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九、书面表达
假设你是Li Hua，你所在的Sunshine中学将于12月10日举办科技展（Science Fair）。作为学生会主席，请你写一封正式邀请函，邀请知名校友、著名环保科学家Dr Yuan返校担任开幕式嘉宾并发表演讲。
要求：
1. 使用正式的书信格式（称呼、正文、结束语）。
2. 词数100左右。
3. 包含必要细节（如活动时间、地点、演讲主题、建议等）。
4. 语言得体，体现对受邀者的尊重与期待。
Dear Dr Yuan，
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
假设你是Li Hua，你所在的Sunshine中学将于12月10日举办科技展（Science Fair）。作为学生会主席，请你写一封正式邀请函，邀请知名校友、著名环保科学家Dr Yuan返校担任开幕式嘉宾并发表演讲。
要求：
1. 使用正式的书信格式（称呼、正文、结束语）。
2. 词数100左右。
3. 包含必要细节（如活动时间、地点、演讲主题、建议等）。
4. 语言得体，体现对受邀者的尊重与期待。
Dear Dr Yuan，
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event.
Sincerely，
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
答案
One possible version:
Dear Dr Yuan,
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event. The event will take place at 10:00 a. m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School. If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
As a famous environmental scientist , if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech. It would be great if you could also tell us some simple ways to go green with technology. Your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
Dear Dr Yuan,
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event. The event will take place at 10:00 a. m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School. If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
As a famous environmental scientist , if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech. It would be great if you could also tell us some simple ways to go green with technology. Your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作身份是Sunshine中学学生会主席Li Hua，写作目的是正式邀请知名环保科学家Dr Yuan担任学校科技展开幕式嘉宾并演讲。需遵循正式书信格式，包含活动时间（12月10日上午10点）、地点（Sunshine中学）、演讲主题（科技助力环保及简单的环保科技方法）、提供差旅住宿等必要细节，语言要得体、尊重，词数控制在100左右，确保信息完整且符合邀请信的正式语气。
【解析】
根据正式邀请信的写作要求，补充正文内容：
1. 说明活动的时间、地点：The event will take place at 10:00 a.m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School.
2. 说明提供的便利：If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
3. 明确演讲主题及意义：As a famous environmental scientist, if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, and some simple ways to go green with technology, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech, and your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
4. 表达期待与礼貌：We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Dr Yuan,
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event. The event will take place at 10:00 a. m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School. If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
As a famous environmental scientist, if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech. It would be great if you could also tell us some simple ways to go green with technology. Your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、邀请信写作
【点评】
本题考查正式邀请信的写作能力，要求学生掌握邀请信格式，涵盖活动时间、地点、演讲主题、邀请诚意等必要细节，语言需得体礼貌，符合正式书信语气，是初中英语常见书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作身份是Sunshine中学学生会主席Li Hua，写作目的是正式邀请知名环保科学家Dr Yuan担任学校科技展开幕式嘉宾并演讲。需遵循正式书信格式，包含活动时间（12月10日上午10点）、地点（Sunshine中学）、演讲主题（科技助力环保及简单的环保科技方法）、提供差旅住宿等必要细节，语言要得体、尊重，词数控制在100左右，确保信息完整且符合邀请信的正式语气。
【解析】
根据正式邀请信的写作要求，补充正文内容：
1. 说明活动的时间、地点：The event will take place at 10:00 a.m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School.
2. 说明提供的便利：If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
3. 明确演讲主题及意义：As a famous environmental scientist, if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, and some simple ways to go green with technology, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech, and your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
4. 表达期待与礼貌：We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Dr Yuan,
We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Science Fair event. The event will take place at 10:00 a. m. on December 10 at Sunshine Middle School. If you are able to attend, we will cover all your travel and hotel costs.
As a famous environmental scientist, if you could share how technology helps protect the environment, the students will be very excited and benefit a lot from your speech. It would be great if you could also tell us some simple ways to go green with technology. Your ideas will surely inspire us a lot.
We are looking forward to your reply. If you have any special needs, please let us know. It would be a great honour to have you speak at our school.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Student Council President
Sunshine Middle School
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、邀请信写作
【点评】
本题考查正式邀请信的写作能力，要求学生掌握邀请信格式，涵盖活动时间、地点、演讲主题、邀请诚意等必要细节，语言需得体礼貌，符合正式书信语气，是初中英语常见书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
