Ⅵ. Writing(作文)
71. Write an email of at least 80 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的电子邮件,标点符号不占格)
假设你是Li Hua,你所在的小区最近出现大量违章停车现象:一些车辆占用消防通道(fire lane)、堵住人行道,甚至影响紧急车辆进入。请你帮助小区管理处写一封倡议书,说明你观察到的问题,指出这些行为造成的影响,并提出至少两条可行的建议,呼吁大家共同维护良好的社区环境。
注意:1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear residents,
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
71. Write an email of at least 80 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的电子邮件,标点符号不占格)
假设你是Li Hua,你所在的小区最近出现大量违章停车现象:一些车辆占用消防通道(fire lane)、堵住人行道,甚至影响紧急车辆进入。请你帮助小区管理处写一封倡议书,说明你观察到的问题,指出这些行为造成的影响,并提出至少两条可行的建议,呼吁大家共同维护良好的社区环境。
注意:1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear residents,
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
答案
71.
Dear residents,
Recently, many cars in our community have been parking illegally. Some vehicles block the fire lane, while others occupy the sidewalk, making it difficult for people to walk safely and even preventing emergency cars from entering. These actions not only cause inconvenience but also create serious safety risks for all of us.
To improve our living environment, we strongly suggest that:
All drivers park only in marked parking areas and avoid occupying public passages.
Residents report illegal parking in time so that we can deal with it quickly.
Families remind each other to follow community rules and maintain safe habits.
A clean, safe, and orderly neighbourhood requires the effort of every resident. Let's work together to protect our shared home.
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
Dear residents,
Recently, many cars in our community have been parking illegally. Some vehicles block the fire lane, while others occupy the sidewalk, making it difficult for people to walk safely and even preventing emergency cars from entering. These actions not only cause inconvenience but also create serious safety risks for all of us.
To improve our living environment, we strongly suggest that:
All drivers park only in marked parking areas and avoid occupying public passages.
Residents report illegal parking in time so that we can deal with it quickly.
Families remind each other to follow community rules and maintain safe habits.
A clean, safe, and orderly neighbourhood requires the effort of every resident. Let's work together to protect our shared home.
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
解析
【分析】本题要求以社区管理处的名义撰写一封给居民的电子邮件,需围绕小区违章停车问题展开,遵循“点明问题→说明影响→提出建议→呼吁行动”的逻辑结构,同时要符合邮件格式、不少于80词的要求,且不得出现个人信息。解题时需先确定正式的邮件语气,再依次组织内容:先列举具体违章停车现象(占用消防通道、人行道),再阐述其带来的安全隐患(阻碍行人通行、影响紧急车辆进入),接着提出至少两条可行建议(如停至指定区域、及时举报),最后呼吁居民共同维护社区环境。
【解析】首先,邮件开头使用正式称呼“Dear residents”;第一段点明近期小区存在大量违章停车现象,具体说明车辆占用消防通道、人行道的问题,以及这些行为造成的影响(影响行人安全、阻碍紧急车辆通行,带来安全风险);第二段提出三条可行建议(所有司机停至指定停车区、居民及时举报违章停车、家庭成员互相提醒遵守规则);最后发出呼吁,强调社区环境需要每位居民的努力;结尾署名为“Community Management Office”,符合题目要求,字数达标。
【答案】Dear residents,
Recently, many cars in our community have been parking illegally. Some vehicles block the fire lane, while others occupy the sidewalk, making it difficult for people to walk safely and even preventing emergency cars from entering. These actions not only cause inconvenience but also create serious safety risks for all of us.
To improve our living environment, we strongly suggest that:
All drivers park only in marked parking areas and avoid occupying public passages.
Residents report illegal parking in time so that we can deal with it quickly.
Families remind each other to follow community rules and maintain safe habits.
A clean, safe, and orderly neighbourhood requires the effort of every resident. Let's work together to protect our shared home.
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
【知识点】英语应用文写作、社区公共秩序、英语邮件格式
【点评】这篇邮件结构清晰,逻辑严谨,语言得体,完全符合题目要求:既点明了违章停车的问题及危害,又提出了切实可行的建议,最后发出呼吁,符合社区管理处的身份,字数达标,无个人信息,是一篇合格的应用文写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先,邮件开头使用正式称呼“Dear residents”;第一段点明近期小区存在大量违章停车现象,具体说明车辆占用消防通道、人行道的问题,以及这些行为造成的影响(影响行人安全、阻碍紧急车辆通行,带来安全风险);第二段提出三条可行建议(所有司机停至指定停车区、居民及时举报违章停车、家庭成员互相提醒遵守规则);最后发出呼吁,强调社区环境需要每位居民的努力;结尾署名为“Community Management Office”,符合题目要求,字数达标。
【答案】Dear residents,
Recently, many cars in our community have been parking illegally. Some vehicles block the fire lane, while others occupy the sidewalk, making it difficult for people to walk safely and even preventing emergency cars from entering. These actions not only cause inconvenience but also create serious safety risks for all of us.
To improve our living environment, we strongly suggest that:
All drivers park only in marked parking areas and avoid occupying public passages.
Residents report illegal parking in time so that we can deal with it quickly.
Families remind each other to follow community rules and maintain safe habits.
A clean, safe, and orderly neighbourhood requires the effort of every resident. Let's work together to protect our shared home.
Sincerely,
Community Management Office
【知识点】英语应用文写作、社区公共秩序、英语邮件格式
【点评】这篇邮件结构清晰,逻辑严谨,语言得体,完全符合题目要求:既点明了违章停车的问题及危害,又提出了切实可行的建议,最后发出呼吁,符合社区管理处的身份,字数达标,无个人信息,是一篇合格的应用文写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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