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假如你是李华,你所在的英语班级正在举办“My Special Memory”分享活动。老师邀请每位同学写一篇短文,讲述一段对你影响深刻的经历。这次经历可以是:
1. 你帮助他人的一次经历;
2. 你被他人帮助的一次经历;
3. 你看到或听说的一个关于“传递帮助”的故事。
要求:
1. 何时、何地、谁、发生了什么;
2. 你(或他人)的行动;
3. 这次经历对你或他人的意义是什么;
4. 可适当发挥,80词左右。
1. 你帮助他人的一次经历;
2. 你被他人帮助的一次经历;
3. 你看到或听说的一个关于“传递帮助”的故事。
要求:
1. 何时、何地、谁、发生了什么;
2. 你(或他人)的行动;
3. 这次经历对你或他人的意义是什么;
4. 可适当发挥,80词左右。
答案
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with
warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with
warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
解析
【解析】
本次写作属于话题类记叙文书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题，点明核心事件为去年夏天雨天帮助老人的难忘经历；
2. 主体部分完整交代四要素：时间为夏日雨天下午，地点在公交站附近，人物为“我”和拎着重购物袋的老人，事件为老人雨天拎物行动不便，“我”主动上前帮忙将袋子送到公交站；
3. 结尾升华主题，说明这次经历的感悟：小小善举既能给他人带来便利，也能给自己带来温暖，注意语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、提纲类作文写作、话题书面表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常生活，难度适中，主要考查学生的叙事逻辑能力和英语基础表达能力，写作时需覆盖题干要求的所有要点，可结合自身经历合理创作。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次写作属于话题类记叙文书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题，点明核心事件为去年夏天雨天帮助老人的难忘经历；
2. 主体部分完整交代四要素：时间为夏日雨天下午，地点在公交站附近，人物为“我”和拎着重购物袋的老人，事件为老人雨天拎物行动不便，“我”主动上前帮忙将袋子送到公交站；
3. 结尾升华主题，说明这次经历的感悟：小小善举既能给他人带来便利，也能给自己带来温暖，注意语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、提纲类作文写作、话题书面表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常生活，难度适中，主要考查学生的叙事逻辑能力和英语基础表达能力，写作时需覆盖题干要求的所有要点，可结合自身经历合理创作。
【难度系数】
0.7
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:
时态:
人称:
二、思路指引
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. 做出决定
2. 面对挑战
3. 伸出援手
4. 感到紧张/兴奋
5. 得到教训
6. 深受感动
7. 建立信心
8. 永远记住
四、句型提示
1. 我永远不会忘记我在公园里帮助了一位老人的那一天。
I will the day when I helped an old man .
2. 虽然雨下得很大,我还是决定出去帮忙。
it was raining heavily, I and help.
3. 我走过去,问他是否需要帮助。
I and asked if he needed any help.
4. 这次经历让我明白,善意可以温暖人心。
This experience that kindness can warm .
一、审题
体裁:
记叙文
时态:
以一般过去时为主
人称:
以第一人称为主
二、思路指引
三、写作要点及词汇联想
1. 做出决定
2. 面对挑战
3. 伸出援手
4. 感到紧张/兴奋
5. 得到教训
6. 深受感动
7. 建立信心
8. 永远记住
四、句型提示
1. 我永远不会忘记我在公园里帮助了一位老人的那一天。
I will the day when I helped an old man .
2. 虽然雨下得很大,我还是决定出去帮忙。
it was raining heavily, I and help.
3. 我走过去,问他是否需要帮助。
I and asked if he needed any help.
4. 这次经历让我明白,善意可以温暖人心。
This experience that kindness can warm .
答案
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁:记叙文
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
1. 做出决定 make a decision
2. 面对挑战 face a challenge
3. 伸出援手 offer a helping hand
4. 感到紧张/兴奋 feel nervous / excited
5. 得到教训 learn a lesson
6. 深受感动 be deeply touched
7. 建立信心 build up confidence
8. 永远记住 remember forever
四、句型提示
1. never forget;in the park
2. Although;decided to go out
3. walked over
4. made me understand;people's hearts
一、审题
体裁:记叙文
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
1. 做出决定 make a decision
2. 面对挑战 face a challenge
3. 伸出援手 offer a helping hand
4. 感到紧张/兴奋 feel nervous / excited
5. 得到教训 learn a lesson
6. 深受感动 be deeply touched
7. 建立信心 build up confidence
8. 永远记住 remember forever
四、句型提示
1. never forget;in the park
2. Although;decided to go out
3. walked over
4. made me understand;people's hearts
解析
【解析】
本题为英语记叙文写作指导类习题，包含词汇积累和句型补全两部分：
一、词汇部分：根据汉语释义匹配对应的英文短语：
1. 做出决定：make a decision
2. 面对挑战：face a challenge
3. 伸出援手：offer a helping hand
4. 感到紧张/兴奋：feel nervous / excited
5. 得到教训：learn a lesson
6. 深受感动：be deeply touched
7. 建立信心：build up confidence
8. 永远记住：remember forever
二、句型部分：结合句意、语法和时态要求补全句子：
1. 第一空填never forget表“永远不会忘记”，第二空填in the park表“在公园里”；
2. 第一空填Although引导让步状语从句表“虽然”，第二空填decided to go out表“决定出去”，用一般过去时契合语境；
3. 填walked over表“走过去”，用一般过去时和后半句时态一致；
4. 第一空填made me understand表“让我明白”，第二空填people's hearts表“人心”。
【答案】
一、词汇：
1. make a decision
2. face a challenge
3. offer a helping hand
4. feel nervous / excited
5. learn a lesson
6. be deeply touched
7. build up confidence
8. remember forever
二、句型：
1. never forget；in the park
2. Although；decided to go out
3. walked over
4. made me understand；people's hearts
【知识点】
记叙文写作，常用短语，句型运用
【点评】
本题是英语写作基础训练题，从审题、核心词汇、常用句型到篇章结构都给出了清晰指引，能帮助学生梳理叙事类作文的写作逻辑，积累写作素材，降低记叙文写作门槛。
【难度系数】
0.8
本题为英语记叙文写作指导类习题，包含词汇积累和句型补全两部分：
一、词汇部分：根据汉语释义匹配对应的英文短语：
1. 做出决定：make a decision
2. 面对挑战：face a challenge
3. 伸出援手：offer a helping hand
4. 感到紧张/兴奋：feel nervous / excited
5. 得到教训：learn a lesson
6. 深受感动：be deeply touched
7. 建立信心：build up confidence
8. 永远记住：remember forever
二、句型部分：结合句意、语法和时态要求补全句子：
1. 第一空填never forget表“永远不会忘记”，第二空填in the park表“在公园里”；
2. 第一空填Although引导让步状语从句表“虽然”，第二空填decided to go out表“决定出去”，用一般过去时契合语境；
3. 填walked over表“走过去”，用一般过去时和后半句时态一致；
4. 第一空填made me understand表“让我明白”，第二空填people's hearts表“人心”。
【答案】
一、词汇：
1. make a decision
2. face a challenge
3. offer a helping hand
4. feel nervous / excited
5. learn a lesson
6. be deeply touched
7. build up confidence
8. remember forever
二、句型：
1. never forget；in the park
2. Although；decided to go out
3. walked over
4. made me understand；people's hearts
【知识点】
记叙文写作，常用短语，句型运用
【点评】
本题是英语写作基础训练题，从审题、核心词汇、常用句型到篇章结构都给出了清晰指引，能帮助学生梳理叙事类作文的写作逻辑，积累写作素材，降低记叙文写作门槛。
【难度系数】
0.8
【写作练习】
A Special Experience
A Special Experience
答案
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with
warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with
warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
解析
【解析】
本题为英语命题记叙文写作，要求以“A Special Experience”为题完成作文。写作可采用总分总结构：1. 开篇点题，点明要叙述的特殊经历；2. 中间部分详细交代经历的时间、地点、具体经过，保证叙事逻辑清晰；3. 结尾升华主旨，写明该经历带来的感悟与收获，内容积极向上，符合英语语法和表达习惯即可。
【答案】
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
【知识点】
英语命题写作、记叙文写作、语言综合运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见写作题型，话题贴近学生日常生活，既考查学生英语词汇、句式的综合运用能力，也引导学生感悟生活中的善意，树立正向价值观，参考范文结构清晰、叙事完整、情感真挚，有较高的借鉴价值。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语命题记叙文写作，要求以“A Special Experience”为题完成作文。写作可采用总分总结构：1. 开篇点题，点明要叙述的特殊经历；2. 中间部分详细交代经历的时间、地点、具体经过，保证叙事逻辑清晰；3. 结尾升华主旨，写明该经历带来的感悟与收获，内容积极向上，符合英语语法和表达习惯即可。
【答案】
A Special Experience
I will never forget the day when I helped an old man in the heavy rain last summer. That special experience deeply touched my heart and taught me a valuable lesson.
One cold afternoon, I was waiting for the bus when I saw an elderly man struggling with two heavy shopping bags. The rain was pouring down, and he looked worried. Although I felt a little shy, I decided to offer a helping hand. I walked over, smiled, and asked if he needed help. Together, we carried his bags to the nearby bus stop. He thanked me a lot, which made me realize how a small act of kindness could mean so much.
This experience made me deeply touched.
I learned that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills our own hearts with warmth and purpose. Truly, kindness is a language that everyone can understand.
【知识点】
英语命题写作、记叙文写作、语言综合运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见写作题型，话题贴近学生日常生活，既考查学生英语词汇、句式的综合运用能力，也引导学生感悟生活中的善意，树立正向价值观，参考范文结构清晰、叙事完整、情感真挚，有较高的借鉴价值。
【难度系数】
0.6
