四、小作文。
下面是 Joe 和他的妹妹 Jane 的信息。请根据表格写一篇小作文,比较一下他们的年龄、身高、体重等,不少于5句话。

下面是 Joe 和他的妹妹 Jane 的信息。请根据表格写一篇小作文,比较一下他们的年龄、身高、体重等,不少于5句话。
Joe and Jane are brother and sister.
Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old. Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41 kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is heavier than his sister. They often play together.
答案
参考范文:
Joe and Jane are brother and sister.
Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old.
Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41 kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is heavier than his sister. They often play together.
Joe and Jane are brother and sister.
Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old.
Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41 kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is heavier than his sister. They often play together.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务:介绍Joe和Jane的身份,对比两人的年龄、身高、体重,且句子不少于5句。解题思路:1. 先点明两人的关系,为内容铺垫;2. 分别陈述两人的年龄,用比较级说明年龄差异;3. 分别陈述身高,用比较级体现身高区别;4. 分别陈述体重,用比较级说明体重差异;5. 补充一句日常活动,丰富内容,确保符合要求。
【解析】先介绍Joe和Jane是兄妹关系,接着分别说明两人的年龄,用“older than”体现年龄差;再分别说明身高,用“shorter than”体现身高差异;然后分别说明体重,用“heavier than”体现体重区别;最后添加两人常一起玩的内容,使作文完整,满足不少于5句话的要求。
【答案】Joe and Jane are brother and sister.
Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old.
Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41 kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is heavier than his sister. They often play together.
【知识点】形容词比较级、英语小作文写作
【点评】范文准确对比了Joe和Jane的各项信息,正确运用了形容词比较级,语句通顺,内容完整,符合小作文的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先介绍Joe和Jane是兄妹关系,接着分别说明两人的年龄,用“older than”体现年龄差;再分别说明身高,用“shorter than”体现身高差异;然后分别说明体重,用“heavier than”体现体重区别;最后添加两人常一起玩的内容,使作文完整,满足不少于5句话的要求。
【答案】Joe and Jane are brother and sister.
Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old.
Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41 kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is heavier than his sister. They often play together.
【知识点】形容词比较级、英语小作文写作
【点评】范文准确对比了Joe和Jane的各项信息,正确运用了形容词比较级,语句通顺,内容完整,符合小作文的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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