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在生活中,我们可能会遇到一些危险或灾难,如果我们有良好的安全意识和自救常识,就可以保护自己,远离危险。为进一步提高广大师生的安全意识,阳光中学英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“保护自己,远离危险”的英文演讲比赛。假如你是八年级学生李威,请你以“Away from danger”为题,根据以下思维导图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
【要求】1. 演讲稿要根据思维导图所提示的内容展开,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名及校名。
Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
【要求】1. 演讲稿要根据思维导图所提示的内容展开,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名及校名。
Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, for example, a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel.
To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
答案
One possible version
Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, for example, a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, for example, a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Away from danger”为题写英文演讲稿，需依据思维导图的三个分支（身边的危险、危险发生的状况、自我保护措施）展开，开头已给出，词数约80。解题思路：1. 选取身边常见危险（如火灾）对应第一个分支；2. 描述该危险发生时的具体情况（如浓烟、人们慌乱）对应第二个分支；3. 写出对应的自救方法（如湿毛巾捂口鼻、低姿逃生）对应第三个分支；4. 组织语句，确保通顺连贯，符合演讲语气，不出现真实信息，控制词数。
【解析】围绕“远离危险”主题，选取火灾作为示例：首先说明身边存在火灾这类危险，对应思维导图第一个问题；接着描述火灾发生时，浓烟会导致视线不清，人们因害怕而慌乱乱跑，对应第二个问题；最后给出火灾中的自救措施：用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，低姿贴近地面尽快逃生，对应第三个问题。结合已给的演讲开头，组织成符合要求的演讲稿。
【答案】Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, for example, a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
【知识点】演讲稿写作；安全话题英语表达；英文应用文写作
【点评】本题紧扣“远离危险”主题，结合思维导图的三个维度展开，选取具体的火灾案例，内容贴合生活实际，语句通顺连贯，符合演讲稿的格式要求，满足题目的各项规定。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】围绕“远离危险”主题，选取火灾作为示例：首先说明身边存在火灾这类危险，对应思维导图第一个问题；接着描述火灾发生时，浓烟会导致视线不清，人们因害怕而慌乱乱跑，对应第二个问题；最后给出火灾中的自救措施：用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，低姿贴近地面尽快逃生，对应第三个问题。结合已给的演讲开头，组织成符合要求的演讲稿。
【答案】Away from danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, for example, a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
【知识点】演讲稿写作；安全话题英语表达；英文应用文写作
【点评】本题紧扣“远离危险”主题，结合思维导图的三个维度展开，选取具体的火灾案例，内容贴合生活实际，语句通顺连贯，符合演讲稿的格式要求，满足题目的各项规定。
【难度系数】0.6
