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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
你校动物保护俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)需要招募主席(chairperson)，你班所有同学都推荐 Amy 参选。假如你是 David，请你根据以下信息，给学校写一封推荐信。
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3. 词数 90 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
你校动物保护俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)需要招募主席(chairperson)，你班所有同学都推荐 Amy 参选。假如你是 David，请你根据以下信息，给学校写一封推荐信。
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3. 词数 90 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
答案
七、One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
解析
【分析】
这是一封动物保护俱乐部主席招募的推荐信写作题，需根据给定思维导图（Amy的clever、kind、ability三个维度）组织内容。写作思路：1. 围绕“clever”，结合“学东西快、了解很多动物”的要点，补充合理事例（如去图书馆读动物书籍）；2. 围绕“kind”，结合“爱动物、照顾宠物”的要点，补充照顾宠物的具体行为（如遛狗、喂狗）；3. 围绕“ability”，补充具体能力事例（如整理俱乐部活动安排）；最后表达推荐意愿，衔接已给的开头和结尾，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣要点，用简单句和并列句组织内容：
1. 介绍Amy的聪明特质：Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
2. 介绍Amy的善良特质：Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
3. 介绍Amy的能力：Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
4. 补充推荐总结句：We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
确保语法正确，上下文连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
【知识点】
英语书面表达、推荐信写作、形容词运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖思维导图的所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言通顺自然，语法正确，结构清晰，符合推荐信格式，很好完成推荐任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封动物保护俱乐部主席招募的推荐信写作题，需根据给定思维导图（Amy的clever、kind、ability三个维度）组织内容。写作思路：1. 围绕“clever”，结合“学东西快、了解很多动物”的要点，补充合理事例（如去图书馆读动物书籍）；2. 围绕“kind”，结合“爱动物、照顾宠物”的要点，补充照顾宠物的具体行为（如遛狗、喂狗）；3. 围绕“ability”，补充具体能力事例（如整理俱乐部活动安排）；最后表达推荐意愿，衔接已给的开头和结尾，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣要点，用简单句和并列句组织内容：
1. 介绍Amy的聪明特质：Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
2. 介绍Amy的善良特质：Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
3. 介绍Amy的能力：Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
4. 补充推荐总结句：We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
确保语法正确，上下文连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club.
Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she always goes to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes she can introduce different animals to us.
Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog's fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much.
Amy has strong problem-solving skills. Last week, she fixed our club's messy activity schedule and made it clear for everyone to follow.
We all think Amy should be the chairperson.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
David
【知识点】
英语书面表达、推荐信写作、形容词运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖思维导图的所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言通顺自然，语法正确，结构清晰，符合推荐信格式，很好完成推荐任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
