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四、书面表达。
我们在日常学习生活中，难免会用到手机、电脑等新发明。有人认为它们为我们带来了极大的便利，也有人认为它们危害无穷。我们应该如何看待和使用这些发明呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，并在英语课上向大家分享。
内容提示：
1. What's your opinion on these electronic inventions?
2. What's your own experience of using them to explain your opinion?
3. What are your feelings about these inventions?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life.
我们在日常学习生活中，难免会用到手机、电脑等新发明。有人认为它们为我们带来了极大的便利，也有人认为它们危害无穷。我们应该如何看待和使用这些发明呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，并在英语课上向大家分享。
内容提示：
1. What's your opinion on these electronic inventions?
2. What's your own experience of using them to explain your opinion?
3. What are your feelings about these inventions?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life.
They've made our lives more and more convenient. However, it's necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides.
Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And I also seldom played sports with my friends.
I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that I had to make a decision to break the bad habit.
And then I tried to reduce the time of using cellphones through hard work.
This experience teaches me to use new things properly and develop self-control.
答案
范例：
The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life. They've made our lives more and more convenient. However, it's necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides. Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And I also seldom played sports with my friends. I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that I had to make a decision to break the bad habit. And then I tried to reduce the time of using cellphones through hard work.
This experience teaches me to use new things properly and develop self-control.
The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life. They've made our lives more and more convenient. However, it's necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides. Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And I also seldom played sports with my friends. I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that I had to make a decision to break the bad habit. And then I tried to reduce the time of using cellphones through hard work.
This experience teaches me to use new things properly and develop self-control.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需围绕手机、电脑等电子发明，涵盖三个核心要点：1. 对这类发明的观点；2. 个人使用它们的经历；3. 对这类发明的感受。写作时需注意：开头已给出，词数约80，不得出现真实姓名和校名，可适当发挥。解题思路：第一步，承接开头，明确观点（电子发明带来便利但需合理使用）；第二步，结合自身经历（如七年级沉迷手机游戏，影响学习和健康，后改正）；第三步，总结感受（学会合理使用，培养自控力），确保覆盖所有提示，语言通顺。
【解析】写作时采用“观点-经历-感受”的结构：1. 承接开头，提出观点：电子发明让生活更便利，但需合理利用；2. 叙述个人经历：七年级开始沉迷手机游戏，导致课堂注意力不集中、缺乏运动，后决心减少使用时间；3. 总结感受：通过经历明白要合理使用新事物，培养自控力，符合题目要求，词数达标。
【答案】The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life. They've made our lives more and more convenient. However, it's necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides. Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And I also seldom played sports with my friends. I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that I had to make a decision to break the bad habit. And then I tried to reduce the time of using cellphones through hard work.
This experience teaches me to use new things properly and develop self-control.
【知识点】英语书面表达、观点表达、个人经历叙述
【点评】本题为开放性书面表达题，贴近学生日常学习生活，既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力，又引导学生反思科技产品的合理使用，培养正确的价值观，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时采用“观点-经历-感受”的结构：1. 承接开头，提出观点：电子发明让生活更便利，但需合理利用；2. 叙述个人经历：七年级开始沉迷手机游戏，导致课堂注意力不集中、缺乏运动，后决心减少使用时间；3. 总结感受：通过经历明白要合理使用新事物，培养自控力，符合题目要求，词数达标。
【答案】The inventions like cellphones and computers play an important part in our daily life. They've made our lives more and more convenient. However, it's necessary for us to make good use of them.
When I was in Grade Seven, I began to play games on my phone. The games were interesting and I felt kind of relaxed when playing. However, every coin has two sides. Gradually, I found that it was getting more and more difficult for me to pay attention in class. And I also seldom played sports with my friends. I got heavier and heavier. Finally, I realized that I had to make a decision to break the bad habit. And then I tried to reduce the time of using cellphones through hard work.
This experience teaches me to use new things properly and develop self-control.
【知识点】英语书面表达、观点表达、个人经历叙述
【点评】本题为开放性书面表达题，贴近学生日常学习生活，既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力，又引导学生反思科技产品的合理使用，培养正确的价值观，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6
