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九、(2025·扬州市江都区期末)书面表达。(13分)
你校英语文化节正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”的主题演讲活动，假如你是Simon，请你以“Giving a helping hand”为题，根据提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示问题：
1. Why do you give a helping hand to others? (At least one reason)
2. What do you usually do when someone needs help? (At least two examples)
3. How do you feel?
写作要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
你校英语文化节正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”的主题演讲活动，假如你是Simon，请你以“Giving a helping hand”为题，根据提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示问题：
1. Why do you give a helping hand to others? (At least one reason)
2. What do you usually do when someone needs help? (At least two examples)
3. How do you feel?
写作要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
答案
One possible version:
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
I always try my best to help others. For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
I always try my best to help others. For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“Giving a helping hand”，需围绕三个提示问题展开，且开头、结尾已给出，仅需补充中间内容。解题思路：①先明确帮助他人的原因，可从“传递善意、让世界更美好”等角度切入；②列举2个具体的帮助事例，要贴合生活实际，比如帮同学解难题、帮老人提重物；③表达帮助后的感受，如快乐、自豪，可延伸到对集体/社会的期许。写作时需注意语法正确、上下文连贯，控制字数在100词左右，不得使用真实信息。
【解析】
根据题目要求，补充演讲稿中间内容如下：
1. 说明帮助的原因：Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
2. 列举具体事例：For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
3. 表达感受：Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
确保内容覆盖所有提示，语言流畅，符合演讲稿的正式语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
I always try my best to help others. For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“爱心传递，从我做起”的主题，完整覆盖所有提示要求，事例具体生动，情感真挚自然，语言表达准确流畅，符合八年级学生的英语水平，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“Giving a helping hand”，需围绕三个提示问题展开，且开头、结尾已给出，仅需补充中间内容。解题思路：①先明确帮助他人的原因，可从“传递善意、让世界更美好”等角度切入；②列举2个具体的帮助事例，要贴合生活实际，比如帮同学解难题、帮老人提重物；③表达帮助后的感受，如快乐、自豪，可延伸到对集体/社会的期许。写作时需注意语法正确、上下文连贯，控制字数在100词左右，不得使用真实信息。
【解析】
根据题目要求，补充演讲稿中间内容如下：
1. 说明帮助的原因：Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
2. 列举具体事例：For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
3. 表达感受：Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
确保内容覆盖所有提示，语言流畅，符合演讲稿的正式语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Giving a helping hand
Good afternoon, everybody!
I'm Simon from Class 1, Grade 8. We are talking about what we can do to give a helping hand to others in trouble. I'm glad to share something with you.
Helping others is important because it makes the world a better place. When we help someone, we not only solve their problems but also spread kindness. I believe that small acts of kindness can bring big changes.
I always try my best to help others. For example, when my classmates have difficulty with homework, I patiently explain it to them. Also, if I see elderly persons carrying heavy bags, I will offer to help them. These small actions can make a big difference.
Helping others makes me feel happy and proud. It gives me a sense of responsibility and strengthens my confidence. If everyone lends a helping hand, our school and community will be warmer and more united.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“爱心传递，从我做起”的主题，完整覆盖所有提示要求，事例具体生动，情感真挚自然，语言表达准确流畅，符合八年级学生的英语水平，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
