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在我们的生活学习中，有许许多多的规
则，请以“Follow class rules”为题，根据下列汉语提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示：
1. 点明班级有哪些基础规则；
2. 列举1～2个常见的违规行为；
3. 说明遵守班级规则的意义，比如营造更好的学习氛围、维护同学间的尊重等。
参考句式：
• Our class has simple rules...
• Rules help us...
• Following them shows...
在我们的生活学习中，有许许多多的规
则，请以“Follow class rules”为题，根据下列汉语提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示：
1. 点明班级有哪些基础规则；
2. 列举1～2个常见的违规行为；
3. 说明遵守班级规则的意义，比如营造更好的学习氛围、维护同学间的尊重等。
参考句式：
• Our class has simple rules...
• Rules help us...
• Following them shows...
答案
参考范文：
Follow class rules
Our class has simple rules to help us learn better. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. We can't eat or drink in class. We should keep quiet and not talk loudly when others are studying. We also need to finish our homework on time.
However, some students often break the rules. Some talk with classmates when the teacher is speaking. Others use mobile phones in class. These actions make it hard for everyone to study well.
Rules help us have a good learning environment. Following them shows respect for our teachers and classmates. If everyone follows class rules, we can study happily and make great progress.
Follow class rules
Our class has simple rules to help us learn better. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. We can't eat or drink in class. We should keep quiet and not talk loudly when others are studying. We also need to finish our homework on time.
However, some students often break the rules. Some talk with classmates when the teacher is speaking. Others use mobile phones in class. These actions make it hard for everyone to study well.
Rules help us have a good learning environment. Following them shows respect for our teachers and classmates. If everyone follows class rules, we can study happily and make great progress.
解析
【分析】
写作时需紧扣题目"Follow class rules"，按照提示分三步展开：第一步用参考句式"Our class has simple rules..."点明班级基础规则，列举课堂常见规则；第二步转折列举1-2种违规行为；第三步用参考句式说明遵守规则的意义，最后总结。
【解析】
1. 开头：用"Our class has simple rules to help us learn better."引出班级规则，列举具体规则：认真听讲、不吃喝、保持安静、按时交作业；
2. 中间：用"However"转折，列举违规行为：上课说话、用手机，说明这些行为影响学习；
3. 结尾：用参考句式"Rules help us..."说明营造好的学习环境，"Following them shows..."说明尊重师生，最后总结遵守规则的好处。
【答案】
Follow class rules
Our class has simple rules to help us learn better. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. We can't eat or drink in class. We should keep quiet and not talk loudly when others are studying. We also need to finish our homework on time.
However, some students often break the rules. Some talk with classmates when the teacher is speaking. Others use mobile phones in class. These actions make it hard for everyone to study well.
Rules help us have a good learning environment. Following them shows respect for our teachers and classmates. If everyone follows class rules, we can study happily and make great progress.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、班级规则英语表达、提示类作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，覆盖所有提示点，运用参考句式，语言简洁通顺，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合要求的提示类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
写作时需紧扣题目"Follow class rules"，按照提示分三步展开：第一步用参考句式"Our class has simple rules..."点明班级基础规则，列举课堂常见规则；第二步转折列举1-2种违规行为；第三步用参考句式说明遵守规则的意义，最后总结。
【解析】
1. 开头：用"Our class has simple rules to help us learn better."引出班级规则，列举具体规则：认真听讲、不吃喝、保持安静、按时交作业；
2. 中间：用"However"转折，列举违规行为：上课说话、用手机，说明这些行为影响学习；
3. 结尾：用参考句式"Rules help us..."说明营造好的学习环境，"Following them shows..."说明尊重师生，最后总结遵守规则的好处。
【答案】
Follow class rules
Our class has simple rules to help us learn better. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class. We can't eat or drink in class. We should keep quiet and not talk loudly when others are studying. We also need to finish our homework on time.
However, some students often break the rules. Some talk with classmates when the teacher is speaking. Others use mobile phones in class. These actions make it hard for everyone to study well.
Rules help us have a good learning environment. Following them shows respect for our teachers and classmates. If everyone follows class rules, we can study happily and make great progress.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、班级规则英语表达、提示类作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，覆盖所有提示点，运用参考句式，语言简洁通顺，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合要求的提示类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
