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为了丰富校园生活,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,近期你校校报英语专栏举办了主题为"Getting close to traditional Chinese culture"的征文活动,请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向此专栏投稿,介绍中国传统手工艺品风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性,并分享你的看法。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥；
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China.
为了丰富校园生活,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,近期你校校报英语专栏举办了主题为"Getting close to traditional Chinese culture"的征文活动,请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向此专栏投稿,介绍中国传统手工艺品风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性,并分享你的看法。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥；
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China.
答案
One possible version:
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was first created by a man called Mozi in the Warring States Period. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. Flying kites is a very popular outdoor activity. But most of the kites we fly now are bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was first created by a man called Mozi in the Warring States Period. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. Flying kites is a very popular outdoor activity. But most of the kites we fly now are bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作主题是介绍中国传统风筝，呼应本次征文“走近中国传统文化”的核心要求。接下来先梳理所有必须涵盖的信息点：第一部分历史要提到风筝最早由战国时期的墨子发明；第二部分特征要补充风筝的制作材料、多样外形的相关细节；第三部分文化重要性要覆盖风筝是中国传统手工艺、放风筝是热门户外活动、山东潍坊是世界风筝之都这几个提示点；最后还要补充自己对风筝这类传统工艺的看法。写作时顺着“历史起源-外观特征-文化价值-个人观点”的逻辑顺序展开，承接题目给出的开头，用自然的连接词串联内容，控制总词数在100词左右，保证语法正确、上下文连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是说明文，写作对象是中国传统风筝，面向校报英语专栏的读者，语言风格平实易懂，内容积极正向。
2. 要点整合：
① 承接给定开头，首先介绍风筝的起源：最早由战国时期的墨子发明，后续东汉之后人们开始用纸作为制作风筝的材料；
② 接着介绍风筝的特征：如今风筝有各式各样的造型，比如老鹰、飞机等不同样式；
③ 之后介绍风筝的文化意义：放风筝是非常受欢迎的户外活动，山东潍坊是世界风筝之都，每年都会举办盛大的风筝赛事；
④ 最后输出个人观点：呼吁大家重视传统手工艺的传承，保护中国优秀传统文化。
3. 连贯成篇，检查语法错误，确认所有提示信息都已覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was first created by a man called Mozi in the Warring States Period. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. Flying kites is a very popular outdoor activity. But most of the kites we fly now are bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【知识点】
英语要点写作，传统文化主题表达
【点评】
本篇短文逻辑层次清晰，完整覆盖了题干表格给出的所有提示信息，适当补充的细节内容符合常识，没有偏离主题，语言表达通顺准确，词数符合题目要求，结尾的观点积极正向，完美契合本次征文弘扬中华优秀传统文化的活动主旨，是一篇合格的校园专栏投稿作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确写作主题是介绍中国传统风筝，呼应本次征文“走近中国传统文化”的核心要求。接下来先梳理所有必须涵盖的信息点：第一部分历史要提到风筝最早由战国时期的墨子发明；第二部分特征要补充风筝的制作材料、多样外形的相关细节；第三部分文化重要性要覆盖风筝是中国传统手工艺、放风筝是热门户外活动、山东潍坊是世界风筝之都这几个提示点；最后还要补充自己对风筝这类传统工艺的看法。写作时顺着“历史起源-外观特征-文化价值-个人观点”的逻辑顺序展开，承接题目给出的开头，用自然的连接词串联内容，控制总词数在100词左右，保证语法正确、上下文连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是说明文，写作对象是中国传统风筝，面向校报英语专栏的读者，语言风格平实易懂，内容积极正向。
2. 要点整合：
① 承接给定开头，首先介绍风筝的起源：最早由战国时期的墨子发明，后续东汉之后人们开始用纸作为制作风筝的材料；
② 接着介绍风筝的特征：如今风筝有各式各样的造型，比如老鹰、飞机等不同样式；
③ 之后介绍风筝的文化意义：放风筝是非常受欢迎的户外活动，山东潍坊是世界风筝之都，每年都会举办盛大的风筝赛事；
④ 最后输出个人观点：呼吁大家重视传统手工艺的传承，保护中国优秀传统文化。
3. 连贯成篇，检查语法错误，确认所有提示信息都已覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was first created by a man called Mozi in the Warring States Period. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. Flying kites is a very popular outdoor activity. But most of the kites we fly now are bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【知识点】
英语要点写作，传统文化主题表达
【点评】
本篇短文逻辑层次清晰，完整覆盖了题干表格给出的所有提示信息，适当补充的细节内容符合常识，没有偏离主题，语言表达通顺准确，词数符合题目要求，结尾的观点积极正向，完美契合本次征文弘扬中华优秀传统文化的活动主旨，是一篇合格的校园专栏投稿作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
