对英雄的崇敬与学习感悟；3. 素材运用：结合给定重点短语及参考词汇，确保内容贴合要求，语言准确流畅。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接开头补充王二小的基本信息：Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. 接着叙述其成长经历与英雄事迹：Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger. 最后升华主题，表达感悟：From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!
【答案】
Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger.
From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、英语短语搭配
【点评】
本题为初中英语典型的人物故事类写作题，既考查学生对基础时态、短语的运用能力，又要求学生组织完整语篇，同时渗透爱国主义教育，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语人物故事类写作题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：确定人称用第三人称、时态用一般过去时，需包含王二小的生平、英雄事迹及感悟，使用给定参考词汇（the Eighth Route Army、ambush），字数不少于90词，开头已给出；2. 结构搭建：承接开头后，先介绍王二小的基本背景（出生时间、地点、早年经历），再叙述核心英雄事迹（加入儿童团、帮助八路军、诱敌牺牲），最后升华主题，表达对英雄的崇敬与学习感悟；3. 素材运用：结合给定重点短语及参考词汇，确保内容贴合要求，语言准确流畅。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接开头补充王二小的基本信息：Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. 接着叙述其成长经历与英雄事迹：Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger. 最后升华主题，表达感悟：From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!
【答案】
Wang Erxiao was born in Hebei Province in 1929. When he was only 11 years old, both of his parents passed away. Later, Wang Erxiao, who was smart and fearless, became a member of the Children's League. He often helped the Eighth Route Army by watching out for enemy soldiers. One day, he saw Japanese soldiers come into the village. To protect the villagers and the army, he bravely led the enemies into an ambush. After the enemy soldiers realised they had been tricked, they killed the 13-year-old boy in anger.
From his story, I have learned that true courage means putting others before ourselves and we should always love and protect our country, just as he did.Wang Erxiao will always be a hero in my heart!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、英语短语搭配
【点评】
本题为初中英语典型的人物故事类写作题，既考查学生对基础时态、短语的运用能力，又要求学生组织完整语篇，同时渗透爱国主义教育，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
