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学校要举办旧物改造环保手工展。请你以“Reuse old things”为题，写一篇英语小短文，介绍自己如何利用旧物品制作新东西，并呼吁大家一起行动，保护地球。
要求：语法准确、书写工整，不少于5句话。
Reuse old things
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
——如何再利用旧物品
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a pen holder. I can reuse old buttons to make a picture. I can also reuse old paper to make a book. These things are useful. What beautiful things!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. Let’s reuse old things to help the Earth.
小试身手
学校要举办旧物改造环保手工展。请你以“Reuse old things”为题，写一篇英语小短文，介绍自己如何利用旧物品制作新东西，并呼吁大家一起行动，保护地球。
要求：语法准确、书写工整，不少于5句话。
Reuse old things
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
——如何再利用旧物品
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a pen holder. I can reuse old buttons to make a picture. I can also reuse old paper to make a book. These things are useful. What beautiful things!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. Let’s reuse old things to help the Earth.
小试身手
答案
Reuse old things
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy for my little sister. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a nice pen holder for my desk. I can reuse old colourful buttons to make a beautiful picture to decorate my room. I can also reuse old used paper to make a small notebook. These things are all very useful. What lovely things we make!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. It helps us reduce waste and protect the Earth. Let's start from small things, and reuse old things together to look after our home.
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy for my little sister. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a nice pen holder for my desk. I can reuse old colourful buttons to make a beautiful picture to decorate my room. I can also reuse old used paper to make a small notebook. These things are all very useful. What lovely things we make!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. It helps us reduce waste and protect the Earth. Let's start from small things, and reuse old things together to look after our home.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作，要求以“Reuse old things”为题，介绍旧物改造做法并呼吁环保。解题思路为：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头点明旧物再利用的价值；中间列举具体的旧物改造实例，补充改造后的用途，让内容更充实；结尾总结再利用的环保意义，发出明确的行动呼吁，紧扣保护地球的主题，同时确保语法准确、语句通顺，满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开头：直接点题，说明旧物再利用能赋予旧物品新生命，引出写作主题；2. 中间：列举不同旧物品的改造案例，如用纸箱制作给妹妹的玩具、塑料瓶制作书桌笔筒、旧纽扣制作装饰画、旧纸张制作小笔记本，每个案例补充具体用途，使内容更生动具体；3. 结尾：总结旧物再利用可减少浪费、保护地球，发出呼吁，号召大家从小事做起，一起保护地球家园。
【答案】Reuse old things
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy for my little sister. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a nice pen holder for my desk. I can reuse old colourful buttons to make a beautiful picture to decorate my room. I can also reuse old used paper to make a small notebook. These things are all very useful. What lovely things we make!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. It helps us reduce waste and protect the Earth. Let's start from small things, and reuse old things together to look after our home.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体充实，通过多个旧物改造实例展现创意，结尾点明环保意义并发出呼吁，语法准确，语句通顺，很好地完成了介绍旧物改造和呼吁环保的任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开头：直接点题，说明旧物再利用能赋予旧物品新生命，引出写作主题；2. 中间：列举不同旧物品的改造案例，如用纸箱制作给妹妹的玩具、塑料瓶制作书桌笔筒、旧纽扣制作装饰画、旧纸张制作小笔记本，每个案例补充具体用途，使内容更生动具体；3. 结尾：总结旧物再利用可减少浪费、保护地球，发出呼吁，号召大家从小事做起，一起保护地球家园。
【答案】Reuse old things
We can reuse old things. They can have a new life.
I can reuse a cardboard box to make a toy for my little sister. I can reuse a plastic bottle to make a nice pen holder for my desk. I can reuse old colourful buttons to make a beautiful picture to decorate my room. I can also reuse old used paper to make a small notebook. These things are all very useful. What lovely things we make!
Reusing can make old things have a new life. It helps us reduce waste and protect the Earth. Let's start from small things, and reuse old things together to look after our home.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体充实，通过多个旧物改造实例展现创意，结尾点明环保意义并发出呼吁，语法准确，语句通顺，很好地完成了介绍旧物改造和呼吁环保的任务。
【难度系数】0.6
日常生活中我们总会产生许多闲置旧物品。这些旧物品都可以再次被利用，拥有新的价值。请你根据以下提示，以“Reusing in our daily life”为题，写一篇短文，介绍生活中有哪些旧物可以再利用。不少于50词。
Reusing in our daily life
Reusing in our daily life
There are many old things in our life. We can reuse them.
We can reuse plastic bottles. We can clean them and make pen holders.
We can reuse cardboard boxes too. We can make toys with them.
We can also make cloth bags with old clothes.
Reusing is good.
Let's reuse old things to help the Earth.
答案
One possible version:
Reusing in our daily life
There are many old things in our life. We can reuse them. We can reuse plastic bottles. We can clean them and make pen holders. We can reuse cardboard boxes too. We can make toys with them. We can also make cloth bags with old clothes.
Reusing is good. Let's reuse old things to help the Earth.
Reusing in our daily life
There are many old things in our life. We can reuse them. We can reuse plastic bottles. We can clean them and make pen holders. We can reuse cardboard boxes too. We can make toys with them. We can also make cloth bags with old clothes.
Reusing is good. Let's reuse old things to help the Earth.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Reusing in our daily life”为题写短文，需结合插图中的塑料瓶、纸箱、旧衣物等旧物，介绍它们的再利用方式，同时点明再利用的意义，满足不少于50词的要求。写作时先总述旧物可再利用，再分述不同旧物的用途，最后总结呼吁，结构清晰即可完成。
【解析】首先开头引出生活中有很多旧物可再利用；接着分别说明塑料瓶可清洗后做成笔筒，纸箱可用来做玩具，旧衣物可做成布袋；最后表达再利用对地球有益，呼吁大家行动起来，按照这个思路组织语言，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】One possible version:Reusing in our daily lifeThere are many old things in our life. We can reuse them. We can reuse plastic bottles. We can clean them and make pen holders. We can reuse cardboard boxes too. We can make toys with them. We can also make cloth bags with old clothes.Reusing is good. Let's reuse old things to help the Earth.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合生活中的环保主题，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合插图内容展开，贴近生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】首先开头引出生活中有很多旧物可再利用；接着分别说明塑料瓶可清洗后做成笔筒，纸箱可用来做玩具，旧衣物可做成布袋；最后表达再利用对地球有益，呼吁大家行动起来，按照这个思路组织语言，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】One possible version:Reusing in our daily lifeThere are many old things in our life. We can reuse them. We can reuse plastic bottles. We can clean them and make pen holders. We can reuse cardboard boxes too. We can make toys with them. We can also make cloth bags with old clothes.Reusing is good. Let's reuse old things to help the Earth.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合生活中的环保主题，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合插图内容展开，贴近生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
