(2025·江苏淮安·一模)不惧碾作尘,无意苦争春。张桂梅的精神值得我们学习,她的行为值得我们敬佩。在你的成长路上,也一定出现过值得你敬佩的人。这个人可能是你的父母、老师或你的朋友……请以“The person I respect”为题,根据表格中的要点提示,写一篇短文参赛。

【要求】1.不得在作文中出现真实的姓名和校名。
2.语句连贯,词数80左右。
The person I respect

写作指导
1.用第三人称来写。 2.时态为一般现在时。
3.围绕主题正确使用词汇和句型等,清楚并连贯地表达自己的思想,完成写作任务。
写作模板

The person I respect
The person I respect most is my mother. She is an ordinary office worker, and she is always kind and full of patience.
She gets up early every day to prepare warm breakfast for our family. She also takes good care of our family and spends her spare time working as a volunteer to help the elderly in the community.
Her actions have a big influence on me. I learn to be a warm and responsible person from her, and I always try my best to help people in need around me.

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“The person I respect”为题写英语短文，需用第三人称、一般现在时，词数80左右，不得出现真实姓名和校名，围绕值得敬佩的人展开。解题思路：第一步确定贴近生活的敬佩对象（如母亲，易选材）；第二步介绍对象身份与具体事迹，体现敬佩的原因；第三步阐述对象对自己的影响，紧扣主题，保证语句连贯、符合时态要求。
【解析】
写作按以下步骤进行：1. 开篇点明最敬佩的人是母亲，介绍其普通职员的身份；2. 列举母亲的具体行为（早起做早餐、照顾家庭、做社区志愿者），体现其善良、有责任心的品质；3. 说明母亲对自己的影响，升华主题，全程使用第三人称、一般现在时，控制词数符合要求，规避真实信息。
【答案】
The person I respect
The person I respect most is my mother. She is an ordinary office worker, and she is always kind and full of patience.
She gets up early every day to prepare warm breakfast for our family. She also takes good care of our family and spends her spare time working as a volunteer to help the elderly in the community.
Her actions have a big influence on me. I learn to be a warm and responsible person from her, and I always try my best to help people in need around me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时运用、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，选材贴近生活，内容具体充实，符合写作要求；采用第三人称、一般现在时，语句连贯，词数达标，清晰表达了敬佩母亲的原因及母亲对自己的积极影响。
【难度系数】
0.6