三、书面表达。
艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。假如你们学校的英文周刊以“My Favorite Art Course”为题向同学们征稿,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示:

写作要求:
1. 文中需要包含给出的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:charm(魅力)
My Favorite Art Course
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful.
艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。假如你们学校的英文周刊以“My Favorite Art Course”为题向同学们征稿,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示:
写作要求:
1. 文中需要包含给出的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:charm(魅力)
My Favorite Art Course
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful.
答案
My Favorite Art Course
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful. We have many art courses in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. Of all the art courses, my favorite one is painting.
I have two classes a week. They are on Mondays and Thursdays from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on May 30th every year.
I enjoy painting because it makes me happy. With my crayons, I can paint a wonderful world. Besides, drawing allows me to express my feelings and thoughts through pictures.
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful. We have many art courses in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. Of all the art courses, my favorite one is painting.
I have two classes a week. They are on Mondays and Thursdays from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on May 30th every year.
I enjoy painting because it makes me happy. With my crayons, I can paint a wonderful world. Besides, drawing allows me to express my feelings and thoughts through pictures.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“My Favorite Art Course”为题,需结合给定的艺术课程(音乐、绘画等),写出自己最喜欢的艺术课程,要包含课程名称、上课时间/相关活动、喜欢的原因,词数70左右,开头已给出,不能出现真实姓名和学校。解题思路:1. 承接开头,列举学校的艺术课程,对应“艺术课程”要点;2. 点明最喜欢的课程,说明其相关信息(时间/活动),对应“我最喜欢的课程”要点;3. 阐述喜欢的原因,对应“原因”要点;4. 确保语句通顺,控制词数,符合写作规范。
【解析】
按照要求写作:先承接开头介绍学校的艺术课程,再点明最喜欢的课程是绘画,接着说明上课时间,最后阐述喜欢绘画的原因,覆盖所有要点,语言流畅,符合词数要求。
【答案】My Favorite Art Course
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful. We have many art courses in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. Of all the art courses, my favorite one is painting.
I have two classes a week. They are on Mondays and Thursdays from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on May 30th every year.
I enjoy painting because it makes me happy. With my crayons, I can paint a wonderful world. Besides, drawing allows me to express my feelings and thoughts through pictures.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、词汇运用
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺,用词恰当,符合词数要求,是一篇符合规范的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
首先明确题目要求:以“My Favorite Art Course”为题,需结合给定的艺术课程(音乐、绘画等),写出自己最喜欢的艺术课程,要包含课程名称、上课时间/相关活动、喜欢的原因,词数70左右,开头已给出,不能出现真实姓名和学校。解题思路:1. 承接开头,列举学校的艺术课程,对应“艺术课程”要点;2. 点明最喜欢的课程,说明其相关信息(时间/活动),对应“我最喜欢的课程”要点;3. 阐述喜欢的原因,对应“原因”要点;4. 确保语句通顺,控制词数,符合写作规范。
【解析】
按照要求写作:先承接开头介绍学校的艺术课程,再点明最喜欢的课程是绘画,接着说明上课时间,最后阐述喜欢绘画的原因,覆盖所有要点,语言流畅,符合词数要求。
【答案】My Favorite Art Course
Art is full of charm, and art courses make our school life rich and colorful. We have many art courses in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. Of all the art courses, my favorite one is painting.
I have two classes a week. They are on Mondays and Thursdays from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on May 30th every year.
I enjoy painting because it makes me happy. With my crayons, I can paint a wonderful world. Besides, drawing allows me to express my feelings and thoughts through pictures.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、词汇运用
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺,用词恰当,符合词数要求,是一篇符合规范的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
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