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假如 May 是你的好朋友，住在你家隔壁，你们既是邻居又是最好的朋友。请根据下列问题提示，写一篇短文来介绍她。
要点提示：
1. What does she look like?
2. What is she like?
3. What are her hobbies?
4. What is her dream?
要求：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数 90 左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第三人称为主；② 时态：一般现在时；③ 写作时要注意顺序，先描述人物的外貌、个性和特长，再说明朋友的梦想或者未来计划。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第一段 May is both my ... and my best friend ...
第二段 She has a ... face with ... eyes ... She always ... May is ... and is willing to
She is ... She is also ... I can ...
第三段 She has ... She is also good at ... She wants to be ... and travel around ... when she grows up.
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
假如 May 是你的好朋友，住在你家隔壁，你们既是邻居又是最好的朋友。请根据下列问题提示，写一篇短文来介绍她。
要点提示：
1. What does she look like?
2. What is she like?
3. What are her hobbies?
4. What is her dream?
要求：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数 90 左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第三人称为主；② 时态：一般现在时；③ 写作时要注意顺序，先描述人物的外貌、个性和特长，再说明朋友的梦想或者未来计划。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第一段 May is both my ... and my best friend ...
第二段 She has a ... face with ... eyes ... She always ... May is ... and is willing to
She is ... She is also ... I can ...第三段 She has ... She is also good at ... She wants to be ... and travel around ... when she grows up.
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying in the same school.
She has a round face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends. She always wears a smile on her face. May is generous and is willing to share her things with friends. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She always listens to my problems carefully and gives me some help. I can tell her anything because she can always keep a secret.
She has a good voice and sings well. She is also good at riding a bike. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up.
May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying in the same school.
She has a round face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends. She always wears a smile on her face. May is generous and is willing to share her things with friends. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She always listens to my problems carefully and gives me some help. I can tell her anything because she can always keep a secret.
She has a good voice and sings well. She is also good at riding a bike. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up.
解析
【分析】
本题是人物介绍类英语写作题，需根据给定要点介绍好友May。解题思路：①确定人称用第三人称she，时态用一般现在时；②按三段结构写作：第一段点明May的身份（邻居+好友）；第二段描写外貌、性格及与“我”的相处细节；第三段介绍爱好和梦想；③覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，控制词数约90词。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：说明May是邻居兼好友，补充同校就读的背景；2. 外貌描写：用“round face, big eyes, long straight hair”等词汇体现特征；3. 性格刻画：用generous、kind等形容词，结合分享物品、倾听烦恼的事例；4. 爱好介绍：用be good at结构写唱歌、骑车；5. 梦想表达：用“wants to be... and travel around...”说明梦想；6. 检查内容完整性、语句通顺度及词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying in the same school.
She has a round face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends. She always wears a smile on her face. May is generous and is willing to share her things with friends. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She always listens to my problems carefully and gives me some help. I can tell her anything because she can always keep a secret.
She has a good voice and sings well. She is also good at riding a bike. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣要点，条理清晰，语言准确，运用丰富形容词和短语，符合初中英语写作要求，完成了人物介绍任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是人物介绍类英语写作题，需根据给定要点介绍好友May。解题思路：①确定人称用第三人称she，时态用一般现在时；②按三段结构写作：第一段点明May的身份（邻居+好友）；第二段描写外貌、性格及与“我”的相处细节；第三段介绍爱好和梦想；③覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，控制词数约90词。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：说明May是邻居兼好友，补充同校就读的背景；2. 外貌描写：用“round face, big eyes, long straight hair”等词汇体现特征；3. 性格刻画：用generous、kind等形容词，结合分享物品、倾听烦恼的事例；4. 爱好介绍：用be good at结构写唱歌、骑车；5. 梦想表达：用“wants to be... and travel around...”说明梦想；6. 检查内容完整性、语句通顺度及词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying in the same school.
She has a round face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends. She always wears a smile on her face. May is generous and is willing to share her things with friends. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She always listens to my problems carefully and gives me some help. I can tell her anything because she can always keep a secret.
She has a good voice and sings well. She is also good at riding a bike. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣要点，条理清晰，语言准确，运用丰富形容词和短语，符合初中英语写作要求，完成了人物介绍任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
