B. 书面表达
假如你是Lucy,你和家人正在三亚度假,你的好朋友Linda对你度假的地方很感兴趣,希望你能寄一张明信片让她有所了解。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,在明信片上给她回信。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,词数60左右。
Dear Linda,
Yours,
Lucy
假如你是Lucy,你和家人正在三亚度假,你的好朋友Linda对你度假的地方很感兴趣,希望你能寄一张明信片让她有所了解。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,在明信片上给她回信。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,词数60左右。
Dear Linda,
How's it going? My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.
Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya. We are at a beach right now. Although it is hot, we have a good time. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone.
I'm sunbathing at the moment. It's very relaxing to be here.
What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time? I'll be back in a few days. See you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
答案
参考范文:
Dear Linda,
How's it going? My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.
Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya. We are at a beach right now. Although it is hot, we have a good time. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment. It's very relaxing to be here.
What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time? I'll be back in a few days. See you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
Dear Linda,
How's it going? My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.
Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya. We are at a beach right now. Although it is hot, we have a good time. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment. It's very relaxing to be here.
What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time? I'll be back in a few days. See you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Lucy的身份给好友Linda写明信片回信,需围绕思维导图的三个核心问题(度假地点、当地天气、正在进行的活动)展开,适当拓展内容,语句连贯,词数约60。解题思路:1. 开头用日常问候开启信件;2. 明确回答度假地点,回应第一个问题;3. 描述当地天气,呼应第二个问题;4. 用现在进行时详细写家人和自己的活动,体现度假的快乐;5. 结尾添加对Linda的问候,符合明信片的交流功能,确保内容贴合提示、时态正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开头问候并点明度假地点:用“How's it going?”问候,接着说明“My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.”,回应“Where are you now?”;
2. 描述当地天气:回答第二个问题,写“Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya.”;
3. 描述正在进行的活动:用现在进行时,写“We are at a beach right now. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment.”,体现度假的愉悦;
4. 结尾添加对Linda的问候,如“What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time?”,符合明信片的交流目的,整体词数符合要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Linda,
How's it going? My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.
Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya. We are at a beach right now. Although it is hot, we have a good time. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment. It's very relaxing to be here.
What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time? I'll be back in a few days. See you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、情景交际写作
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的情景类书面表达题,结合思维导图提示考查英语综合运用能力,要求学生能根据提示组织内容,正确使用现在进行时态,语句连贯,符合日常书信格式,难度适中,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题要求以Lucy的身份给好友Linda写明信片回信,需围绕思维导图的三个核心问题(度假地点、当地天气、正在进行的活动)展开,适当拓展内容,语句连贯,词数约60。解题思路:1. 开头用日常问候开启信件;2. 明确回答度假地点,回应第一个问题;3. 描述当地天气,呼应第二个问题;4. 用现在进行时详细写家人和自己的活动,体现度假的快乐;5. 结尾添加对Linda的问候,符合明信片的交流功能,确保内容贴合提示、时态正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开头问候并点明度假地点:用“How's it going?”问候,接着说明“My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.”,回应“Where are you now?”;
2. 描述当地天气:回答第二个问题,写“Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya.”;
3. 描述正在进行的活动:用现在进行时,写“We are at a beach right now. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment.”,体现度假的愉悦;
4. 结尾添加对Linda的问候,如“What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time?”,符合明信片的交流目的,整体词数符合要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Linda,
How's it going? My family and I are on vacation in Sanya.
Today it's hot and sunny in Sanya. We are at a beach right now. Although it is hot, we have a good time. My father and my brother are swimming in the sea. My mother is talking to my grandmother on the phone. I'm sunbathing at the moment. It's very relaxing to be here.
What are you doing these days? Are you having a good time? I'll be back in a few days. See you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
【知识点】
英语书面表达、现在进行时、情景交际写作
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的情景类书面表达题,结合思维导图提示考查英语综合运用能力,要求学生能根据提示组织内容,正确使用现在进行时态,语句连贯,符合日常书信格式,难度适中,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.4
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