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Ⅳ.写作任务
请以 My Space Dream 为题,描绘你的太空梦想。分2－3个理由说明为什么这是你的梦想(如科学研究、资源开发、太空旅行等)。同时表达你对梦想的期待,或它对你的激励。
写作结构图
1.开头段(开门见山,点明梦想)
My space dream is to… /I have a space dream that…
2.中间段(分点说明原因/好处,文章主体)
用First,…Second,…Third,…分3点阐述理由。
理由1:对科学研究和技术发展的好处(如帮助探索其他星球)
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology.
理由2:对资源和未来发展的帮助(如开发新能源)
Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources.
理由3:对人类生活的意义(如太空旅行、拓宽视野)
Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience.
3.结尾段(升华主题,表达期待)
表达对梦想的期待,以及它对你的激励(如努力学习、探索未知)
I hope my dream will come true one day. /I believe that…
No matter how difficult it is,I will stick to my dream and try my best to contribute to space exploration.
范文欣赏
My Space Dream
My space dream is to see a space station built on the moon one day.
First,it will be a great place for scientists to do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology, which can help us learn more about other planets. Second, the moon is full of special energy resources. Developing these new resources can greatly help the development of our Earth. Third, people can also
请以 My Space Dream 为题,描绘你的太空梦想。分2－3个理由说明为什么这是你的梦想(如科学研究、资源开发、太空旅行等)。同时表达你对梦想的期待,或它对你的激励。
写作结构图
1.开头段(开门见山,点明梦想)
My space dream is to… /I have a space dream that…
2.中间段(分点说明原因/好处,文章主体)
用First,…Second,…Third,…分3点阐述理由。
理由1:对科学研究和技术发展的好处(如帮助探索其他星球)
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology.
理由2:对资源和未来发展的帮助(如开发新能源)
Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources.
理由3:对人类生活的意义(如太空旅行、拓宽视野)
Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience.
3.结尾段(升华主题,表达期待)
表达对梦想的期待,以及它对你的激励(如努力学习、探索未知)
I hope my dream will come true one day. /I believe that…
No matter how difficult it is,I will stick to my dream and try my best to contribute to space exploration.
范文欣赏
My Space Dream
My space dream is to see a space station built on the moon one day.
First,it will be a great place for scientists to do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology, which can help us learn more about other planets. Second, the moon is full of special energy resources. Developing these new resources can greatly help the development of our Earth. Third, people can also
答案
My Space Dream
My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My Space Dream”为题，按指定结构完成写作：开头点明太空梦想，中间用First/Second/Third分3个理由阐述（对应科研、资源开发、生活意义），结尾表达对梦想的期待与激励。解题思路：先确定具体太空梦想（如成为宇航员），再围绕题目指定的三个理由方向展开内容，最后升华主题并明确行动决心，确保结构清晰、紧扣主题。
【解析】按照题目要求的写作结构，具体内容如下：
开头段：My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
中间段：First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
结尾段：I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
【答案】My Space Dream
My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文严格遵循题目要求的写作结构，开头点明太空梦想，中间分三点清晰阐述理由，结尾升华主题并明确具体努力方向，内容紧扣主题，语言流畅，符合英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求的写作结构，具体内容如下：
开头段：My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
中间段：First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
结尾段：I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
【答案】My Space Dream
My space dream is to become an astronaut and take a trip to outer space by myself one day.
First, space exploration helps us do scientific research and make great progress in modern technology. If I can go into space, I can help scientists collect first-hand data about other planets, so that we can explore more unknown secrets of the whole universe. Second, outer space is full of new energy and special resources. We can develop these new resources to solve the problem of energy shortage on the earth, and help our home planet achieve more sustainable development. Third, space travel can broaden our horizons and enrich our life experience. Floating in the weightless environment and looking at our blue beautiful earth from space will bring me a special experience that I can never get on the planet.
I hope my dream will come true one day. No matter how difficult it is, I will stick to my dream. From now on, I will study all my subjects hard, especially physics and geography, to make full preparations for realizing my space dream in the future.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文严格遵循题目要求的写作结构，开头点明太空梦想，中间分三点清晰阐述理由，结尾升华主题并明确具体努力方向，内容紧扣主题，语言流畅，符合英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
