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五、书面表达。
作为中学生,我们应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观。某英语报社的微信公众号最近围绕此内容推出一期活动,以"我的压岁钱我做主"为主题,向全市中学生征稿。请以"What Do You Do With Your Lucky Money?"为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作提示:
1. Do you manage money?
2. What did you do with your lucky money?
3. What's your advice on how to use the lucky money better?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
What Do You Do With Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our parents did when they were children. As middle school students, it's important for us to learn about money and spend wisely.
作为中学生,我们应该树立正确的金钱观和消费观。某英语报社的微信公众号最近围绕此内容推出一期活动,以"我的压岁钱我做主"为主题,向全市中学生征稿。请以"What Do You Do With Your Lucky Money?"为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作提示:
1. Do you manage money?
2. What did you do with your lucky money?
3. What's your advice on how to use the lucky money better?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
What Do You Do With Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our parents did when they were children. As middle school students, it's important for us to learn about money and spend wisely.
Here is my advice. First, buy only useful things like school things. Don't waste money on toys or snacks you don't really need. Second, save part of it for the future-you might need it later! You can also use a little to buy small gifts for your family, like a birthday card for your dad or mom. This way, we can use lucky money smartly and learn to take care of money.
答案
What Do You Do With
Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our
parents did when they were children. As
middle school students, it's important for
us to learn about money and spend wisely.
Here is my advice. First, buy only
useful things like school things. Don't
waste money on toys or snacks you don't
really need. Second, save part of it for the
future-you might need it later! You can
also use a little to buy small gifts for your
family, like a birthday card for your dad or
mom. This way, we can use lucky money
smartly and learn to take care of money.
Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our
parents did when they were children. As
middle school students, it's important for
us to learn about money and spend wisely.
Here is my advice. First, buy only
useful things like school things. Don't
waste money on toys or snacks you don't
really need. Second, save part of it for the
future-you might need it later! You can
also use a little to buy small gifts for your
family, like a birthday card for your dad or
mom. This way, we can use lucky money
smartly and learn to take care of money.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确核心主题是围绕压岁钱的合理使用完成投稿，需要逐一对应三个写作提示的要求：首先回应第一个问题，明确自己具备管理压岁钱的意识；接着结合自身经历说明自己过往支配压岁钱的实际做法，完成第二个提示的要求；最后梳理给同龄人的合理使用压岁钱的建议，覆盖第三个提示点。写作时要承接题目已经给出的开头内容，适当补充细节，控制词数在要求范围内，不出现真实姓名和校名，保证语句通顺、表意清晰，传递正确的消费观念即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，自然引出自己对压岁钱管理的相关分享，先点明自己日常会主动管理压岁钱；
2. 介绍自己支配压岁钱的实际做法：比如用压岁钱购买学习所需的文具、给家人准备小礼物，同时留存一部分钱存起来，完成第二个写作提示的内容；
3. 分点给出使用压岁钱的合理建议：不要把钱浪费在不需要的玩具、零食上，预留部分存款以备后续不时之需，最后收尾点明合理支配压岁钱能帮助我们学会理财，覆盖所有要点，保证全文逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
What Do You Do With
Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our
parents did when they were children. As
middle school students, it's important for
us to learn about money and spend wisely.
Here is my advice. First, buy only
useful things like school things. Don't
waste money on toys or snacks you don't
really need. Second, save part of it for the
future-you might need it later! You can
also use a little to buy small gifts for your
family, like a birthday card for your dad or
mom. This way, we can use lucky money
smartly and learn to take care of money.
【知识点】
英语短文写作，主题表达，要点整合
【点评】
本篇投稿短文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部三个写作提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，先引出话题再分点阐述做法和建议，语言地道平实，完全符合中学生的英语表达水平，词数符合题目要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，精准贴合征稿主题，传递了正确的金钱观与消费观。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确核心主题是围绕压岁钱的合理使用完成投稿，需要逐一对应三个写作提示的要求：首先回应第一个问题，明确自己具备管理压岁钱的意识；接着结合自身经历说明自己过往支配压岁钱的实际做法，完成第二个提示的要求；最后梳理给同龄人的合理使用压岁钱的建议，覆盖第三个提示点。写作时要承接题目已经给出的开头内容，适当补充细节，控制词数在要求范围内，不出现真实姓名和校名，保证语句通顺、表意清晰，传递正确的消费观念即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，自然引出自己对压岁钱管理的相关分享，先点明自己日常会主动管理压岁钱；
2. 介绍自己支配压岁钱的实际做法：比如用压岁钱购买学习所需的文具、给家人准备小礼物，同时留存一部分钱存起来，完成第二个写作提示的内容；
3. 分点给出使用压岁钱的合理建议：不要把钱浪费在不需要的玩具、零食上，预留部分存款以备后续不时之需，最后收尾点明合理支配压岁钱能帮助我们学会理财，覆盖所有要点，保证全文逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
What Do You Do With
Your Lucky Money?
We have more lucky money than our
parents did when they were children. As
middle school students, it's important for
us to learn about money and spend wisely.
Here is my advice. First, buy only
useful things like school things. Don't
waste money on toys or snacks you don't
really need. Second, save part of it for the
future-you might need it later! You can
also use a little to buy small gifts for your
family, like a birthday card for your dad or
mom. This way, we can use lucky money
smartly and learn to take care of money.
【知识点】
英语短文写作，主题表达，要点整合
【点评】
本篇投稿短文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部三个写作提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，先引出话题再分点阐述做法和建议，语言地道平实，完全符合中学生的英语表达水平，词数符合题目要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，精准贴合征稿主题，传递了正确的金钱观与消费观。
【难度系数】
0.7
