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八、(2026·连云港期末)书面表达(25 分)
你的英国笔友 Amy 想了解更多的中国传统节日,请你以 Li Ming 的身份根据提示给她写一封邮件,向她介绍中国的元宵节,并邀请她来中国共度佳节。
内容要点:1.元宵节的时间;2.节日着装及活动;3.意义等。
参考词汇:the 15th day of the first lunar month(农历正月十五);guess lantern riddles(猜灯谜)
注意:1.词数不少于 90,邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.文章必须包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3.文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
你的英国笔友 Amy 想了解更多的中国传统节日,请你以 Li Ming 的身份根据提示给她写一封邮件,向她介绍中国的元宵节,并邀请她来中国共度佳节。
内容要点:1.元宵节的时间;2.节日着装及活动;3.意义等。
参考词汇:the 15th day of the first lunar month(农历正月十五);guess lantern riddles(猜灯谜)
注意:1.词数不少于 90,邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.文章必须包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3.文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
答案
八、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:应用文。②时态:主要为一般现在时(介绍节日习俗),邀请部分用一般将来时(描述未来共度场景)。③提示:须包含全部要点(节日时间、着装及活动、节日意义),并自然融入邀请意图,适当补充细节,让内容更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇承接已给出的开头句,引出元宵节主题,然后点明节日日期,奠定介绍基调;第二步,分述核心内容,先说明节日着装及象征意义,再列举猜灯谜、吃汤圆等典型活动以补充细节,让场景更具体;第三步,升华节日意义,结合团圆、祈福等内涵,自然过渡到邀请,表达期待对方前来共度的心愿;第四步,礼貌收尾,用简洁的话语强化邀请诚意,呼应书信格式。
[词句积累]
①stand for代表 ②carry one's wishes承载某人的愿望
③bright and hopeful明亮且充满希望的 ④celebrate with sb与某人一起庆祝
⑤It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March.(用"fall on"精准表达节日日期,符合英文表达习惯)
⑥On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck.(用破折号补充说明颜色的象征意义,逻辑更连贯)
⑦I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me.("hope+宾语从句"结构,表达邀请意图,语气真诚)
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March. On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck. We hope for a lucky new year ahead, and there are lots of fun activities. We eat sweet tangyuan, enjoy colourful lanterns, guess lantern riddles, set off fireworks, and have a big family dinner together. The warm lights and beautiful fireworks carry people's wishes for a bright and hopeful future.
I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me. You'll love the happy festival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
hope for是固定搭配,表示"期望,盼望"。
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:应用文。②时态:主要为一般现在时(介绍节日习俗),邀请部分用一般将来时(描述未来共度场景)。③提示:须包含全部要点(节日时间、着装及活动、节日意义),并自然融入邀请意图,适当补充细节,让内容更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇承接已给出的开头句,引出元宵节主题,然后点明节日日期,奠定介绍基调;第二步,分述核心内容,先说明节日着装及象征意义,再列举猜灯谜、吃汤圆等典型活动以补充细节,让场景更具体;第三步,升华节日意义,结合团圆、祈福等内涵,自然过渡到邀请,表达期待对方前来共度的心愿;第四步,礼貌收尾,用简洁的话语强化邀请诚意,呼应书信格式。
[词句积累]
①stand for代表 ②carry one's wishes承载某人的愿望
③bright and hopeful明亮且充满希望的 ④celebrate with sb与某人一起庆祝
⑤It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March.(用"fall on"精准表达节日日期,符合英文表达习惯)
⑥On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck.(用破折号补充说明颜色的象征意义,逻辑更连贯)
⑦I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me.("hope+宾语从句"结构,表达邀请意图,语气真诚)
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March. On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck. We hope for a lucky new year ahead, and there are lots of fun activities. We eat sweet tangyuan, enjoy colourful lanterns, guess lantern riddles, set off fireworks, and have a big family dinner together. The warm lights and beautiful fireworks carry people's wishes for a bright and hopeful future.
I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me. You'll love the happy festival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
hope for是固定搭配,表示"期望,盼望"。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：以李明的身份给英国笔友写邮件介绍元宵节并发出邀约，必须覆盖全部3个内容要点。首先第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先直接点明元宵节的具体时间，用上题干给出的参考词汇the 15th day of the first lunar month，还可以补充对应的公历大致月份让介绍更真实；第二步接着介绍节日的着装特点，说明大家偏好的服饰风格和背后的吉祥寓意，之后列举元宵节的特色活动，自然把题干给出的guess lantern riddles融入进去，还可以补充吃汤圆、赏灯、家庭聚餐等常见习俗丰富内容；第三步再点明节日的团圆、祈福的核心意义，最后顺理成章过渡到对Amy的邀请，表达希望对方来中国共度佳节的心愿，全程注意时态以一般现在时为主，控制词数满足不少于90的要求，不要出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
写作按照四步规范完成：
1. 要点一（节日时间）：开篇承接给定开头，直接说明元宵节的时间：It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March，清晰准确交代节日属性，符合英文介绍节日的常用表达习惯。
2. 要点二（着装及活动）：先介绍节日着装：说明当天大家会穿鲜亮的传统服饰，比如红色毛衣，补充说明红色在中国文化里代表好运，之后依次列举吃汤圆、观赏花灯、猜灯谜、放烟花、全家共享团圆饭等特色活动，把题干给出的参考词汇自然嵌入内容，场景感更饱满。
3. 要点三（节日意义）：点明节日内核，暖光的花灯和绚烂的烟花承载着人们对明亮顺遂的未来的美好期许，节日核心寓意是阖家团圆，为新一年祈福。
4. 收尾邀约：自然过渡到邀请内容，真诚表达希望Amy来中国一同体验元宵节的心愿，符合邮件的交流语气，收尾简洁得体。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March. On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck. We hope for a lucky new year ahead, and there are lots of fun activities. We eat sweet tangyuan, enjoy colourful lanterns, guess lantern riddles, set off fireworks, and have a big family dinner together. The warm lights and beautiful fireworks carry people's wishes for a bright and hopeful future.
I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me. You'll love the happy festival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信写作，传统节日英文表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于应用文写作考点，贴合跨文化交流的真实场景，既考查学生基础的句式搭建、词汇运用能力，也引导学生用英语传播中国传统文化，写作逻辑清晰，要点明确，学生只要按照提示覆盖全部内容，适当补充细节就能写出合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：以李明的身份给英国笔友写邮件介绍元宵节并发出邀约，必须覆盖全部3个内容要点。首先第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先直接点明元宵节的具体时间，用上题干给出的参考词汇the 15th day of the first lunar month，还可以补充对应的公历大致月份让介绍更真实；第二步接着介绍节日的着装特点，说明大家偏好的服饰风格和背后的吉祥寓意，之后列举元宵节的特色活动，自然把题干给出的guess lantern riddles融入进去，还可以补充吃汤圆、赏灯、家庭聚餐等常见习俗丰富内容；第三步再点明节日的团圆、祈福的核心意义，最后顺理成章过渡到对Amy的邀请，表达希望对方来中国共度佳节的心愿，全程注意时态以一般现在时为主，控制词数满足不少于90的要求，不要出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
写作按照四步规范完成：
1. 要点一（节日时间）：开篇承接给定开头，直接说明元宵节的时间：It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March，清晰准确交代节日属性，符合英文介绍节日的常用表达习惯。
2. 要点二（着装及活动）：先介绍节日着装：说明当天大家会穿鲜亮的传统服饰，比如红色毛衣，补充说明红色在中国文化里代表好运，之后依次列举吃汤圆、观赏花灯、猜灯谜、放烟花、全家共享团圆饭等特色活动，把题干给出的参考词汇自然嵌入内容，场景感更饱满。
3. 要点三（节日意义）：点明节日内核，暖光的花灯和绚烂的烟花承载着人们对明亮顺遂的未来的美好期许，节日核心寓意是阖家团圆，为新一年祈福。
4. 收尾邀约：自然过渡到邀请内容，真诚表达希望Amy来中国一同体验元宵节的心愿，符合邮件的交流语气，收尾简洁得体。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm very excited to receive your email and tell you about the Lantern Festival.
It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month, usually in February or March. On this day, we wear bright, traditional clothes like red sweaters-red stands for good luck. We hope for a lucky new year ahead, and there are lots of fun activities. We eat sweet tangyuan, enjoy colourful lanterns, guess lantern riddles, set off fireworks, and have a big family dinner together. The warm lights and beautiful fireworks carry people's wishes for a bright and hopeful future.
I really hope you can come to China to celebrate it with me. You'll love the happy festival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信写作，传统节日英文表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于应用文写作考点，贴合跨文化交流的真实场景，既考查学生基础的句式搭建、词汇运用能力，也引导学生用英语传播中国传统文化，写作逻辑清晰，要点明确，学生只要按照提示覆盖全部内容，适当补充细节就能写出合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
