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七、书面表达(满分 30 分)
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 在过去十年里，深圳已经发生了翻天覆地的变化。
72. 我过去常常骑车去上学，但是现在我发现地铁很方便。
73. 作为中国改革开放的先驱，深圳已经吸引了来自世界的劳工。
74. 这个城市的开拓精神，以及居民的努力和创造力，无疑是深圳成功的关键。
75. 多亏了政府的支持，深圳的生活条件有了大幅提升。
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 在过去十年里，深圳已经发生了翻天覆地的变化。
Great changes have already taken place in Shenzhen in the past ten years.
72. 我过去常常骑车去上学，但是现在我发现地铁很方便。
I used to go to school by bike. But now I find the underground convenient.
73. 作为中国改革开放的先驱，深圳已经吸引了来自世界的劳工。
As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up, Shenzhen has attracted workers from across the world.
74. 这个城市的开拓精神，以及居民的努力和创造力，无疑是深圳成功的关键。
The city's pioneering spirit, together with the hard work and creativity of its citizens, is certainly the key to Shenzhen's success.
75. 多亏了政府的支持，深圳的生活条件有了大幅提升。
Thanks to the support of the government, the living condition in Shenzhen has improved a lot.
答案
A. 句子翻译
71. Great changes have already taken place in Shenzhen in the past ten years.
72. I used to go to school by bike. But now I find the underground convenient.
73. As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up, Shenzhen has attracted workers from across the world.
74. The city's pioneering spirit, together with the hard work and creativity of its citizens, is certainly the key to Shenzhen's success.
75. Thanks to the support of the government, the living condition in Shenzhen has improved a lot.
71. Great changes have already taken place in Shenzhen in the past ten years.
72. I used to go to school by bike. But now I find the underground convenient.
73. As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up, Shenzhen has attracted workers from across the world.
74. The city's pioneering spirit, together with the hard work and creativity of its citizens, is certainly the key to Shenzhen's success.
75. Thanks to the support of the government, the living condition in Shenzhen has improved a lot.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英题目时，首先第一步要先判断句子的核心时态：题干里出现“在过去十年里”“已经”这类提示词，优先选用现在完成时，对应描述从过去持续到现在的变化；第二步拆分句子的核心固定搭配，把中文里的常用表达对应到课本学过的标准英文短语；第三步留意易错语法点，比如主谓一致、不及物短语无被动的规则，最后调整语序让英文表达符合 native speaker 的使用习惯，不要逐字硬翻。
【解析】
71. 时间状语“在过去十年里”提示使用现在完成时，“翻天覆地的变化”对应常用表达Great changes，“发生”用不及物短语take place（无被动形式），主语是复数，现在完成时结构为have taken place，最后补充地点状语in Shenzhen即可。
72. “过去常常做某事”是固定结构used to do sth，“骑车去上学”译为go to school by bike；后半句用find+宾语+形容词作宾补的结构，直接表达“发现地铁很方便”即find the underground convenient，用转折连词but衔接两个分句。
73. 状语部分“作为中国改革开放的先驱”译为As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up，主语Shenzhen是第三人称单数，“已经吸引”用现在完成时has attracted，最后补充宾语workers from across the world即可。
74. 主语核心是The city's pioneering spirit，插入语“以及居民的努力和创造力”用together with衔接，遵循就远原则，谓语和最靠前的单数主语保持一致用is，“...的关键”对应固定搭配the key to sth，组合后得到完整句子。
75. “多亏了”是固定短语Thanks to，“政府的支持”译为the support of the government，后半句主语“深圳的生活条件”是单数，现在完成时结构用has improved a lot表达“大幅提升”。
【答案】
71. Great changes have already taken place in Shenzhen in the past ten years.
72. I used to go to school by bike. But now I find the underground convenient.
73. As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up, Shenzhen has attracted workers from across the world.
74. The city's pioneering spirit, together with the hard work and creativity of its citizens, is certainly the key to Shenzhen's success.
75. Thanks to the support of the government, the living condition in Shenzhen has improved a lot.
【知识点】
现在完成时，固定短语搭配，主谓一致原则
【点评】
本题围绕深圳发展的主题设置翻译考点，贴合初中英语“描述城市变迁”的单元核心场景，既考察了学生对现在完成时这类高频时态的应用能力，也覆盖了课本核心短语的识记，同时暗藏了take place无被动、together with就远原则的易错点，能有效区分学生的基础掌握程度，答题时要注意不要逐字直译，优先选用课内学过的标准表达降低失分概率。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英题目时，首先第一步要先判断句子的核心时态：题干里出现“在过去十年里”“已经”这类提示词，优先选用现在完成时，对应描述从过去持续到现在的变化；第二步拆分句子的核心固定搭配，把中文里的常用表达对应到课本学过的标准英文短语；第三步留意易错语法点，比如主谓一致、不及物短语无被动的规则，最后调整语序让英文表达符合 native speaker 的使用习惯，不要逐字硬翻。
【解析】
71. 时间状语“在过去十年里”提示使用现在完成时，“翻天覆地的变化”对应常用表达Great changes，“发生”用不及物短语take place（无被动形式），主语是复数，现在完成时结构为have taken place，最后补充地点状语in Shenzhen即可。
72. “过去常常做某事”是固定结构used to do sth，“骑车去上学”译为go to school by bike；后半句用find+宾语+形容词作宾补的结构，直接表达“发现地铁很方便”即find the underground convenient，用转折连词but衔接两个分句。
73. 状语部分“作为中国改革开放的先驱”译为As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up，主语Shenzhen是第三人称单数，“已经吸引”用现在完成时has attracted，最后补充宾语workers from across the world即可。
74. 主语核心是The city's pioneering spirit，插入语“以及居民的努力和创造力”用together with衔接，遵循就远原则，谓语和最靠前的单数主语保持一致用is，“...的关键”对应固定搭配the key to sth，组合后得到完整句子。
75. “多亏了”是固定短语Thanks to，“政府的支持”译为the support of the government，后半句主语“深圳的生活条件”是单数，现在完成时结构用has improved a lot表达“大幅提升”。
【答案】
71. Great changes have already taken place in Shenzhen in the past ten years.
72. I used to go to school by bike. But now I find the underground convenient.
73. As a pioneer in China's reform and opening up, Shenzhen has attracted workers from across the world.
74. The city's pioneering spirit, together with the hard work and creativity of its citizens, is certainly the key to Shenzhen's success.
75. Thanks to the support of the government, the living condition in Shenzhen has improved a lot.
【知识点】
现在完成时，固定短语搭配，主谓一致原则
【点评】
本题围绕深圳发展的主题设置翻译考点，贴合初中英语“描述城市变迁”的单元核心场景，既考察了学生对现在完成时这类高频时态的应用能力，也覆盖了课本核心短语的识记，同时暗藏了take place无被动、together with就远原则的易错点，能有效区分学生的基础掌握程度，答题时要注意不要逐字直译，优先选用课内学过的标准表达降低失分概率。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(满分 20 分)
假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔 Kevin 的电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。
To: Liming@netease.com
From: Kevin@hotmail.com
Subject: Changes
Dear Li Ming,
Haven't seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast.
Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a
new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time?
And the May Day holiday is coming. Do you have any plans for it?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Kevin
注意事项：
1. 英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息；
3. 词数在 90 左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin，
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours，
Li Ming
假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔 Kevin 的电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。
To: Liming@netease.com
From: Kevin@hotmail.com
Subject: Changes
Dear Li Ming,
Haven't seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast.
Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a
new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time?
And the May Day holiday is coming. Do you have any plans for it?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Kevin
注意事项：
1. 英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息；
3. 词数在 90 左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin，
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours，
Li Ming
答案
B. 写作
Dear Kevin,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I've changed too. I'm taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Kevin,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I've changed too. I'm taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步要先梳理来信中所有需要回应的核心问题，避免漏点丢分：一共5个必答内容，分别是①家乡的变化 ②李明自身的变化 ③新电脑的日常用途 ④空闲时间的常规活动 ⑤五一假期的安排。接下来顺着题目已经给出的开头逻辑依次展开：先承接开头的“家乡变化”内容展开描述，再过渡到自身的变化，之后依次回答电脑用途、空闲活动，最后说明五一计划，全程保证语句通顺，词数控制在90左右，不出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
写作时按照以下步骤完成：
1. 承接开头提到的家乡变化，补充具体的变化细节：描述家乡新建了很多公园和高楼，道路变得更宽更整洁，符合城镇发展的实际情况。
2. 回应来信询问的自身变化：说明自己长高了，性格也比以前更外向，符合青少年的成长特点。
3. 回答新电脑的用途：说明平时用新电脑上网课学习、听音乐，贴合学生日常使用场景。
4. 介绍空闲时间的活动：说明空闲时经常和朋友一起打篮球，内容积极健康。
5. 说明五一假期的计划：打算去参观城里新开的科技馆，内容合理。
所有内容衔接自然，全部覆盖题干要求的要点，词数符合90左右的要求，没有涉及违规的真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Kevin,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I've changed too. I'm taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
现在完成时表变化
提纲作文要点整合
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了来信提出的全部问题要点，内容贴合学生日常生活，逻辑衔接流畅自然，时态使用准确规范，词数符合题目要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息，完全满足该写作题的各项评分标准，是一篇高质量的参考范文。同学们写这类回信类作文时，可以先把所有需要回应的要点列出来逐一对应作答，就能有效避免漏点失分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步要先梳理来信中所有需要回应的核心问题，避免漏点丢分：一共5个必答内容，分别是①家乡的变化 ②李明自身的变化 ③新电脑的日常用途 ④空闲时间的常规活动 ⑤五一假期的安排。接下来顺着题目已经给出的开头逻辑依次展开：先承接开头的“家乡变化”内容展开描述，再过渡到自身的变化，之后依次回答电脑用途、空闲活动，最后说明五一计划，全程保证语句通顺，词数控制在90左右，不出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
写作时按照以下步骤完成：
1. 承接开头提到的家乡变化，补充具体的变化细节：描述家乡新建了很多公园和高楼，道路变得更宽更整洁，符合城镇发展的实际情况。
2. 回应来信询问的自身变化：说明自己长高了，性格也比以前更外向，符合青少年的成长特点。
3. 回答新电脑的用途：说明平时用新电脑上网课学习、听音乐，贴合学生日常使用场景。
4. 介绍空闲时间的活动：说明空闲时经常和朋友一起打篮球，内容积极健康。
5. 说明五一假期的计划：打算去参观城里新开的科技馆，内容合理。
所有内容衔接自然，全部覆盖题干要求的要点，词数符合90左右的要求，没有涉及违规的真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Kevin,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Gaoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner.
I've changed too. I'm taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends.
For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
现在完成时表变化
提纲作文要点整合
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了来信提出的全部问题要点，内容贴合学生日常生活，逻辑衔接流畅自然，时态使用准确规范，词数符合题目要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息，完全满足该写作题的各项评分标准，是一篇高质量的参考范文。同学们写这类回信类作文时，可以先把所有需要回应的要点列出来逐一对应作答，就能有效避免漏点失分。
【难度系数】
0.7
