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十、(2026·南京玄武区期中)书面表达(16 分)
假如你是阳光中学的李华，英国的一批学生来你们学校访问交流。请根据导图中的内容提示，选取三个方面用英文向他们介绍你的学校生活。
要求：1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 全文连贯通顺，字迹工整；
3. 词数 80 左右，开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
My School Life
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I am Li Hua.
Thank you very much for coming to our school.
假如你是阳光中学的李华，英国的一批学生来你们学校访问交流。请根据导图中的内容提示，选取三个方面用英文向他们介绍你的学校生活。
要求：1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 全文连贯通顺，字迹工整；
3. 词数 80 左右，开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
My School Life
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I am Li Hua.
Thank you very much for coming to our school.
答案
十、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时。③提示:根据材料所给图示内容,从中选取三个方面进行描述,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,明确身份和写作目的,用简单清晰的语言向来访的英国学生介绍自己的学校生活;第二步,选取三个方面进行描述;第三步,表达对学校生活的热爱和对访客的祝福。
[词句积累]
①after-school clubs 课后俱乐部 ②draw pictures 画画
③have a great time 玩得开心
④Now, let me tell you about my school life.(祈使句)
⑤I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week.(and连接并列句)
⑥We have a big library with many books.(with的复合结构作后置定语)
One possible version:
My School Life
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I am Li Hua.
Now, let me tell you about my school life. First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English. Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week. Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends. I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
Thank you very much for coming to our school.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时。③提示:根据材料所给图示内容,从中选取三个方面进行描述,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,明确身份和写作目的,用简单清晰的语言向来访的英国学生介绍自己的学校生活;第二步,选取三个方面进行描述;第三步,表达对学校生活的热爱和对访客的祝福。
[词句积累]
①after-school clubs 课后俱乐部 ②draw pictures 画画
③have a great time 玩得开心
④Now, let me tell you about my school life.(祈使句)
⑤I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week.(and连接并列句)
⑥We have a big library with many books.(with的复合结构作后置定语)
One possible version:
My School Life
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I am Li Hua.
Now, let me tell you about my school life. First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English. Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week. Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends. I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
Thank you very much for coming to our school.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确体裁是介绍校园生活的说明文，介绍对象是来访的英国交换生，时态选用描述日常状态的一般现在时即可，核心要求是从导图给出的5个校园相关主题里任选3个展开，词数控制在80左右，不能出现无关的真实个人信息。第二步选择自己最容易驾驭的三个主题，比如Lessons、After-school activities、Great places at school，这三个主题有很多现成的常用词句可以用，不容易出错。第三步搭建行文逻辑：先用过渡句承接给定的开头，再分别对三个选定的主题补充合理的生活化细节，最后收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱，同时向来访的同学送出游玩祝愿，保证全文连贯通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作要求：以第一人称介绍自身校园生活，从导图指定的5个主题中选取3个展开，时态以一般现在时为主，词数80左右，不得出现额外的真实校名、姓名信息。
2. 填充内容要点：
① 用过渡句承接给定开头：Now, let me tell you about my school life.
② 第一个主题（Lessons）：介绍学校的课程设置，说明自己喜爱的科目：First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English.
③ 第二个主题（After-school activities）：介绍课后的社团活动：Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week.
④ 第三个主题（Great places at school）：介绍校园里的特色场所：Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends.
⑤ 收尾表达感受与祝福：I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
3. 整合所有语句，调整衔接流畅度，检查语法错误，确认总词数符合要求即可。
【答案】
Now, let me tell you about my school life. First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English. Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week. Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends. I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，一般现在时运用，情景写作表达
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的基础书面表达，给出的思维导图明确划定了写作范围，避免学生出现无话可写的问题，重点考察学生对校园相关基础词汇、常用句式的运用能力，学生只要紧扣导图提示选取三个主题，补充合理细节，保证语句通顺，就可以拿到不错的分数，整体难度不高。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确体裁是介绍校园生活的说明文，介绍对象是来访的英国交换生，时态选用描述日常状态的一般现在时即可，核心要求是从导图给出的5个校园相关主题里任选3个展开，词数控制在80左右，不能出现无关的真实个人信息。第二步选择自己最容易驾驭的三个主题，比如Lessons、After-school activities、Great places at school，这三个主题有很多现成的常用词句可以用，不容易出错。第三步搭建行文逻辑：先用过渡句承接给定的开头，再分别对三个选定的主题补充合理的生活化细节，最后收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱，同时向来访的同学送出游玩祝愿，保证全文连贯通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作要求：以第一人称介绍自身校园生活，从导图指定的5个主题中选取3个展开，时态以一般现在时为主，词数80左右，不得出现额外的真实校名、姓名信息。
2. 填充内容要点：
① 用过渡句承接给定开头：Now, let me tell you about my school life.
② 第一个主题（Lessons）：介绍学校的课程设置，说明自己喜爱的科目：First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English.
③ 第二个主题（After-school activities）：介绍课后的社团活动：Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week.
④ 第三个主题（Great places at school）：介绍校园里的特色场所：Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends.
⑤ 收尾表达感受与祝福：I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
3. 整合所有语句，调整衔接流畅度，检查语法错误，确认总词数符合要求即可。
【答案】
Now, let me tell you about my school life. First, we have many interesting subjects. My favourite is English. Second, there are a lot of fun after-school clubs. I am in the Art Club, and we draw pictures every week. Also, our school is very nice. We have a big library with many books. I often read books there with my friends. I love my school life. I hope you have a great time here too.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，一般现在时运用，情景写作表达
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的基础书面表达，给出的思维导图明确划定了写作范围，避免学生出现无话可写的问题，重点考察学生对校园相关基础词汇、常用句式的运用能力，学生只要紧扣导图提示选取三个主题，补充合理细节，保证语句通顺，就可以拿到不错的分数，整体难度不高。
【难度系数】
0.6
