主题剖析
本单元写作主题为介绍家庭,核心任务是用所学的词汇与句型,清晰介绍家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好及家庭氛围,学会用一般现在时完整介绍家人,做到条理清楚、表达规范。
典例研析
请以“My Family”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
写作要求:
1. 至少介绍3位家庭成员,包含外貌、性格、爱好,结尾表达情感;
2. 恰当使用连词;
3. 内容充实,语言通顺,意思连贯,表达清晰,书写规范,词数70词左右。

本单元写作主题为介绍家庭,核心任务是用所学的词汇与句型,清晰介绍家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好及家庭氛围,学会用一般现在时完整介绍家人,做到条理清楚、表达规范。
典例研析
请以“My Family”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
写作要求:
1. 至少介绍3位家庭成员,包含外貌、性格、爱好,结尾表达情感;
2. 恰当使用连词;
3. 内容充实,语言通顺,意思连贯,表达清晰,书写规范,词数70词左右。
答案
My Family
I have a very warm family. My dad is tall and strong, he is kind and he likes playing basketball in his free time. My mum has long hair, she is friendly and she always cooks nice food for us. I am an active student, and I love reading story books. We get on well with each other, I love my family so much.
I have a very warm family. My dad is tall and strong, he is kind and he likes playing basketball in his free time. My mum has long hair, she is friendly and she always cooks nice food for us. I am an active student, and I love reading story books. We get on well with each other, I love my family so much.
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作题,主题为介绍家庭。解题思路:① 确定介绍至少3位家庭成员(如爸爸、妈妈、自己);② 针对每位成员,分别从外貌、性格、爱好三个维度描述;③ 运用恰当连词(如and)使语句连贯;④ 结尾表达对家庭的情感,控制词数在70左右,确保内容充实、表达规范。
【解析】选取爸爸、妈妈和“我”作为介绍对象,依次描述他们的外貌、性格、爱好,用连词连接语句,最后表达对家庭的热爱,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】My Family
I have a very warm family. My dad is tall and strong, he is kind and he likes playing basketball in his free time. My mum has long hair, she is friendly and she always cooks nice food for us. I am an active student, and I love reading story books. We get on well with each other, I love my family so much.
【知识点】英语写作、家庭成员介绍、一般现在时
【点评】范文符合写作要求,涵盖至少3位家庭成员,包含外貌、性格、爱好的描述,语句连贯,结尾情感真挚,词数适中,语言通顺规范。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】选取爸爸、妈妈和“我”作为介绍对象,依次描述他们的外貌、性格、爱好,用连词连接语句,最后表达对家庭的热爱,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】My Family
I have a very warm family. My dad is tall and strong, he is kind and he likes playing basketball in his free time. My mum has long hair, she is friendly and she always cooks nice food for us. I am an active student, and I love reading story books. We get on well with each other, I love my family so much.
【知识点】英语写作、家庭成员介绍、一般现在时
【点评】范文符合写作要求,涵盖至少3位家庭成员,包含外貌、性格、爱好的描述,语句连贯,结尾情感真挚,词数适中,语言通顺规范。
【难度系数】0.5
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