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1.写作任务
假如今天英语课的主题是"My Favourite Story",请你根据下面的要点提示及要求,写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事,在课上和大家分享。
要点提示:(1)What is your favourite story?
(2)What is it about?
(3)What can you learn from it?
要求:(1)意思连贯,语言通顺;
(2)不少于60词。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
(1) , an emperor.
从前,有一位皇帝。
(2)I want to with you.
我想和你分享一个有趣的故事。
(3)It happened .它发生于很久以前。
(4)One day while , he dreamt of an old man.
一天当他正在睡觉的时候,他梦见了一个老人。
(5) he was old and weak, he tried the two mountains.
尽管他年老体弱,但他试图移走那两座山。
(6)The story is trying to show us that
.
这个故事试图告诉我们,如果你努力,一切皆有可能。
(7)The story is really .
这个故事真的很有趣且有意义。
(8)The story mainly teaches us— .
这个故事主要教会我们——永不言弃。
3.范文品鉴
My Favourite Story
My favourite story is The Fox and the Crow.(开篇点题,点出故事)
Once upon a time, there lived a fox and a crow. The fox was very cunning(狡猾的).One day,
he found the crow carrying a piece of meat in his mouth. He wanted to get the meat from the crow's
mouth. Whatever the fox said, the crow kept standing on the branch in silence until the fox told him
he had the most beautiful voice. The crow was so happy to hear this that he opened his mouth to sing
a song. As a result, as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got
it.(故事大概)
I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds us that we should never believe
the person who wants to cheat us.(评价与启发)
类文训练
假如你是某国际学校的学生,下周你校将和英国的Park School进行一次线上文化交流活动,你将参与其中的"寓言故事"板块。你打算分享《画蛇添足》这个故事,请根据以下提示写一篇60词左右的短文,为活动做准备。
get a pot of wine(一壶酒);make a rule; draw a snake with a stick; pick up the wine; add feet
to his snake; take away the pot
假如今天英语课的主题是"My Favourite Story",请你根据下面的要点提示及要求,写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事,在课上和大家分享。
要点提示:(1)What is your favourite story?
(2)What is it about?
(3)What can you learn from it?
要求:(1)意思连贯,语言通顺;
(2)不少于60词。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
(1) , an emperor.
从前,有一位皇帝。
(2)I want to with you.
我想和你分享一个有趣的故事。
(3)It happened .它发生于很久以前。
(4)One day while , he dreamt of an old man.
一天当他正在睡觉的时候,他梦见了一个老人。
(5) he was old and weak, he tried the two mountains.
尽管他年老体弱,但他试图移走那两座山。
(6)The story is trying to show us that
.
这个故事试图告诉我们,如果你努力,一切皆有可能。
(7)The story is really .
这个故事真的很有趣且有意义。
(8)The story mainly teaches us— .
这个故事主要教会我们——永不言弃。
3.范文品鉴
My Favourite Story
My favourite story is The Fox and the Crow.(开篇点题,点出故事)
Once upon a time, there lived a fox and a crow. The fox was very cunning(狡猾的).One day,
he found the crow carrying a piece of meat in his mouth. He wanted to get the meat from the crow's
mouth. Whatever the fox said, the crow kept standing on the branch in silence until the fox told him
he had the most beautiful voice. The crow was so happy to hear this that he opened his mouth to sing
a song. As a result, as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got
it.(故事大概)
I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds us that we should never believe
the person who wants to cheat us.(评价与启发)
类文训练
假如你是某国际学校的学生,下周你校将和英国的Park School进行一次线上文化交流活动,你将参与其中的"寓言故事"板块。你打算分享《画蛇添足》这个故事,请根据以下提示写一篇60词左右的短文,为活动做准备。
get a pot of wine(一壶酒);make a rule; draw a snake with a stick; pick up the wine; add feet
to his snake; take away the pot
答案
2.第一步:审题
记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时
第三步:句子积累
(1)Once upon a time; there was/lived (2)share an interesting story (3)a long time ago
(4)he was sleeping (5)Although; to move (6)anything is possible if you work hard
(7)interesting and meaningful (8)never give up
类文训练
One possible version:
A long time ago, a few people got a pot of wine, but each of them wanted to drink it alone. So they made
a rule. Everyone would draw a snake using a stick on the ground, and the first to finish would drink the wine.
Soon, one of them finished his drawing. When he picked up the wine, he saw the others were still busy
drawing, so he decided to add feet to his snake. But before he finished, another man finished his drawing and
took away the pot. He said, "Snakes have no feet, so the wine should be mine." Then he drank all the wine.
The story tells us that going too far is as bad as not going far enough.
记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时
第三步:句子积累
(1)Once upon a time; there was/lived (2)share an interesting story (3)a long time ago
(4)he was sleeping (5)Although; to move (6)anything is possible if you work hard
(7)interesting and meaningful (8)never give up
类文训练
One possible version:
A long time ago, a few people got a pot of wine, but each of them wanted to drink it alone. So they made
a rule. Everyone would draw a snake using a stick on the ground, and the first to finish would drink the wine.
Soon, one of them finished his drawing. When he picked up the wine, he saw the others were still busy
drawing, so he decided to add feet to his snake. But before he finished, another man finished his drawing and
took away the pot. He said, "Snakes have no feet, so the wine should be mine." Then he drank all the wine.
The story tells us that going too far is as bad as not going far enough.
解析
【分析】
这道题是英语故事类写作训练，解题思路可以分三步走：
1. 先完成审题环节：明确写作的体裁、人称、时态三个核心要素，确定故事类写作的基本框架要求；
2. 完成句子积累部分：把故事类叙事常用的固定搭配、句型逐一补全，夯实基础表达储备；
3. 完成最终写作：按照题目给出的「引入话题-故事梗概-评价启发」的三段式提纲，把所有情节提示词按故事发展的时间顺序串联起来，保证叙事通顺、逻辑连贯，字数符合要求，最后点明寓言的寓意即可。
【解析】
1. 审题部分：
本次写作要求讲述一则寓言故事，属于记叙文体裁；叙事故事的主体人物都不是作者本人，使用第三人称叙述；故事是虚构的过往事件，核心时态为一般过去时。
2. 句子积累部分：
(1) 固定表达Once upon a time表示“从前”，后面接there was/lived表示“存在有”，完全匹配中文语义；
(2) want to后接动词原形，搭配share an interesting story对应“分享一个有趣的故事”的含义；
(3) a long time ago是表示“很久以前”的常用时间状语，符合语境；
(4) while引导过去进行时的从句，填he was sleeping对应“他正在睡觉”的语义；
(5) Although引导让步状语从句，try to do sth是固定搭配表示“试图做某事”，填入后完全匹配中文含义；
(6) 语义“如果你努力，一切皆有可能”对应英文表达anything is possible if you work hard；
(7) 直接填入interesting and meaningful对应“有趣且有意义”的描述；
(8) 固定短语never give up对应“永不言弃”的含义。
3. 类文训练部分：
按照故事发展顺序，先交代故事背景，再依次描述众人比赛画蛇、一人先完成后给蛇添足、最后失去酒的完整情节，串联所有提示的短语，最后点明故事寓意，即可得到符合要求的短文。
【答案】
2.第一步:审题
记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时
第三步:句子积累
(1)Once upon a time; there was/lived (2)share an interesting story (3)a long time ago
(4)he was sleeping (5)Although; to move (6)anything is possible if you work hard
(7)interesting and meaningful (8)never give up
类文训练
One possible version:
A long time ago, a few people got a pot of wine, but each of them wanted to drink it alone. So they made a rule. Everyone would draw a snake using a stick on the ground, and the first to finish would drink the wine. Soon, one of them finished his drawing. When he picked up the wine, he saw the others were still busy drawing, so he decided to add feet to his snake. But before he finished, another man finished his drawing and took away the pot. He said, "Snakes have no feet, so the wine should be mine." Then he drank all the wine. The story tells us that going too far is as bad as not going far enough.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题循序渐进引导学生完成故事类写作，从审题搭建框架，到基础句型积累，再到完整写作输出，难度梯度合理，既巩固了学生的时态、短语基础，也锻炼了学生的叙事逻辑能力，同时还能让学生了解中国传统寓言的英文表达，体会寓言背后的道理。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题是英语故事类写作训练，解题思路可以分三步走：
1. 先完成审题环节：明确写作的体裁、人称、时态三个核心要素，确定故事类写作的基本框架要求；
2. 完成句子积累部分：把故事类叙事常用的固定搭配、句型逐一补全，夯实基础表达储备；
3. 完成最终写作：按照题目给出的「引入话题-故事梗概-评价启发」的三段式提纲，把所有情节提示词按故事发展的时间顺序串联起来，保证叙事通顺、逻辑连贯，字数符合要求，最后点明寓言的寓意即可。
【解析】
1. 审题部分：
本次写作要求讲述一则寓言故事，属于记叙文体裁；叙事故事的主体人物都不是作者本人，使用第三人称叙述；故事是虚构的过往事件，核心时态为一般过去时。
2. 句子积累部分：
(1) 固定表达Once upon a time表示“从前”，后面接there was/lived表示“存在有”，完全匹配中文语义；
(2) want to后接动词原形，搭配share an interesting story对应“分享一个有趣的故事”的含义；
(3) a long time ago是表示“很久以前”的常用时间状语，符合语境；
(4) while引导过去进行时的从句，填he was sleeping对应“他正在睡觉”的语义；
(5) Although引导让步状语从句，try to do sth是固定搭配表示“试图做某事”，填入后完全匹配中文含义；
(6) 语义“如果你努力，一切皆有可能”对应英文表达anything is possible if you work hard；
(7) 直接填入interesting and meaningful对应“有趣且有意义”的描述；
(8) 固定短语never give up对应“永不言弃”的含义。
3. 类文训练部分：
按照故事发展顺序，先交代故事背景，再依次描述众人比赛画蛇、一人先完成后给蛇添足、最后失去酒的完整情节，串联所有提示的短语，最后点明故事寓意，即可得到符合要求的短文。
【答案】
2.第一步:审题
记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时
第三步:句子积累
(1)Once upon a time; there was/lived (2)share an interesting story (3)a long time ago
(4)he was sleeping (5)Although; to move (6)anything is possible if you work hard
(7)interesting and meaningful (8)never give up
类文训练
One possible version:
A long time ago, a few people got a pot of wine, but each of them wanted to drink it alone. So they made a rule. Everyone would draw a snake using a stick on the ground, and the first to finish would drink the wine. Soon, one of them finished his drawing. When he picked up the wine, he saw the others were still busy drawing, so he decided to add feet to his snake. But before he finished, another man finished his drawing and took away the pot. He said, "Snakes have no feet, so the wine should be mine." Then he drank all the wine. The story tells us that going too far is as bad as not going far enough.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题循序渐进引导学生完成故事类写作，从审题搭建框架，到基础句型积累，再到完整写作输出，难度梯度合理，既巩固了学生的时态、短语基础，也锻炼了学生的叙事逻辑能力，同时还能让学生了解中国传统寓言的英文表达，体会寓言背后的道理。
【难度系数】
0.6
