写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元以“家”为话题，谈论世界各地不同的房屋建筑和家庭生活。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，介绍自己的家或梦想中的家。
写作方法策略
如何写与“家”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，简要说明家的类型、地理位置等信息；主体部分需要详细介绍房屋的布局以及家庭活动；最后抒情总结。
思路导佳作展示高分词句
引出话题
详细介绍
抒情总结
My Dream Home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill, far away from the city centre.
There is a large yard ① outside the house. On summer nights, my parents and I love to sit in the yard and ② have a barbecue. The house has two floors. On the ground floor, there is a big living room ③ where my family spend most of our time together. On the first floor, there is a study, three bedrooms, and a bathroom. On weekends, I enjoy reading in the study. ④ Next to the study is my bedroom. It feels great to have a bedroom of my own.
This is my dream home, a place full of love and happiness.①运用方位介词短语 outside the house, on the ground floor, on the first floor 依次介绍空间布局。
②运用高级词组 have a barbecue, enjoy doing sth, of one’s own, full of。
③运用 where 引导定语从句。
④介词短语 next to 位于句首,句子用完全倒装。
话题写作积累
1. 在……的西/南部
2. 成百上千的
3. 看美景
4. 面积为……
5. 听见某人做某事
6. 好好照顾……
7. 和家人在花园一边聊天一边喝茶很放松。
8. 这种由石头和海草制成的房子可以支撑得住强风。
9. 我的卧室是我最喜欢的地方，在那里我可以逃离世界，拥有自己的宁静。
10. 家是心之所向。

写作提优
话题写作积累
1. in the west/south of …
2. hundreds of
3. look at the nice view
4. have an area of …
5. hear sb do sth
6. take good care of … /look after … well
7. It is really relaxing to chat over a cup of tea with family in the garden.
8. This house made of stone and seagrass can hold up in the strong wind.
9. My bedroom is my favourite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.
10. Home is where the heart is.

【分析】
这是围绕“家”主题的英语写作配套积累题，解题时首先要结合本单元所学的地点描述相关核心搭配，逐个对应中文提示匹配正确表达：遇到短语类题目直接调用课内固定搭配即可，遇到句子类题目优先贴合本单元要求掌握的高分句式（比如it作形式主语、where引导定语从句）来组织语言，注意同义正确表达也要完整标注，最后核对常见相关谚语的标准写法，确保所有内容符合写作使用的规范要求。
【解析】
我们逐题推导正确表达：
1. 表示某区域内部的西部/南部，使用方位固定搭配in the west/south of ...
2. 描述模糊数量“成百上千的”，固定表达为hundreds of
3. “看美景”中“美景”对应nice view，搭配动词短语为look at the nice view
4. 表示建筑面积的固定表达为have an area of ...
5. 感官动词hear的固定搭配“听见某人做某事”为hear sb do sth
6. “好好照顾”有两个常用同义表达：take good care of ... 和look after ... well
7. 本句使用it作形式主语的常用写作结构It is + 形容词 + to do sth，“一边喝茶一边聊天”用chat over a cup of tea表达，组合后得到对应句子
8. 用过去分词短语made of stone and seagrass作后置定语修饰house，“支撑住强风”对应hold up in the strong wind，组合后得到对应句子
9. 用本单元所学的where引导定语从句修饰先行词place，“逃离世界”对应escape from the world，“自己的宁静”对应some peace and quiet of my own，组合后得到对应句子
10. 对应英文常用谚语“家是心之所向”的标准表达为Home is where the heart is
【答案】
1. in the west/south of ...
2. hundreds of
3. look at the nice view
4. have an area of ...
5. hear sb do sth
6. take good care of ... /look after ... well
7. It is really relaxing to chat over a cup of tea with family in the garden.
8. This house made of stone and seagrass can hold up in the strong wind.
9. My bedroom is my favourite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.
10. Home is where the heart is.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，it形式主语句型，定语从句
【点评】
本题完全贴合本单元“家”主题的写作要求，从基础短语到高分句式逐层设置练习，既帮助学生巩固课内核心知识点，也提前积累了写作可用的优质表达，能有效降低后续同主题写作的表达难度，避免出现中式英语问题。
【难度系数】
0.7