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四、书面表达
动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织“Keeping pets”主题征文比赛，请从宠物的种类、技能以及如何照顾宠物等方面阐述你的观点。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends.
动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织“Keeping pets”主题征文比赛，请从宠物的种类、技能以及如何照顾宠物等方面阐述你的观点。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包含所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends.
More and more students in our class keep pets at home. Some have
clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do
wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every
day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They
are our friends and help us live more happily.
clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do
wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every
day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They
are our friends and help us live more happily.
答案
One possible version:
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends. More and more students in our class keep pets at home. Some have
clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do
wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every
day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They
are our friends and help us live more happily.
(80 words)
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends. More and more students in our class keep pets at home. Some have
clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do
wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every
day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They
are our friends and help us live more happily.
(80 words)
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要紧扣“Keeping pets”主题，完成包含宠物种类、技能及照顾方式的短文。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定首句，先引出身边养宠物的普遍现象，让短文自然开篇；
2. 分类列举不同类型的宠物，比如聪明型和温顺型，覆盖“宠物种类”要点；
3. 阐述宠物的技能与作用，比如表演小把戏、陪伴家人，满足“技能”要求；
4. 具体说明日常照顾宠物的行为，如喂食、梳毛、遛弯等，落实“如何照顾”的要点；
5. 最后总结宠物对我们的意义，收尾呼应主题，同时控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：用“More and more students in our class keep pets at home.”承接首句，引出养宠物的现象，自然过渡到下文；
2. 宠物种类介绍：用“Some have clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish.”的并列句式，清晰列举不同性格类型的宠物，丰富内容；
3. 宠物技能与作用：通过“Some pets can do wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members.”说明宠物的趣味技能和陪伴作用，体现宠物的价值；
4. 照顾方式阐述：用“We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them.”的并列动作短语，具体说明日常照顾宠物的行为，符合要求；
5. 结尾总结：用“They are our friends and help us live more happily.”收尾，呼应开头，升华主题，且整体词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends. More and more students in our class keep pets at home. Some have clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They are our friends and help us live more happily.
【知识点】
1. 宠物类英语词汇
2. 日常行为英语表达
3. 主题短文写作
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了宠物种类、技能及照顾方式三个核心要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。文中运用了“Some...Some...”的并列句式，使表达更有条理；同时使用了丰富的动作短语，内容具体充实，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要紧扣“Keeping pets”主题，完成包含宠物种类、技能及照顾方式的短文。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定首句，先引出身边养宠物的普遍现象，让短文自然开篇；
2. 分类列举不同类型的宠物，比如聪明型和温顺型，覆盖“宠物种类”要点；
3. 阐述宠物的技能与作用，比如表演小把戏、陪伴家人，满足“技能”要求；
4. 具体说明日常照顾宠物的行为，如喂食、梳毛、遛弯等，落实“如何照顾”的要点；
5. 最后总结宠物对我们的意义，收尾呼应主题，同时控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：用“More and more students in our class keep pets at home.”承接首句，引出养宠物的现象，自然过渡到下文；
2. 宠物种类介绍：用“Some have clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish.”的并列句式，清晰列举不同性格类型的宠物，丰富内容；
3. 宠物技能与作用：通过“Some pets can do wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members.”说明宠物的趣味技能和陪伴作用，体现宠物的价值；
4. 照顾方式阐述：用“We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them.”的并列动作短语，具体说明日常照顾宠物的行为，符合要求；
5. 结尾总结：用“They are our friends and help us live more happily.”收尾，呼应开头，升华主题，且整体词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Keeping pets
Animals are our friends. More and more students in our class keep pets at home. Some have clever animals like dogs and parrots. Some have gentle ones like cats and goldfish. Some pets can do wonderful tricks to make us happy. They can stay with us and are just like our family members. Every day we take good care of them. We feed them, brush their fur and walk them or play with them. They are our friends and help us live more happily.
【知识点】
1. 宠物类英语词汇
2. 日常行为英语表达
3. 主题短文写作
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了宠物种类、技能及照顾方式三个核心要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。文中运用了“Some...Some...”的并列句式，使表达更有条理；同时使用了丰富的动作短语，内容具体充实，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
