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六、VI. 书面表达。
假如你是一名中学生，你校学生会开展了学生们共定校规活动，学校校报英文版为此开设了“Making Rules Together for a Better School”专栏。请写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：
★What rules do we need?
★ Why do we need to follow these rules?
How helpful are these rules?
要求：
1. 信息内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. ___
假如你是一名中学生，你校学生会开展了学生们共定校规活动，学校校报英文版为此开设了“Making Rules Together for a Better School”专栏。请写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：
★What rules do we need?
★ Why do we need to follow these rules?
How helpful are these rules?
要求：
1. 信息内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. ___
答案
Ⅵ. One possible version:
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. At school, teachers and students can work together to
make school rules. It can make the rules work better.
Our school will make some school rules. For example, we can't arrive late for school.
Besides, we must keep quiet in class and we can't talk in class. We have to wear school
uniforms on school days.
As students, it's important for us to study hard so we make rules to help ourselves. I
hope we will be better persons.
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. At school, teachers and students can work together to
make school rules. It can make the rules work better.
Our school will make some school rules. For example, we can't arrive late for school.
Besides, we must keep quiet in class and we can't talk in class. We have to wear school
uniforms on school days.
As students, it's important for us to study hard so we make rules to help ourselves. I
hope we will be better persons.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确题干给出的三个必须覆盖的核心要点：需要制定哪些校规、遵守这些规则的原因、规则能起到的作用。题干已经给出了开头无需重写，第一步先衔接开头，点明本次师生共同制定校规的活动背景，说明共同制定的规则更容易落地执行；第二步结合日常校园场景列举2-3条合理的校规，比如不迟到、课上保持安静、上学日穿校服，内容贴合实际；第三步依次解释遵守规则的原因，最后点明规则对营造良好校园氛围、帮助大家成长的作用，全程控制总词数在70左右，保证语句通顺没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头，引出本次师生共同参与制定校规的活动，点明共同制定的规则执行效果更好，贴合题目设定的活动背景；
2. 围绕第一个要点，列举符合校园实际的具体校规：上学不能迟到、课上保持安静不能随意讲话、上学日必须穿校服，内容真实合理；
3. 依次覆盖剩余两个要点：说明制定规则本质是为了帮助学生更好地投入学习，最终助力全体学生成长为更优秀的人，逻辑连贯，所有提示信息全部覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. At school, teachers and students can work together to make school rules. It can make the rules work better.
Our school will make some school rules. For example, we can't arrive late for school. Besides, we must keep quiet in class and we can't talk in class. We have to wear school uniforms on school days.
As students, it's important for us to study hard so we make rules to help ourselves. I hope we will be better persons.
【知识点】
校园主题写作；要点类作文规范；英语连贯表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常校园生活的要点类短文写作，题干给出的提示信息非常明确，学生只需要结合自身的校园生活常识填充对应内容，注意覆盖全部三个要求的要点，控制词数，避免基础语法错误即可完成写作，同时题目引导学生理解共同参与规则制定的意义，兼具实用性和思想性。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确题干给出的三个必须覆盖的核心要点：需要制定哪些校规、遵守这些规则的原因、规则能起到的作用。题干已经给出了开头无需重写，第一步先衔接开头，点明本次师生共同制定校规的活动背景，说明共同制定的规则更容易落地执行；第二步结合日常校园场景列举2-3条合理的校规，比如不迟到、课上保持安静、上学日穿校服，内容贴合实际；第三步依次解释遵守规则的原因，最后点明规则对营造良好校园氛围、帮助大家成长的作用，全程控制总词数在70左右，保证语句通顺没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头，引出本次师生共同参与制定校规的活动，点明共同制定的规则执行效果更好，贴合题目设定的活动背景；
2. 围绕第一个要点，列举符合校园实际的具体校规：上学不能迟到、课上保持安静不能随意讲话、上学日必须穿校服，内容真实合理；
3. 依次覆盖剩余两个要点：说明制定规则本质是为了帮助学生更好地投入学习，最终助力全体学生成长为更优秀的人，逻辑连贯，所有提示信息全部覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Making Rules Together for a Better School
Rules are important in our life. At school, teachers and students can work together to make school rules. It can make the rules work better.
Our school will make some school rules. For example, we can't arrive late for school. Besides, we must keep quiet in class and we can't talk in class. We have to wear school uniforms on school days.
As students, it's important for us to study hard so we make rules to help ourselves. I hope we will be better persons.
【知识点】
校园主题写作；要点类作文规范；英语连贯表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常校园生活的要点类短文写作，题干给出的提示信息非常明确，学生只需要结合自身的校园生活常识填充对应内容，注意覆盖全部三个要求的要点，控制词数，避免基础语法错误即可完成写作，同时题目引导学生理解共同参与规则制定的意义，兼具实用性和思想性。
【难度系数】
0.7
