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假设你是李华，你校的英语校报正在举办主题为 My Hobby 的征文活动。请根据自身真实情况，描写你的爱好。
要求:(1)内容完整,语句通顺,可适当发挥;(2)100 词左右。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
My Hobby
假设你是李华，你校的英语校报正在举办主题为 My Hobby 的征文活动。请根据自身真实情况，描写你的爱好。
要求:(1)内容完整,语句通顺,可适当发挥;(2)100 词左右。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
My Hobby
答案
One possible version:
My Hobby
My love for basketball comes from my father. When I was a little kid, he often took me to the playground and taught me to shoot baskets. His excitement on the court soon made me fall in love with the sport.
When I was a little kid, I just played for fun, but soon I joined the school team. Gradually, playing basketball has taught me teamwork and perseverance. When we work together to win a game, I learn to trust and encourage my teammates. More importantly, it keeps me strong and confident.
Now that I am older, I can play basketball every weekend. It brings me not only good health but also many true friends. I believe basketball will always be an important part of my life.
（127 words）
My Hobby
My love for basketball comes from my father. When I was a little kid, he often took me to the playground and taught me to shoot baskets. His excitement on the court soon made me fall in love with the sport.
When I was a little kid, I just played for fun, but soon I joined the school team. Gradually, playing basketball has taught me teamwork and perseverance. When we work together to win a game, I learn to trust and encourage my teammates. More importantly, it keeps me strong and confident.
Now that I am older, I can play basketball every weekend. It brings me not only good health but also many true friends. I believe basketball will always be an important part of my life.
（127 words）
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“My Hobby”，需围绕表格给出的四个核心问题（爱好、影响者与开始过程、对成长的帮助、带来的收获）展开。第一步，确定具体爱好（如篮球），保证内容真实可写；第二步，对应每个要点组织内容：先说明爱好的起源（受父亲影响，父亲带自己打球从而爱上），再阐述爱好对成长的益处（培养团队精神、毅力，增强自信与体质），最后说明爱好带来的收获（健康、挚友，成为生活重要部分）；第三步，调整语句通顺，控制字数在100词左右，符合征文要求。
【解析】
本文采用三段式结构：第一段介绍爱好（篮球）的来源，点明受父亲影响，父亲带自己到球场教投篮，从而爱上篮球；第二段阐述篮球对成长的帮助，从最初的娱乐到加入校队，学会团队合作与坚持，提升自信与体质；第三段说明篮球带来的收获，不仅是健康，还有真挚友谊，成为生活的重要部分。全文紧扣主题，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言流畅，符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Hobby
My love for basketball comes from my father. When I was a little kid, he often took me to the playground and taught me to shoot baskets. His excitement on the court soon made me fall in love with the sport.
When I was a little kid, I just played for fun, but soon I joined the school team. Gradually, playing basketball has taught me teamwork and perseverance. When we work together to win a game, I learn to trust and encourage my teammates. More importantly, it keeps me strong and confident.
Now that I am older, I can play basketball every weekend. It brings me not only good health but also many true friends. I believe basketball will always be an important part of my life.
（127 words）
【知识点】
英语书面表达，英语记叙文写作，要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，严格围绕题目给出的四个核心要点展开，内容真实具体，逻辑连贯，语言地道，符合中学生英语写作的要求，能清晰展现爱好的意义，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作主题为“My Hobby”，需围绕表格给出的四个核心问题（爱好、影响者与开始过程、对成长的帮助、带来的收获）展开。第一步，确定具体爱好（如篮球），保证内容真实可写；第二步，对应每个要点组织内容：先说明爱好的起源（受父亲影响，父亲带自己打球从而爱上），再阐述爱好对成长的益处（培养团队精神、毅力，增强自信与体质），最后说明爱好带来的收获（健康、挚友，成为生活重要部分）；第三步，调整语句通顺，控制字数在100词左右，符合征文要求。
【解析】
本文采用三段式结构：第一段介绍爱好（篮球）的来源，点明受父亲影响，父亲带自己到球场教投篮，从而爱上篮球；第二段阐述篮球对成长的帮助，从最初的娱乐到加入校队，学会团队合作与坚持，提升自信与体质；第三段说明篮球带来的收获，不仅是健康，还有真挚友谊，成为生活的重要部分。全文紧扣主题，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言流畅，符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Hobby
My love for basketball comes from my father. When I was a little kid, he often took me to the playground and taught me to shoot baskets. His excitement on the court soon made me fall in love with the sport.
When I was a little kid, I just played for fun, but soon I joined the school team. Gradually, playing basketball has taught me teamwork and perseverance. When we work together to win a game, I learn to trust and encourage my teammates. More importantly, it keeps me strong and confident.
Now that I am older, I can play basketball every weekend. It brings me not only good health but also many true friends. I believe basketball will always be an important part of my life.
（127 words）
【知识点】
英语书面表达，英语记叙文写作，要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，严格围绕题目给出的四个核心要点展开，内容真实具体，逻辑连贯，语言地道，符合中学生英语写作的要求，能清晰展现爱好的意义，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
