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六、书面表达
（2025 镇江调研）良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。近日，阳光中学校刊正在举办以“My healthy life”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是该校学生李明，请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇不少于 70 个词的短文投稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要求：
1. 短文需涵盖思维导图的所有要点，可适当拓展；
2. 不能出现真实个人信息。
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
（2025 镇江调研）良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。近日，阳光中学校刊正在举办以“My healthy life”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是该校学生李明，请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇不少于 70 个词的短文投稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要求：
1. 短文需涵盖思维导图的所有要点，可适当拓展；
2. 不能出现真实个人信息。
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
答案
六、One possible version:
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
I play basketball with friends every weekend to keep fit. It's really fun and helps me relax after studying. For meals, I have eggs and milk for breakfast. At lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables, meat, and rice. I strictly avoid junk food all the time. I go to bed at 10 p. m. every day to ensure enough sleep.
These habits make me energetic and healthy. Let's live healthily!
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
I play basketball with friends every weekend to keep fit. It's really fun and helps me relax after studying. For meals, I have eggs and milk for breakfast. At lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables, meat, and rice. I strictly avoid junk food all the time. I go to bed at 10 p. m. every day to ensure enough sleep.
These habits make me energetic and healthy. Let's live healthily!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My healthy life”，需覆盖思维导图的四个核心要点：运动项目及时间、三餐食物、睡觉时间，结合开头句适当拓展，确保语言通顺、要点齐全，符合英语表达习惯，字数达标且无真实个人信息。先梳理每个要点的具体内容，再用连接词串联成完整短文。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先写运动部分：说明运动项目（如篮球）和时间（每周周末），补充运动的益处；
2. 接着写饮食部分：分别介绍早中晚餐的食物，强调不吃垃圾食品；
3. 再写睡觉时间：说明具体就寝时间，点明保证睡眠的重要性；
4. 最后总结习惯的好处，发出健康生活的倡议。
具体写作时用一般现在时，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
I play basketball with friends every weekend to keep fit. It's really fun and helps me relax after studying. For meals, I have eggs and milk for breakfast. At lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables, meat, and rice. I strictly avoid junk food all the time. I go to bed at 10 p. m. every day to ensure enough sleep.
These habits make me energetic and healthy. Let's live healthily!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康生活话题词汇
【点评】
本题围绕“健康生活”主题，考查学生整合信息、组织语言的能力，要求覆盖思维导图所有要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的基础要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作主题为“My healthy life”，需覆盖思维导图的四个核心要点：运动项目及时间、三餐食物、睡觉时间，结合开头句适当拓展，确保语言通顺、要点齐全，符合英语表达习惯，字数达标且无真实个人信息。先梳理每个要点的具体内容，再用连接词串联成完整短文。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先写运动部分：说明运动项目（如篮球）和时间（每周周末），补充运动的益处；
2. 接着写饮食部分：分别介绍早中晚餐的食物，强调不吃垃圾食品；
3. 再写睡觉时间：说明具体就寝时间，点明保证睡眠的重要性；
4. 最后总结习惯的好处，发出健康生活的倡议。
具体写作时用一般现在时，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】
My healthy life
I am Li Ming. It is important for teenagers to live a healthy life.
I play basketball with friends every weekend to keep fit. It's really fun and helps me relax after studying. For meals, I have eggs and milk for breakfast. At lunch and dinner, I eat vegetables, meat, and rice. I strictly avoid junk food all the time. I go to bed at 10 p. m. every day to ensure enough sleep.
These habits make me energetic and healthy. Let's live healthily!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康生活话题词汇
【点评】
本题围绕“健康生活”主题，考查学生整合信息、组织语言的能力，要求覆盖思维导图所有要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的基础要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
