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五、书面表达。(20 分)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 对中国饮食很感兴趣，他想了解你日常的饮食情况以及你对健康饮食的看法。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：你三餐通常吃什么食物；你认为哪些饮食习惯是健康的，哪些是不健康的；鼓励他养成健康的饮食习惯。
要求：
1. 包含题目所给要点，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
3. 70～90 词。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 对中国饮食很感兴趣，他想了解你日常的饮食情况以及你对健康饮食的看法。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：你三餐通常吃什么食物；你认为哪些饮食习惯是健康的，哪些是不健康的；鼓励他养成健康的饮食习惯。
要求：
1. 包含题目所给要点，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
3. 70～90 词。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese food. I usually have porridge and eggs for breakfast. At noon, I eat rice, chicken, and lots of vegetables. For dinner, I often have noodles with some soup.
In my opinion, eating a balanced diet is healthy. We should eat different kinds of food, like fruits, vegetables and meat. However, eating too much junk food is unhealthy.
I hope you can develop healthy eating habits. Eat more healthy food and less junk food. Then you'll be stronger and healthier.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese food. I usually have porridge and eggs for breakfast. At noon, I eat rice, chicken, and lots of vegetables. For dinner, I often have noodles with some soup.
In my opinion, eating a balanced diet is healthy. We should eat different kinds of food, like fruits, vegetables and meat. However, eating too much junk food is unhealthy.
I hope you can develop healthy eating habits. Eat more healthy food and less junk food. Then you'll be stronger and healthier.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给对中国饮食感兴趣的美国笔友Mary写邮件，需包含三个核心要点：日常三餐内容、健康与不健康的饮食习惯、鼓励养成健康饮食。解题思路为：1. 遵循英文邮件的标准格式（称呼、正文、署名）；2. 正文分两部分：先介绍自己的三餐情况，再阐述对健康饮食的看法；3. 适当补充内容使逻辑连贯，控制词数在70-90之间，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开头用“Dear Mary”问候，点明对方对中国饮食感兴趣，引出写作话题；② 介绍三餐：早餐吃粥和鸡蛋，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉和蔬菜，晚餐常吃面条配汤；③ 表达饮食观点：均衡饮食（多吃蔬果、肉类）是健康的，吃太多垃圾食品不健康；④ 结尾鼓励对方养成健康饮食习惯，用“Best wishes”和署名“Yours, Li Hua”结束邮件。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese food. I usually have porridge and eggs for breakfast. At noon, I eat rice, chicken, and lots of vegetables. For dinner, I often have noodles with some soup.
In my opinion, eating a balanced diet is healthy. We should eat different kinds of food, like fruits, vegetables and meat. However, eating too much junk food is unhealthy.
I hope you can develop healthy eating habits. Eat more healthy food and less junk food. Then you'll be stronger and healthier.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、健康饮食话题表达、一般现在时应用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合邮件格式，词数达标，准确传达了信息，同时传递了健康饮食的理念，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李华的身份给对中国饮食感兴趣的美国笔友Mary写邮件，需包含三个核心要点：日常三餐内容、健康与不健康的饮食习惯、鼓励养成健康饮食。解题思路为：1. 遵循英文邮件的标准格式（称呼、正文、署名）；2. 正文分两部分：先介绍自己的三餐情况，再阐述对健康饮食的看法；3. 适当补充内容使逻辑连贯，控制词数在70-90之间，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开头用“Dear Mary”问候，点明对方对中国饮食感兴趣，引出写作话题；② 介绍三餐：早餐吃粥和鸡蛋，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉和蔬菜，晚餐常吃面条配汤；③ 表达饮食观点：均衡饮食（多吃蔬果、肉类）是健康的，吃太多垃圾食品不健康；④ 结尾鼓励对方养成健康饮食习惯，用“Best wishes”和署名“Yours, Li Hua”结束邮件。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese food. I usually have porridge and eggs for breakfast. At noon, I eat rice, chicken, and lots of vegetables. For dinner, I often have noodles with some soup.
In my opinion, eating a balanced diet is healthy. We should eat different kinds of food, like fruits, vegetables and meat. However, eating too much junk food is unhealthy.
I hope you can develop healthy eating habits. Eat more healthy food and less junk food. Then you'll be stronger and healthier.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、健康饮食话题表达、一般现在时应用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合邮件格式，词数达标，准确传达了信息，同时传递了健康饮食的理念，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
