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假如你是实验中学的李华,你们学校正在开展“逐梦新征程,阳光体育年”活动。请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文向学校英语广播站投稿,号召同学们积极参加锻炼,享受运动、增强体质、健全人格、锻炼意志。词数为70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含以上信息,可适当发挥。
2. 语义清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua.
假如你是实验中学的李华,你们学校正在开展“逐梦新征程,阳光体育年”活动。请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文向学校英语广播站投稿,号召同学们积极参加锻炼,享受运动、增强体质、健全人格、锻炼意志。词数为70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含以上信息,可适当发挥。
2. 语义清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua.
Today I'm going to talk about sports with you. In order to keep healthy, I often play basketball three times a week at school. Sometimes I go mountain climbing at weekends. Playing sports is important to everyone. We can choose some sports such as running, table tennis and swimming and do them with our family, classmates or friends. Playing sports is a great way to feel better and have fun. It also helps us keep fit and be strong-minded. I hope everyone can take part in sports. So let's play sports together.
答案
One possible version:
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I'm going to talk about sports with you. In order to keep healthy, I often play basketball three times a week at school. Sometimes I go mountain climbing at weekends. Playing sports is important to everyone. We can choose some sports such as running, table tennis and swimming and do them with our family, classmates or friends.
Playing sports is a great way to feel better and have fun. It also helps us keep fit and be strong-minded. I hope everyone can take part in sports. So let's play sports together.
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I'm going to talk about sports with you. In order to keep healthy, I often play basketball three times a week at school. Sometimes I go mountain climbing at weekends. Playing sports is important to everyone. We can choose some sports such as running, table tennis and swimming and do them with our family, classmates or friends.
Playing sports is a great way to feel better and have fun. It also helps us keep fit and be strong-minded. I hope everyone can take part in sports. So let's play sports together.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求以李华的身份向学校英语广播站投稿，号召同学们参加体育锻炼，需结合思维导图的四个维度（what运动项目、why运动意义、how参与方式、hope呼吁）展开。首先承接给定开头引出主题，接着阐述运动的好处（对应why），再举例说明可参与的运动及参与途径（对应what和how），最后发出参与运动的呼吁（对应hope），注意词数70左右，语言通顺、符合投稿语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引出运动主题；
2. 说明运动的益处（如保持健康、锻炼意志等），对应思维导图的why部分；
3. 列举可参与的运动项目（如篮球、跑步等）及参与方式（和同学、朋友一起），对应what和how部分；
4. 发出呼吁，希望大家参与运动，对应hope部分，确保内容完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I'm going to talk about sports with you. In order to keep healthy, I often play basketball three times a week at school. Sometimes I go mountain climbing at weekends. Playing sports is important to everyone. We can choose some sports such as running, table tennis and swimming and do them with our family, classmates or friends.
Playing sports is a great way to feel better and have fun. It also helps us keep fit and be strong-minded. I hope everyone can take part in sports. So let's play sports together.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，运动话题表达，句子连贯运用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖思维导图的所有要点，内容充实具体，语言通顺自然，符合英语广播站投稿的要求，号召性强，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作要求以李华的身份向学校英语广播站投稿，号召同学们参加体育锻炼，需结合思维导图的四个维度（what运动项目、why运动意义、how参与方式、hope呼吁）展开。首先承接给定开头引出主题，接着阐述运动的好处（对应why），再举例说明可参与的运动及参与途径（对应what和how），最后发出参与运动的呼吁（对应hope），注意词数70左右，语言通顺、符合投稿语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引出运动主题；
2. 说明运动的益处（如保持健康、锻炼意志等），对应思维导图的why部分；
3. 列举可参与的运动项目（如篮球、跑步等）及参与方式（和同学、朋友一起），对应what和how部分；
4. 发出呼吁，希望大家参与运动，对应hope部分，确保内容完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
Let’s Play Sports!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I'm going to talk about sports with you. In order to keep healthy, I often play basketball three times a week at school. Sometimes I go mountain climbing at weekends. Playing sports is important to everyone. We can choose some sports such as running, table tennis and swimming and do them with our family, classmates or friends.
Playing sports is a great way to feel better and have fun. It also helps us keep fit and be strong-minded. I hope everyone can take part in sports. So let's play sports together.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，运动话题表达，句子连贯运用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖思维导图的所有要点，内容充实具体，语言通顺自然，符合英语广播站投稿的要求，号召性强，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
