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六、在生活或学习中，当你情绪低落的时候，你是如何积极应对的呢？你们学校要举办一场题为“Don't Worry. Be Happy!”的英语演讲活动，请你结合自己的实际经历，并根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加比赛。
要点提示：
1. Did you have an unhappy experience? What was it?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90 词左右（文中已给出部分不计入总词数）。
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!".
要点提示：
1. Did you have an unhappy experience? What was it?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 90 词左右（文中已给出部分不计入总词数）。
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is "Don't Worry. Be Happy!".
I'd like to share one of my experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is
"Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my
experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is
"Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my
experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇主题明确的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要紧扣题干给出的三个核心要点搭建框架：第一部分先选取贴近中学生日常的低落经历，比如比赛失利这类真实场景，清晰交代事件的前因后果，完成要点1的要求；第二部分要写出自己从情绪低落转向主动调整的具体行动，体现积极应对的过程，覆盖要点2；第三部分提炼从这段经历中得到的成长感悟，呼应演讲的主题“Don't Worry. Be Happy!”。写作时还要注意符合演讲稿的口语化表达风格，不要出现真实人名校名，控制总词数在要求范围内，最后加上演讲常规的致谢收尾即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开篇语句，自然引出要分享的个人经历，交代具体的不愉快事件：上学期花费数周准备演讲比赛，中途忘词仓促结束，赛后十分低落，完成第一个要点的内容。
2. 接着叙述应对过程：妈妈发现我的情绪后用话语开导我，我重新振作，通过录视频复盘练习、向老师请教技巧的方式持续提升，之后在班级的演讲中取得了好的效果，完整覆盖第二个要点。
3. 最后总结这段经历带来的感悟：拥有积极心态并付诸行动就能把忧虑转化为收获，向在场听众发出保持乐观坚持前行的呼吁，收尾致谢，全文没有出现任何真实个人信息，词数符合要求，完全贴合所有写作规则。
【答案】
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is
"Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my
experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，叙事作文结构，要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有提示要点，选取的校园演讲比赛失利的经历十分贴合中学生真实生活，叙事逻辑流畅自然，从遭遇挫折、调整应对到感悟升华层层递进，语言地道简洁，符合演讲稿的口语表达特点，主题积极向上，完美呼应了“Don't Worry. Be Happy!”的核心立意，词数符合题干要求，是一篇质量很高的参赛演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题明确的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要紧扣题干给出的三个核心要点搭建框架：第一部分先选取贴近中学生日常的低落经历，比如比赛失利这类真实场景，清晰交代事件的前因后果，完成要点1的要求；第二部分要写出自己从情绪低落转向主动调整的具体行动，体现积极应对的过程，覆盖要点2；第三部分提炼从这段经历中得到的成长感悟，呼应演讲的主题“Don't Worry. Be Happy!”。写作时还要注意符合演讲稿的口语化表达风格，不要出现真实人名校名，控制总词数在要求范围内，最后加上演讲常规的致谢收尾即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开篇语句，自然引出要分享的个人经历，交代具体的不愉快事件：上学期花费数周准备演讲比赛，中途忘词仓促结束，赛后十分低落，完成第一个要点的内容。
2. 接着叙述应对过程：妈妈发现我的情绪后用话语开导我，我重新振作，通过录视频复盘练习、向老师请教技巧的方式持续提升，之后在班级的演讲中取得了好的效果，完整覆盖第二个要点。
3. 最后总结这段经历带来的感悟：拥有积极心态并付诸行动就能把忧虑转化为收获，向在场听众发出保持乐观坚持前行的呼吁，收尾致谢，全文没有出现任何真实个人信息，词数符合要求，完全贴合所有写作规则。
【答案】
Don't Worry. Be Happy!
Good morning, everyone! Today, my topic is
"Don't Worry. Be Happy!". I'd like to share one of my
experiences.
Last term, I prepared for a speech competition for
weeks, but I forgot my lines halfway and finished my
speech in a hurry. I felt so upset that I even avoided
talking about the competition after that. My mum
noticed my sadness and said, "Mistakes are chances
for us to grow." Her words cheered me up. I started
practising again. I recorded myself to check my
progress and asked my teacher for tips. A month later,
I gave a speech in our class and did well.
This experience taught me that with a positive
mind and regular action, we can turn worries into
wins. Let's choose to stay happy and keep going!
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，叙事作文结构，要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有提示要点，选取的校园演讲比赛失利的经历十分贴合中学生真实生活，叙事逻辑流畅自然，从遭遇挫折、调整应对到感悟升华层层递进，语言地道简洁，符合演讲稿的口语表达特点，主题积极向上，完美呼应了“Don't Worry. Be Happy!”的核心立意，词数符合题干要求，是一篇质量很高的参赛演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
