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Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and some even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they learn not only from books but also from the internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realise my dream.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and some even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they learn not only from books but also from the internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realise my dream.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and some even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they learn not only from books but also from the internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realise my dream.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】本题为英语书信写作题，要求补充书信中间段落，围绕“生活中的巨大变化”展开。解题思路：1. 明确书信格式，开头已给出，需补充中间主体段及合适的结尾内容；2. 围绕主题选取具体事例（如交通、教育等）体现变化，使内容充实；3. 语言要符合英语写作规范，逻辑清晰，衔接自然，确保书信完整通顺。
【解析】首先承接开头，点明变化的背景（中国经济快速发展）；接着列举具体变化：交通上，家乡的小路变为宽马路，出行方式从步行、骑车变为乘公交或私家车；教育上，学校换新教学楼，学生不仅学习书本知识，还利用网络学习；最后补充对未来的期望，呼应主题，使书信结构完整。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and some even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they learn not only from books but also from the internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realise my dream.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题作文
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求围绕“生活变化”话题展开，内容需具体、逻辑连贯，符合书信格式，能有效考查学生的语言运用和篇章组织能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头，点明变化的背景（中国经济快速发展）；接着列举具体变化：交通上，家乡的小路变为宽马路，出行方式从步行、骑车变为乘公交或私家车；教育上，学校换新教学楼，学生不仅学习书本知识，还利用网络学习；最后补充对未来的期望，呼应主题，使书信结构完整。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Long time no see! I'm writing to tell you great changes in my life.
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in my life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and some even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they learn not only from books but also from the internet.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realise my dream.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题作文
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求围绕“生活变化”话题展开，内容需具体、逻辑连贯，符合书信格式，能有效考查学生的语言运用和篇章组织能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
◆ Step 1 Fill the form.
Change Scenarios(roads,houses...) | Specific Changes(before vs. now) | Your Feelings About the Changes
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答案
| Change Scenarios(roads,houses...) | Specific Changes(before vs. now) | Your Feelings About the Changes |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 1. Roads | Before: The roads in our town were narrow and dirty, there were no street lights at all.
Now: The roads are wide and clean, with green trees and bright street lights on both sides. | It is far more convenient for us to go out, I feel very satisfied with the great change. |
| 2. People's houses | Before: Most families lived in small old houses, they didn't have enough separate rooms for all family members.
Now: Most people live in big bright apartments, and many families have their own home entertainment systems. | Our living conditions have improved so much, I feel our life is becoming much more comfortable. |
| 3. Public transport | Before: People could only take the crowded slow bus or ride bikes to go out.
Now: We have subways, high-speed trains and shared bikes, we can travel to faraway cities in a very short time. | The fast development of transport makes me really excited, it connects our small town with the outside world much more closely. |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 1. Roads | Before: The roads in our town were narrow and dirty, there were no street lights at all.
Now: The roads are wide and clean, with green trees and bright street lights on both sides. | It is far more convenient for us to go out, I feel very satisfied with the great change. |
| 2. People's houses | Before: Most families lived in small old houses, they didn't have enough separate rooms for all family members.
Now: Most people live in big bright apartments, and many families have their own home entertainment systems. | Our living conditions have improved so much, I feel our life is becoming much more comfortable. |
| 3. Public transport | Before: People could only take the crowded slow bus or ride bikes to go out.
Now: We have subways, high-speed trains and shared bikes, we can travel to faraway cities in a very short time. | The fast development of transport makes me really excited, it connects our small town with the outside world much more closely. |
解析
【分析】
这道题要求填写关于生活变化的表格，需明确三列的填写要求：第一列确定变化场景（如道路、房屋等）；第二列对比描述该场景过去（用一般过去时）和现在（用一般现在时）的具体变化；第三列表达对变化的主观感受。解题时先选取3个常见的生活变化场景，梳理每个场景的前后差异，再用准确的英语表达填写，注意时态的正确使用。
【解析】
选取道路、房屋、公共交通三个典型的生活变化场景，分别描述其前后具体变化并表达对应感受，具体内容如下：
1. 场景为道路，过去是狭窄肮脏且无路灯，现在是宽阔干净，两侧有绿树和明亮路灯，感受是出行更方便，对变化很满意；
2. 场景为房屋，过去多是小旧房子，房间不足，现在多是宽敞明亮的公寓，很多家庭有家庭娱乐系统，感受是生活条件大幅改善，更舒适；
3. 场景为公共交通，过去只能坐拥挤的慢公交或骑自行车，现在有地铁、高铁和共享单车，可短时间内去远方，感受是交通发展让人兴奋，小镇与外界联系更紧密。
【答案】
| Change Scenarios(roads,houses...) | Specific Changes(before vs. now) | Your Feelings About the Changes |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 1. Roads | Before: The roads in our town were narrow and dirty, there were no street lights at all.
Now: The roads are wide and clean, with green trees and bright street lights on both sides. | It is far more convenient for us to go out, I feel very satisfied with the great change. |
| 2. People's houses | Before: Most families lived in small old houses, they didn't have enough separate rooms for all family members.
Now: Most people live in big bright apartments, and many families have their own home entertainment systems. | Our living conditions have improved so much, I feel our life is becoming much more comfortable. |
| 3. Public transport | Before: People could only take the crowded slow bus or ride bikes to go out.
Now: We have subways, high-speed trains and shared bikes, we can travel to faraway cities in a very short time. | The fast development of transport makes me really excited, it connects our small town with the outside world much more closely. |
【知识点】
英语时态运用、英语表格写作、生活话题表达
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考察学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的掌握，以及用英语描述生活变化、表达主观感受的能力，贴近日常，易于学生理解和完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题要求填写关于生活变化的表格，需明确三列的填写要求：第一列确定变化场景（如道路、房屋等）；第二列对比描述该场景过去（用一般过去时）和现在（用一般现在时）的具体变化；第三列表达对变化的主观感受。解题时先选取3个常见的生活变化场景，梳理每个场景的前后差异，再用准确的英语表达填写，注意时态的正确使用。
【解析】
选取道路、房屋、公共交通三个典型的生活变化场景，分别描述其前后具体变化并表达对应感受，具体内容如下：
1. 场景为道路，过去是狭窄肮脏且无路灯，现在是宽阔干净，两侧有绿树和明亮路灯，感受是出行更方便，对变化很满意；
2. 场景为房屋，过去多是小旧房子，房间不足，现在多是宽敞明亮的公寓，很多家庭有家庭娱乐系统，感受是生活条件大幅改善，更舒适；
3. 场景为公共交通，过去只能坐拥挤的慢公交或骑自行车，现在有地铁、高铁和共享单车，可短时间内去远方，感受是交通发展让人兴奋，小镇与外界联系更紧密。
【答案】
| Change Scenarios(roads,houses...) | Specific Changes(before vs. now) | Your Feelings About the Changes |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| 1. Roads | Before: The roads in our town were narrow and dirty, there were no street lights at all.
Now: The roads are wide and clean, with green trees and bright street lights on both sides. | It is far more convenient for us to go out, I feel very satisfied with the great change. |
| 2. People's houses | Before: Most families lived in small old houses, they didn't have enough separate rooms for all family members.
Now: Most people live in big bright apartments, and many families have their own home entertainment systems. | Our living conditions have improved so much, I feel our life is becoming much more comfortable. |
| 3. Public transport | Before: People could only take the crowded slow bus or ride bikes to go out.
Now: We have subways, high-speed trains and shared bikes, we can travel to faraway cities in a very short time. | The fast development of transport makes me really excited, it connects our small town with the outside world much more closely. |
【知识点】
英语时态运用、英语表格写作、生活话题表达
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考察学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的掌握，以及用英语描述生活变化、表达主观感受的能力，贴近日常，易于学生理解和完成。
【难度系数】
0.6
◆ Step 2 Interview your classmates or family members to learn about their views on hometown changes. Answer the following questions in English.
1. What's the biggest change you've seen in your hometown? Why do you think so?
2. How have these changes influenced people's daily lives( travel, study…)?
3. Do you like the changes in your hometown? What do you like most?
4. Have you taken photos or kept things to remember the old days of your hometown?
1. What's the biggest change you've seen in your hometown? Why do you think so?
2. How have these changes influenced people's daily lives( travel, study…)?
3. Do you like the changes in your hometown? What do you like most?
4. Have you taken photos or kept things to remember the old days of your hometown?
答案
1. The biggest change in my hometown is that public green spaces and convenient community supporting facilities have increased a lot. When my grandma was interviewed, she told me that most areas here used to be old shabby bungalows and narrow muddy roads with no extra space for leisure, but now there are nearly 10 themed parks and community libraries within 1 kilometer around the residential area, which is totally beyond the imagination of old residents decades ago.
2. For travel, the newly built bus lanes and shared bike stops make it much easier for people to go out, and the roads are wide and flat that we no longer get stuck in mud on rainy days. For study, the community libraries and the free online course resources provided by the local government let both left-behind children and retired elders get access to learning resources they could hardly reach before. For daily life, people can walk to the nearby park to do exercise or meet friends anytime instead of staying in the small dark old houses after dinner.
3. Yes, I really like the warm changes taking place in my hometown. What I like most is that the new constructions never erase the old memories of the town: the old locust tree that I used to climb when I was little is well preserved in the central community park, and the old street snack stall that sells my favorite sugar figurine is arranged with a fixed clean booth near the new market, so the familiar taste and feeling are still here.
4. Yes, I have. I have kept a stack of old photos taken by my dad 10 years ago, which recorded the look of the old muddy road, our old small courtyard, and the original appearance of the old street. I also keep a delicate old wooden spoon that my grandma made decades ago, it was the most commonly used tableware in our old house, and it always reminds me of the warm time we spent in the old courtyard.
2. For travel, the newly built bus lanes and shared bike stops make it much easier for people to go out, and the roads are wide and flat that we no longer get stuck in mud on rainy days. For study, the community libraries and the free online course resources provided by the local government let both left-behind children and retired elders get access to learning resources they could hardly reach before. For daily life, people can walk to the nearby park to do exercise or meet friends anytime instead of staying in the small dark old houses after dinner.
3. Yes, I really like the warm changes taking place in my hometown. What I like most is that the new constructions never erase the old memories of the town: the old locust tree that I used to climb when I was little is well preserved in the central community park, and the old street snack stall that sells my favorite sugar figurine is arranged with a fixed clean booth near the new market, so the familiar taste and feeling are still here.
4. Yes, I have. I have kept a stack of old photos taken by my dad 10 years ago, which recorded the look of the old muddy road, our old small courtyard, and the original appearance of the old street. I also keep a delicate old wooden spoon that my grandma made decades ago, it was the most commonly used tableware in our old house, and it always reminds me of the warm time we spent in the old courtyard.
◆ Step 3 Based on your observations and interviews, write a short essay(about 80 words) about the good changes in your hometown and how they help people.
答案
Great Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. A new community park came into use last year, and people of all ages can enjoy fresh air and do exercise there in their spare time. Besides, three new bus lines are open now, making it much more convenient for people to travel around. All these improvements make our local life far more comfortable than before.
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. A new community park came into use last year, and people of all ages can enjoy fresh air and do exercise there in their spare time. Besides, three new bus lines are open now, making it much more convenient for people to travel around. All these improvements make our local life far more comfortable than before.
解析
【分析】首先审题明确要求：围绕家乡的好变化及对人们的帮助，写一篇约80词的短文。解题思路：先确定家乡具体的积极变化（如公共设施、交通等贴近生活的内容），再分别说明这些变化如何便利人们的生活，最后组织语言，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求，贴合实际。
【解析】先拟定标题，再列举两个典型的家乡变化（新建社区公园、新增公交线），分别阐述它们对不同人群的帮助（公园供各年龄段休闲锻炼，公交方便出行），最后总结变化提升了生活舒适度，控制字数符合要求。
【答案】Great Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. A new community park came into use last year, and people of all ages can enjoy fresh air and do exercise there in their spare time. Besides, three new bus lines are open now, making it much more convenient for people to travel around. All these improvements make our local life far more comfortable than before.
【知识点】英语应用文写作 话题作文
【点评】本题考查英语话题作文写作能力，要求结合生活实际阐述家乡变化及影响，内容贴近学生生活，易于构思，需注意语言简洁通顺、符合字数要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先拟定标题，再列举两个典型的家乡变化（新建社区公园、新增公交线），分别阐述它们对不同人群的帮助（公园供各年龄段休闲锻炼，公交方便出行），最后总结变化提升了生活舒适度，控制字数符合要求。
【答案】Great Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. A new community park came into use last year, and people of all ages can enjoy fresh air and do exercise there in their spare time. Besides, three new bus lines are open now, making it much more convenient for people to travel around. All these improvements make our local life far more comfortable than before.
【知识点】英语应用文写作 话题作文
【点评】本题考查英语话题作文写作能力，要求结合生活实际阐述家乡变化及影响，内容贴近学生生活，易于构思，需注意语言简洁通顺、符合字数要求。
【难度系数】0.5
