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五、书面表达。（20分）
学校英文报发起“Green life，start from me!”主题征文活动，请你根据以下所给提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，和同学们分享你在环境保护方面的做法和倡议。
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life，I
学校英文报发起“Green life，start from me!”主题征文活动，请你根据以下所给提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，和同学们分享你在环境保护方面的做法和倡议。
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life，I
always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
答案
One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题，主题为“绿色生活，从我做起”，需包含两个核心要点：一是自身践行绿色生活的具体做法（如节约能源、节水、回收利用、绿色出行等）；二是号召他人参与绿色行动的计划（如组织相关活动）。解题时需先梳理思路，衔接给定开头，先阐述自身践行绿色生活的具体行为，再说明号召他人的具体安排，最后发出呼吁，确保内容连贯、要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【解析】首先衔接开头“To live a green life, I”，列举自身践行绿色生活的具体行为：随手关灯、缩短淋浴时间节水、回收纸塑、步行或骑车出行，体现节约能源；接着阐述号召他人的计划，比如组织“绿色周”活动，包含种树、清理校园、分享节能技巧等；最后发出呼吁，鼓励更多人参与，使短文完整通顺，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
【知识点】英语书面表达、绿色生活主题、要点整合
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的两个要点，内容连贯自然，语言简洁通顺，符合征文的格式和词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先衔接开头“To live a green life, I”，列举自身践行绿色生活的具体行为：随手关灯、缩短淋浴时间节水、回收纸塑、步行或骑车出行，体现节约能源；接着阐述号召他人的计划，比如组织“绿色周”活动，包含种树、清理校园、分享节能技巧等；最后发出呼吁，鼓励更多人参与，使短文完整通顺，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I always turn off the lights and the TV when I'm not using them. I also try to use less water by taking shorter showers. They can help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike instead of taking a car.
I think we can do more to protect our environment. I plan to organize a "Green Week" at our school. During this week, we can have activities like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us to live a green life. Let's start from ourselves and make our world a better place!
【知识点】英语书面表达、绿色生活主题、要点整合
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的两个要点，内容连贯自然，语言简洁通顺，符合征文的格式和词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】0.5
