B. 书面表达
假如你是张华,本周英语课上你们班开展了分享“我最喜欢的一道菜”活动。请你结合上文Nick一步步制作香蕉面包的故事,写一篇英语演讲稿介绍你最喜欢的一道菜。要点如下:
(1)总体介绍:菜名、制作这道菜需要准备的材料;
(2)制作方法:分步骤清晰说明完整制作流程;
(3)总体评价:描述这道菜的味道以及你喜爱它的原因。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish.
假如你是张华,本周英语课上你们班开展了分享“我最喜欢的一道菜”活动。请你结合上文Nick一步步制作香蕉面包的故事,写一篇英语演讲稿介绍你最喜欢的一道菜。要点如下:
(1)总体介绍:菜名、制作这道菜需要准备的材料;
(2)制作方法:分步骤清晰说明完整制作流程;
(3)总体评价:描述这道菜的味道以及你喜爱它的原因。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish.
My favourite dish is tomato and egg soup. It's easy for me to make it. I need some tomatoes, eggs, water and salt.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Then, beat the eggs in a bowl.
After that, pour some water into a pot and bring it to the boil. Put the tomatoes in and cook for a while.
Finally, pour the beaten eggs into the pot and add some salt.
My mother taught me how to make it.
Thanks to her, I also love to cook. The soup is delicious and healthy. I often make it for my family.
答案
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My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish. My favourite dish is tomato and egg soup. It's easy for me to make it. I need some tomatoes, eggs, water and salt.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Then, beat the eggs in a bowl. After that, pour some water into a pot and bring it to the boil. Put the tomatoes in and cook for a while. Finally, pour the beaten eggs into the pot and add some salt.
My mother taught me how to make it.
Thanks to her, I also love to cook. The soup is delicious and healthy. I often make it for my family.
My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish. My favourite dish is tomato and egg soup. It's easy for me to make it. I need some tomatoes, eggs, water and salt.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Then, beat the eggs in a bowl. After that, pour some water into a pot and bring it to the boil. Put the tomatoes in and cook for a while. Finally, pour the beaten eggs into the pot and add some salt.
My mother taught me how to make it.
Thanks to her, I also love to cook. The soup is delicious and healthy. I often make it for my family.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份写一篇介绍最喜欢的菜的演讲稿,需涵盖三个核心要点:菜名与制作材料、分步骤的制作流程、菜品味道及喜爱原因,且需结合给定开头,词数约80,不得照抄原文、出现真实信息。解题思路为:先确定易描述的菜品(如番茄蛋汤),梳理所需材料,再按顺序清晰说明制作步骤,最后补充评价,确保语句连贯、符合要求。
【解析】写作时,首先明确菜品为番茄蛋汤,列出材料:番茄、鸡蛋、水、盐;接着按“洗切番茄→打鸡蛋→烧水→煮番茄→倒蛋液加盐”的步骤说明制作流程;最后描述菜品美味健康,可做给家人,表达喜爱之情,注意控制词数、语句连贯,不违反要求。
【答案】My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish. My favourite dish is tomato and egg soup. It's easy for me to make it. I need some tomatoes, eggs, water and salt.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Then, beat the eggs in a bowl. After that, pour some water into a pot and bring it to the boil. Put the tomatoes in and cook for a while. Finally, pour the beaten eggs into the pot and add some salt.
My mother taught me how to make it.
Thanks to her, I also love to cook. The soup is delicious and healthy. I often make it for my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、食物制作类英文写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活,考查英语表达与逻辑组织能力,要求清晰描述流程,难度适中,能有效检验学生的英语应用水平。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,首先明确菜品为番茄蛋汤,列出材料:番茄、鸡蛋、水、盐;接着按“洗切番茄→打鸡蛋→烧水→煮番茄→倒蛋液加盐”的步骤说明制作流程;最后描述菜品美味健康,可做给家人,表达喜爱之情,注意控制词数、语句连贯,不违反要求。
【答案】My Favourite Dish
Hello! I'm Zhang Hua. Let me introduce my favourite dish. My favourite dish is tomato and egg soup. It's easy for me to make it. I need some tomatoes, eggs, water and salt.
First, wash the tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Then, beat the eggs in a bowl. After that, pour some water into a pot and bring it to the boil. Put the tomatoes in and cook for a while. Finally, pour the beaten eggs into the pot and add some salt.
My mother taught me how to make it.
Thanks to her, I also love to cook. The soup is delicious and healthy. I often make it for my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、食物制作类英文写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活,考查英语表达与逻辑组织能力,要求清晰描述流程,难度适中,能有效检验学生的英语应用水平。
【难度系数】0.6
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