Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假设你是李华,准备参加学校英语社团举办的“中国传统节日推荐官”评选活动。请根据以下思维导图详细介绍推荐的中国传统节日。

要求:
1. 须包含以上思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
4. 词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival.
假设你是李华,准备参加学校英语社团举办的“中国传统节日推荐官”评选活动。请根据以下思维导图详细介绍推荐的中国传统节日。
要求:
1. 须包含以上思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
4. 词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival.
—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is the roundest and brightest. People often call it the Moon Festival.
On this day, families gather to admire the full moon. Eating mooncakes is a must. We also hang colorful lanterns and share stories together.
For me, this festival is a time for family reunion. It reminds us to cherish our loved ones and feel the warmth of home. I hope you will love this wonderful festival too.
答案
One possible version:
My favorite traditional Chinese festival
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is the roundest and brightest. People often call it the Moon Festival.
On this day, families gather to admire the full moon. Eating mooncakes is a must. We also hang colorful lanterns and share stories together.
For me, this festival is a time for family reunion. It reminds us to cherish our loved ones and feel the warmth of home. I hope you will love this wonderful festival too.
My favorite traditional Chinese festival
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is the roundest and brightest. People often call it the Moon Festival.
On this day, families gather to admire the full moon. Eating mooncakes is a must. We also hang colorful lanterns and share stories together.
For me, this festival is a time for family reunion. It reminds us to cherish our loved ones and feel the warmth of home. I hope you will love this wonderful festival too.
解析
【分析】
首先确定推荐的中国传统节日(如中秋节),接着按照思维导图的三个要点展开:1. 节日简介:说明节日的时间、别称;2. 节日习俗:描述赏月、吃月饼等传统活动;3. 节日意义:点明节日象征家庭团聚的内涵。结合已给开头,补充细节,确保行文连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
第一步:确定推荐节日为中秋节,补充开头后介绍节日的时间(农历八月十五)和别称(月亮节);第二步:描述节日传统习俗,如家人团聚赏月、吃月饼、挂灯笼等;第三步:阐述节日意义,即作为家庭团聚的时刻,提醒人们珍惜亲情。按此逻辑组织语言,涵盖所有要点,保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【答案】
My favorite traditional Chinese festival
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is the roundest and brightest. People often call it the Moon Festival.
On this day, families gather to admire the full moon. Eating mooncakes is a must. We also hang colorful lanterns and share stories together.
For me, this festival is a time for family reunion. It reminds us to cherish our loved ones and feel the warmth of home. I hope you will love this wonderful festival too.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国传统节日介绍
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖思维导图所有要点,内容清晰,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的节日介绍类书面表达范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先确定推荐的中国传统节日(如中秋节),接着按照思维导图的三个要点展开:1. 节日简介:说明节日的时间、别称;2. 节日习俗:描述赏月、吃月饼等传统活动;3. 节日意义:点明节日象征家庭团聚的内涵。结合已给开头,补充细节,确保行文连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
第一步:确定推荐节日为中秋节,补充开头后介绍节日的时间(农历八月十五)和别称(月亮节);第二步:描述节日传统习俗,如家人团聚赏月、吃月饼、挂灯笼等;第三步:阐述节日意义,即作为家庭团聚的时刻,提醒人们珍惜亲情。按此逻辑组织语言,涵盖所有要点,保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【答案】
My favorite traditional Chinese festival
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my favorite traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is the roundest and brightest. People often call it the Moon Festival.
On this day, families gather to admire the full moon. Eating mooncakes is a must. We also hang colorful lanterns and share stories together.
For me, this festival is a time for family reunion. It reminds us to cherish our loved ones and feel the warmth of home. I hope you will love this wonderful festival too.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国传统节日介绍
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖思维导图所有要点,内容清晰,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的节日介绍类书面表达范文,适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
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