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八、(2026·宿迁泗洪期末改编)书面表达(21分)
动物是人类的良友,保护它们就是守护我们共同的家园。学校英语角正在开展以“Let's Protect Animals”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下问题的提示,写一篇英语短文向英语角投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。内容包括以下几个方面：
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息;2. 包括所给提示,内容充实,适当发挥,书写规范;3. 90 词左右。
Let's Protect Animals
动物是人类的良友,保护它们就是守护我们共同的家园。学校英语角正在开展以“Let's Protect Animals”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下问题的提示,写一篇英语短文向英语角投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。内容包括以下几个方面：
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息;2. 包括所给提示,内容充实,适当发挥,书写规范;3. 90 词左右。
Let's Protect Animals
Animals are our good friends. It's important to protect them. They help keep the balance between humans and other lives and make our world better.
However, animals are in danger now. It is difficult for them to have babies. They don't have enough food to eat or places to live. Moreover, air and water pollution also make animals live hard. Natural disasters can also be a problem for them. We must take action now. The government should make laws to protect animals and build more nature reserves. As students, we can tell people the importance of protecting animals.
答案
八、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①题材:保护动物。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出，应根据提示要点进行表达，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明保护动物的重要性；第二步，具体阐述动物面临的问题；第三步，介绍保护野生动物的措施以及呼吁大家保护野生动物。
[词句积累]
①keep the balance 保持平衡 ②between ... and ... 在……和……之间 ③take action 采取行动
④It is difficult for them to have babies.（it is+adj.+for sb to do sth句型）
One possible version:
Let’s Protect Animals
Animals are our good friends. It's important to protect them. They help keep the balance between humans and other lives and make our world better.
However, animals are in danger now. It is difficult for them to have babies. They don't have enough food to eat or places to live. Moreover, air and water pollution also make animals live hard. Natural disasters can also be a problem for them.
We must take action now. The government should make laws to protect animals and build more nature reserves. As students, we can tell people the importance of protecting animals.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①题材:保护动物。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出，应根据提示要点进行表达，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明保护动物的重要性；第二步，具体阐述动物面临的问题；第三步，介绍保护野生动物的措施以及呼吁大家保护野生动物。
[词句积累]
①keep the balance 保持平衡 ②between ... and ... 在……和……之间 ③take action 采取行动
④It is difficult for them to have babies.（it is+adj.+for sb to do sth句型）
One possible version:
Let’s Protect Animals
Animals are our good friends. It's important to protect them. They help keep the balance between humans and other lives and make our world better.
However, animals are in danger now. It is difficult for them to have babies. They don't have enough food to eat or places to live. Moreover, air and water pollution also make animals live hard. Natural disasters can also be a problem for them.
We must take action now. The government should make laws to protect animals and build more nature reserves. As students, we can tell people the importance of protecting animals.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确主题是向英语角投稿呼吁大家保护野生动物，全文以一般现在时为主要时态，要求90词左右，不能出现真实姓名、校名信息。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步开篇点题，先点明动物是人类的朋友，讲清保护动物的重要性，覆盖表格里“维持不同生物间平衡”的要点，适当补充内容让表述更充实；第二步转折引出动物当前面临的生存困境，把题干给出的动物繁衍难、缺少食物和栖息地、空气水污染威胁生存的所有要点全部涵盖；第三步说明可采取的保护行动，覆盖立法、建设自然保护区的要点，补充学生力所能及的相关行动，最后发出呼吁，保证逻辑连贯没有要点遗漏。
【解析】
按照三步规范完成写作：
1. 开篇段：开门见山点明动物是人类的好友，直接点出保护动物的重要价值，使用固定短语keep the balance between...and...，清晰表述保护动物可以维持生态平衡、让世界更美好的核心意义，完成第一部分要点。
2. 主体第二段：用转折词however引出动物的生存现状，使用初中核心句型It is difficult for them to do sth，依次把动物难以繁衍后代、没有足够食物和栖息地、空气和水污染让生存艰难的所有给定要点完整呈现，内容贴合要求。
3. 结尾段：点明要立刻采取行动，先说明政府层面可以出台保护动物的法律、建设更多自然保护区，再补充学生可以向身边人宣传保护动物的重要性，自然传递出呼吁保护动物的核心主题，全文逻辑顺畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Let’s Protect Animals
Animals are our good friends. It's important to protect them. They help keep the balance between humans and other lives and make our world better.
However, animals are in danger now. It is difficult for them to have babies. They don't have enough food to eat or places to live. Moreover, air and water pollution also make animals live hard.
We must take action now. The government should make laws to protect animals and build more nature reserves. As students, we can tell people the importance of protecting animals.
【知识点】
保护动物话题写作；It固定句型；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，从保护意义到现存问题再到行动倡议层层递进，用到了多个初中阶段核心短语和常用句型，行文流畅自然，词数符合要求，适配英语角投稿的语境，学生写作时注意不要遗漏要点，同时规避真实个人信息即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确主题是向英语角投稿呼吁大家保护野生动物，全文以一般现在时为主要时态，要求90词左右，不能出现真实姓名、校名信息。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步开篇点题，先点明动物是人类的朋友，讲清保护动物的重要性，覆盖表格里“维持不同生物间平衡”的要点，适当补充内容让表述更充实；第二步转折引出动物当前面临的生存困境，把题干给出的动物繁衍难、缺少食物和栖息地、空气水污染威胁生存的所有要点全部涵盖；第三步说明可采取的保护行动，覆盖立法、建设自然保护区的要点，补充学生力所能及的相关行动，最后发出呼吁，保证逻辑连贯没有要点遗漏。
【解析】
按照三步规范完成写作：
1. 开篇段：开门见山点明动物是人类的好友，直接点出保护动物的重要价值，使用固定短语keep the balance between...and...，清晰表述保护动物可以维持生态平衡、让世界更美好的核心意义，完成第一部分要点。
2. 主体第二段：用转折词however引出动物的生存现状，使用初中核心句型It is difficult for them to do sth，依次把动物难以繁衍后代、没有足够食物和栖息地、空气和水污染让生存艰难的所有给定要点完整呈现，内容贴合要求。
3. 结尾段：点明要立刻采取行动，先说明政府层面可以出台保护动物的法律、建设更多自然保护区，再补充学生可以向身边人宣传保护动物的重要性，自然传递出呼吁保护动物的核心主题，全文逻辑顺畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Let’s Protect Animals
Animals are our good friends. It's important to protect them. They help keep the balance between humans and other lives and make our world better.
However, animals are in danger now. It is difficult for them to have babies. They don't have enough food to eat or places to live. Moreover, air and water pollution also make animals live hard.
We must take action now. The government should make laws to protect animals and build more nature reserves. As students, we can tell people the importance of protecting animals.
【知识点】
保护动物话题写作；It固定句型；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，从保护意义到现存问题再到行动倡议层层递进，用到了多个初中阶段核心短语和常用句型，行文流畅自然，词数符合要求，适配英语角投稿的语境，学生写作时注意不要遗漏要点，同时规避真实个人信息即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
